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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dreamz on February 17, 2004, 12:43:13 PM

Title: I'm new but tell me what u think
Post by: Dreamz on February 17, 2004, 12:43:13 PM

I spit words from the top of my head//
Verbal AK leaveing you of dead//
I leave u shot up like a dieabitic//
On your back yelling out "HELP MEDIC"//
You trying tbe like me, angry and crude//
But yo ucan't here try walking in my shoes//
Your a dick ryder thats how the symptoms occurred//
HIV, Crabs,Fucking guys that how they transfeerred//
Bring what you got cause I'll take the world on//
I'm who I am fuck the pimps and don wons//
I maybe a rookie, but i can adapt to the situation//
let's call you toy story cause you a simple animaton//
Soft is what i hear when i hear you flow//
I'm still standing, no effect from your gentle blows//
My lyrical skill leaves u standing there hypnotize//
U saying "Damn I wish I was him" when I go walikng by//
The battle is almost over I cause I'm strickly Fundametal//
My verabl fire leaves brunt, better check your dental//
You'z a bicth, getting drag around by the collar//
Man At you Vanillia ice wouldn't even holla//

tell me what you think


 

Title: Re:I'm new but tell me what u think
Post by: M Dogg™ on February 17, 2004, 05:53:22 PM

Better than Bubble About To Burst. Keep up the good work.

Title: Re:I'm new but tell me what u think
Post by: Dreamz on February 17, 2004, 06:47:30 PM

thanks

Title: Re:I'm new but tell me what u think
Post by: TiNmaN on February 17, 2004, 08:41:41 PM

That shit was a cool little peice, keep that wrk up...