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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dreamz on February 17, 2004, 04:21:58 PM

Title: Bubble bout 2 Brust
Post by: Dreamz on February 17, 2004, 04:21:58 PM

The words fill my brain, like water in a ballon//
The words fall like rain, crazy as a Loon//
I'm like a bubble that is a bout to brust//
Honestly i do not know whats worst//
Life before death or life after death//
But before i lay for my eternal rest//
I will past on a message to all//
never let hip hop die or fall//
It is the gule of a younger generantion//
The stongest bond in the complex situations//
My life is about freestyleing with thr crew//
Weather it is about dissing or whats on the news//
I am gonna be "really really hot" like missy//
I will be around loneger than snopp do double gizzy//

just a freestyle

Title: Re:Bubble bout 2 Brust
Post by: M Dogg™ on February 17, 2004, 05:49:57 PM

this work is a little simple for the WCC people, as they love their complex rhymes, but it wasn't bad. Good metaphors, and with a couple of word plays and punches, you could have something.

Title: Re:Bubble bout 2 Brust
Post by: Dreamz on February 17, 2004, 06:46:39 PM

Thanks i was going for simple
it was not suppost to be complex
thanks

Title: Re:Bubble bout 2 Brust
Post by: TiNmaN on February 17, 2004, 08:43:07 PM

Quote from: M Dogg on February 17, 2004, 05:49:57 PM

this work is a little simple for the WCC people, as they love their complex rhymes, but it wasn't bad. Good metaphors, and with a couple of word plays and punches, you could have something.

YOMP