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Title: ++ Rethorichal E-motion ++
Post by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on February 18, 2004, 04:27:00 PM
Why she gotta feel like this? she's had shit before/
Insteada leaving her alone saiten, you dealt her some more/
What for? gotta grudge, or see her as vunerable/
Well ima let down my guard help her out be honourable/
I've felt the ripples of the pain you've revealed/
I've seen people cover it up and hide what they've concieled/
Altho not a pretty site, when you see the out come/
Kids, and Young mums, suicide victims, theirs now none/
How come? a happy home, now slum, they give up early/
Im praying to god to give her some peace, hopefully he heard me/
Shit i've sat in my room alone, hearing nothing but shouting/
Feeling that the tears and heart-ache to my souls not helping/
The stress on her shoulders, the weight making her top heavy/
Emotional parents, their feelings well she's not got many/
None left to spare, she gotta use em to her advantage/
Wisely trust them, try to avoid all of the carnage/
I've felt her pain, i've witnessed blood shedding/
Heaven or hell, shit i dont know where my mums heading/
Coz she's had to do bad to do good, stopped good to stop fate/
If i help her now, will this all work out, or am i too late?/
I'll wait and jump on her band wagon, and give her a free-ride/
Put her on a sloap of happy waves, like she went down a sea-slide/
Give her the chance of love that she was de-nied/
Coz saiten, he-lied, tried taking her soul, and giving her nothing/
I wanna take away all her heart ache, atleast i've done something/
Insteada helping her out first time round, i waited to hear it echo/
Now i've realised i need my mother more than ever, you wont see me let go/
I'd put myself on deathrow, just to see her smile without faking it/
I'd give her free will love, and emotion, insteada her making it/
Giver her something without her doing it her-self/
I love her to death, we argue but i still look out for her health/
I gotta be careful now, she's getting the feeling of neglect again/
Ima make sure she keeps on to a feeling, before nothings left in the end/

^^ just a poem, about my mum.. she going through some shit at the moment.. just thought i'd write up my feelings.. its just me and her at the moment. so its a struggle.. but we're helping each other out!

Title: Re:++ Rethorichal E-motion ++
Post by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on February 24, 2004, 03:30:34 AM
*bump bump* c'mon ya'll peeps aint sleeping.
Title: Re:++ Rethorichal E-motion ++
Post by: kickz_deluxe on February 27, 2004, 12:22:14 AM
wow....ur mum can b lucky to have such a kid
i wish i could say tha same bout ma mum n me...
whatever...u got a big talent to express whut u feel
respect!
Title: Re:++ Rethorichal E-motion ++
Post by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on February 27, 2004, 04:31:46 AM
thanx kicks.. *blushes* we ave our good days bad days... does my head in. thanx for the props! most appreciated.
Title: Re:++ Rethorichal E-motion ++
Post by: bez on February 29, 2004, 12:00:29 PM
Deep as fuck man, loved  it.
Title: Re:++ Rethorichal E-motion ++
Post by: Dreamz on February 29, 2004, 08:23:24 PM
Deep as fuck man, loved  it.
I agree
It was off the hook