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Title: Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on February 22, 2004, 07:18:11 PM

Im seeing the mistakes i made, to correct them now.
Im seeing how hard it is, to correct them how?
Im feeling the rejection that im anticipating for.
Im believing that you were just an angel i saw.

I met you and wanted the taste of the lust.
I felt the withdrawal for it soon to be a must.
I reminised the smell of your scent beveled.
I had faith and heaven and my world was leveled.
You entered as quick as you left? gone with no trace.
I look into my thoughts with the only image of your face.
Staring into space, my hearts pumping the pace.
I wasnt religous but for you i'd say grace.
You could be 'toxic' but i would want the infection.
I could be your patient, and allow you an inspection.
Im one of cupids arrows, firing at you 100% affection.
Your my general, i follow your orders like i'd stand to attenchun.

I didnt want things to turn out as they did.
I wanna come clean and be real, the lies i want rid.
Seemed like i messed up, dont everybody at times.
Im trying to express my sorrow to you thru my ryhmes.
Those eyes just glistened, and became my sun.
Your the rabbit, this a turtle race, you've already one.
Holla' back with an acceptance and friendship.
Coz its another close bond, i dont want to just let slip.

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on February 23, 2004, 07:16:35 AM

thats pretty cool, i guess! ;)

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on February 23, 2004, 10:03:07 AM

Thanx for the feedback win! appreciate it... thanx :p hows the ryhming coming along?

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on February 24, 2004, 10:57:34 AM

great! ;D

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: kickz_deluxe on February 27, 2004, 12:15:13 AM

tight man, i like it very much.
i c u got alota potencial so keep workin
question: when did u start writing?

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on February 27, 2004, 01:23:26 AM

yea, when?
 8)

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on February 27, 2004, 04:28:43 AM

started writing about 5years ago.. thanx for the response to my feedback.

Title: Re:Mourning The Missed - Indecisive
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on February 27, 2004, 08:15:33 AM

dont matter!
5 years,....wow, thats cool!
man, i started writin about 1 year ago,...
where r you from? how old?