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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY on March 02, 2004, 04:05:11 AM
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I guess normal rules apply except no bar limit lol.. i'll just post this up and see what you think.. ima post my verse up coz i dont see nothing wrong with no bar limit.. anyways peace!
votes 4 wins.
3 - 0 KO!
whatever lol..
Checking in.... (goodluck dreams)
ice-tha-cake, i dont like-this-fake, despite-his-wake, he's been a dyke-since-late.
for christ-sake, spit first? why-wait, i'll come runnin, youn gunnin, and you'll die-straight.
the ripples i might-make, or the fact-you cant handle the pressure of the tightness i rap-to.
ya' verses i laugh-to, their a scripture-for-jesta's, your not worth battlin, i dont wanna diss-or-respect-ya.
you could step-up, and you'll get left-fucked, with your tech-crushed, this game is-just-a-hobby.
you comin' "phata" than scoop, ya elbows droop, wont need a costume inna ordition for mr-blobby.
finished-ya you whack-yo, ass licking an fingers-my-ass-yo, pull it out and grip the mic, all i hear is "shit".
quick with wit, rip to bits, spit for shit, this just gets you-gowin, listen to water droppin coz it gets you-flowin.
left-you-knowin, i scared-your-status, but you fake and (p)raised to much like the bra's-on-stratus. (1)
*switch styles*
"dreams" is all you can do, other than real life your a no-hoper.
3-0 without posting up a verse, coz you've got no-voters.
all you do here dawg, is talk to follow up theirs nothing else.
your catergories "heavy" but you just lost "weight" like vanessa felps.
ima delete your existance, exile your ass when i burn ya birth-log.
your gonna be so ashamed, your gonne be unknown like your un-heard-of.
my styles like a calender, your career days i number.
ima storm on your ass and weather it be hot or flop, ima reign down like thunder.
^^ got bored here.. lol check it and reply!
peace out!
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Give my a day or two but will something up
Kinda buzy
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Ok mate.. thats cool!
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Yo Check It...........
I don't need to change styles cause a spit what i know//
You'z a no talnet emcee, with weak poetic flows//
You are good and I gave you props...But now you just blow//
I spit the truth weather it dissing you or spiting what I know//
Spilling my heart though out my rhymes..Fuck if i get tossed//
You are as good as a "DJ" named "Lost" Fuck it i'm the boss//(1)
Why do u get Ideals from X-tina do you think she is Hip-Hop//
Ill "ice the cake" no one will show for your wake when u drop//
Go ahead and tell me my days are numbered I'm ready//
If I lose then fuck it cause I know my flows are steady//
Poetical Indy listen up to what I'm about to say//
Please oh Please just admit you are very very gay//
You are one I respect and one I learn from so was up//
You say you don’t respect me fuck it then I’ll tear you ass up//
My words are thin a thin line between good and greatness//
If I lose so what you are still the one with the true fakeness//
So why would you want to go up against me you have no clue//
I’ll cut out your vocals and let you bleed that’s what I’m gonna do//
(1)A mc that everyone made fun of cause his suxs so bad….
YO Good Battle…………
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nice verse man!
VOTES NEEDED!
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honestly, this was better than i expoected, nice battle actually. Indecisive u kinda surprised me cumin up with simple, yet consistant multies that didn't seem forced. flow was mostly pretty good and also the wordplay wasn't bad either
dreamz, yours was ok, flow was cool, but as for wordplay, punches and rhymes Indy's was just more complex and well thought-out. shit was solid, but kinda simplistic at times. so i'ma give this to indy
VOTE = INDECISIVE
Vote on me vs. M Dogg (http://www.dubcnn.com/connect/index.php?board=12;action=display;threadid=48636)
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1-0 you Indy
I know I need some work on some stuff
But thanks for the input
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thnx for voting kill.. :) yea dreams.. i'll help ya out soon bro! you got msn?
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no i got aol
hit me up at
LostDreamz4@aol.com
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^^^ how about some votes!?
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indy: i think rhymez were better n more interesting but most time i dont felt them very hittin.
dreamz: how i said, a quite simple scheme, i think u could rewrite it, but it was a good answer on indyz battle.
difficult....difficult...i give ma vote for DREAMZ
but peace out! nuttin but a battle!
pleaze vote on me vs. tiNmanN
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Def Indy.
Good shit from both of you but Indy was mo hard hitting and shit.
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Thanx peeps keep this voting going homies! will appreciate it!
Must admit good battle Dreamz homie!
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yo good battle Indy
2-1 you
thanks for all the input
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usually u say "good battle" when the voting's over...Indy u did see kickz gave his vote to dreamz?
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usually u say "good battle" when the voting's over...Indy u did see kickz gave his vote to dreamz?
yea y?
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well i say "good battle" when it's really over, that's all, but lol say it whenever u want
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aight.. votes peeps!
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yo a couple more votes should to it
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FUCKING VOTE AND END THIS FUCKING BATTLE YO!
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Indy took this one.. Pretty consistant... I pretty much agree wit Kill on dis one
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3-1 you
Is it over or we going for 4-5 votes to win
what ever to out come
very nice battle
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First to 4 votes homie.. whoever gets 4 votes winz.
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Dreamz came aight with some simplistic bars and indy threw some multis. dreams just need to throw somethin creative in there, not just 'yea you did this but u still suck', some metaphors or somethin to catch the readers eye.. indy sometimes ya contradict yaself and the multis could be arranged better but other than that its one of the better battle verses ive seen from you.. indy took this one..
Vote - Indy
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you won indy
good battle
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Props to ya dreamz! thanx peeps for voting!