West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Janni on March 03, 2004, 04:32:10 AM
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there's a thin line between all things you see
your friends your dogs and your family
Your street your hood your whole city
Your state your fate and even your country.
brother listen ,please believe in me
there were so many things you couldn't do, hear or see
but one day all things come together and we'll all be free
the whole world united , one big family
there's a thin line between all things you see
between the one who's lost and the one who succeed
but one day there'll be only god judging you
knowing all the things you've done and you'll do
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I know it's not good, but english isn'T the language i speak best
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first of all: i understood whut u wanted to express. i think u should choose another wordz to make it sound more difficult..i dont know how to explain it but i should do tha same with ma writtenz... when i read i thought u wrote it for tupacs hail mary beat. the flow just rembered...
now try to find anuther wordz n it gon be a promisin piece!
by tha way: where u from?
english aint my motherlanguage too...
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hu?
i think it wasnt all good, kickz is right, u should write some complex shit!
but i think thats yo first time, aint it?
so it wasnt all bad too!
yes where r u from?
r u female?
i am.........peace
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I'm german :-\
i only write in german.
This was my first time i did something in english.
Got to practice some more.
@ wincedspell : no i am male
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u r german?
whutz your hometown? r u from berlin???munic???
north, south, east, west???
i know alot bout germany, u can believe me... :'(
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I'm from Bremen
But i'm spendin the most of my free time in Hamburg.
Nothern germany is quite nice. 8)
Do you went to germany ?
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bremen.....aigh
i visited bremen one time...how old are u?
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all right!
peace, man!
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18 years. How old are you ?
What do you think about Bremen?
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oh...im a few years younger
whutever.
i was about five years when i visited bremen so i cant remember that much. anyhow, i just saw any "boring" sightz,like churches n alla that. but tha north of germany iz quite cool. in north u can feel free, itz so much better than germanys south,aint it?
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I think the most people in nothern germany are open minded. 8)
I cant say that about some Politicans from the south.
But southern germany has a nice country side.
Nothern germany is so flat.
But you can have a lot of fun here.
And we have good hip hop in nothern germany.
That's my opinion.But there's good Hiphop in the rest of germany too.
They all have good songs.
There are all kinds of hip hop in germany.
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yes, i think people outta tha south are less openminded than peepz in north cuz therez a lotta traditional stuff, ya know alla that baveria things.
ferris mc is from bremen, aint he?
do u live in tha center or in blocks around tha city?
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aha, all interesting! :)
i would get some mind to but i have no time now!
imma look sooner what u about!
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i have neva been in bremen, or what u talkin bout! but in da south of germany!
thats pretty shitty! :D
cu!
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considering this your first attempt in writing in english it was acceptable. now as far as the open-minded thing goes. the north might be open minded but down here in Hessen (where I live) we are all but not open minded lol.
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lol at kickz and wincedspell tellin him to write some complex shit.. lol
ya dude it was aight, throw some more practice in there
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fuck u up sinister!
whutz wrong with u ? i never said sumthin against u cuz i never wanted to have beef with u! better piss off if u can do nuttin but scoffin around...anyhow i wrote that i know iggota write more complex shit. u should read everythin before u spit your arrogant fuck. noone axed u, did he?!?
go fuck your mother
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lol i can't help it lately every 2nd topic on this board's been funny
fuck u up sinister!
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u should read everythin before u spit your arrogant fuck.
yeh sin, go spit your arrogant fuck elsewhere lol
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hahaha...........funny! ;D
sinister....... what did u mean, i guezz kickz didnt understand what u talked about!
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we should stop spittin our arrogant fucks and fuck us up instead or she has gonna melt us all
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yall is so wrong...yet it feels so right to laugh...lol
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lol really mack if they didn't diss u for every lil thing u say i'd be alot nicer ;D
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lol really mack if they didn't diss u for every lil thing u say i'd be alot nicer ;D
lmao.. lol kabibling amongst ourselves.. lol dont mind me.. those icons and what ya'll saying just make me laugh.. lol dont mind me!
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lol, since wincedspell and kicks are here most topics on this board make me laugh. gotta give props to dem beyatches
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anything else, kill?
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yeh lemme git some large fries wit dat. oh yeh an a coke wit no ice.
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yeh lemme git some large fries wit dat. oh yeh an a coke wit no ice.
shuddup slut, she asked me. u ain't kill in case u ain't noticed
I'ma have a double burger with cheese, a large portion of fries and a sprite, medium
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lol uhhuh geez im so glad i came across these threads lol i cant stop laughing readin through em
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lol really mack if they didn't diss u for every lil thing u say i'd be alot nicer ;D
lmao.. lol kabibling amongst ourselves.. lol dont mind me.. those icons and what ya'll saying just make me laugh.. lol dont mind me!
ummmm...a)whats kabibling?.....b)why did u say "dont mind me" twice.....c)were not "sayin anything".....d) u suck!
oh an kicks get me a cheeseburger...wit no salad mothafucka...an a coke.....large....
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i cant stop to lough bou that everythin :)
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a)whats kabibling?.....
damn and i thought that's just me...
b)why did u say "dont mind me" twice.....
cuz he knows he gettin on everybody's nerves
c)were not "sayin anything".....
yes, we are IMO
d) u suck!
def, fa sho, really tho, word up, hell yeah and tru dat
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c)were not "sayin anything".....
yes we are IMO
oh my bad i thought we was "typin"...i apologize ;D
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c)were not "sayin anything".....
yes we are IMO
oh my bad i thought we was "typin"...i apologize ;D
::) ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) ::)
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and btw
oh my bad i thought we was "typin"...i apologize
I thought:
1) The "Oh" would have to be spelt with a capital O because it's the beginning of a sentence
2) After "my bad" you'd have had to put in a comma
3) The word "I" is always a capital letter
4) It's "I thought we were", not "I thought we was"
5) The present continuous of "to type" is not "typin" but "typing"
6) I'll repeat, the word "I" is always a capital letter
7) There always has to be a full stop to indicate the end of a sentence
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lol @ grammar school
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;D
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"grammer school"
;D
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and btw
oh my bad i thought we was "typin"...i apologize
I thought:
1) The "Oh" would have to be spelt with a capital O because it's the beginning of a sentence
2) After "my bad" you'd have had to put in a comma
3) The word "I" is always a capital letter
4) It's "I thought we were", not "I thought we was"
5) The present continuous of "to type" is not "typin" but "typing"
6) I'll repeat, the word "I" is always a capital letter
7) There always has to be a full stop to indicate the end of a sentence
Thank you Ms Killuminati.After youve finished correcting all my spellings...could you file the documents....an cancel my 3'o clock meetin with that client...an you already know how i like my cofee so i wont patronize you with small details.... ;D
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LMAO. Mack if u do have a secretary i feel sorry for u if u gotta give her all of ur shit to check the grammar fa real
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back to da topic!
i am half german and half russian!
i looked for some support on dis board...
i guezz, its like no1 cares bout who u r, where u r from, and stuff!
its cool....
thanx u all