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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: M Dogg™ on March 04, 2004, 02:06:06 PM
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Fuck it... Battle Royal muthaphukkaz, let the dissing begin... every man for himself
TiNmaN
Indecisive
AutoMatik1
Da Notorious Mack
M Dogg
Dreamz
I Geezy
T.J
no bar limit
deadline... March 12th
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exactly...its official...heres my shit....
Tinman how bout i find a chair an tie you there...
got you cryin tears youll die in fear..
frontin like u hood...
last time u saw "the projects" was a science fair..
i got the lions share..when it comes to respect..
an Indecisive still dreams of becomin a vet...
catch one in ya chest..betta get a gun an a vest..
watch Tin rot...Macks ya Daddy like criss cross..
only time i "cut corners" is choppin limbs off..
this hip hop...it should come wit a sticker...
M Dogg an dreams ina battle,ive never won one quicka...
ill leave this ho unsteady ya shit's prewrote an ready..
watch elite turn on ya like L W O did Eddy...
chuck you in the river watch you float on ya belly..
body hard to find like the remote fa the tele..
lil emcees...i got em runnin scared man...
bring guns? ill break an AUTOMATIK wit my bare hands..
treat ya neck like a door an rip ya throat of its hinges..
im colder than fridges...
my kru so sick..we took the prick an oath wit syringes..
I Geezy dreams to be me...time fa rude awakenin..
cus when it cums to u..i dont know a dude faker man..
leave you freshly maimed..when flame ingest ya frame..
who ya gunna dickride now jigga left the game..?
protect ya dame cus mack run trains like a conductor..
so if ya lame then i cuss ya...
c'mon im beggin you..jus give me ya appartment address..
ya skill the smallest thing about you..apart from ya chest..(scrawny!)
boot ya ass to ya neck, now you yellin shit bro..
this hip hop,musta took a wrong turn on the yellow brick road!..
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damn mack that shit was ill...good luck to anyone who tries to touch that, peace.
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who's judgin now?
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Im back, fully straped wit this heat that I pack, so-" good luck" cause Im hunting anything that's wack\
U show off skillz but u lack, they say u must be on crack,
u run the streets in yo rhymes make us believe that u'z black\
be4 I start wasting time on ya'll let me first bust on Mack\
I don't belong to the middle my presence here is a riddle, cause my shit heavy, so save it, the middle finger u waving- should now go down unless u wanna trade it, I got a billion wayz to serve u don't wait just name it\
U ain't Notorious, Hoe'-U-Loose, just Like u ended be4,
yo loss up in the heavyweights made yo ass pick on me more\
yo skillz are minimal, Cinema is where u feeling at home, none of the shit u spitt is real, your own imaginate world\
hold up, I noticed u recycling personalz from wack ass bitch Maxi. Relax cause Wax now replaced with Anthrax
it's absorbed in the Pads, No mic so there's no Static\
U've spread a rumour u got shot now u name yoself Automatic\
pathetic, cause in the end, u can't pretend U WILL BE DEAD, fake shit u've spread is as BAD as yo "cut and paste" tactic\
When U spit shit nobody understands don't mean u're eclectic\
I piss and shit on Elite, their defeat is prophetic, M Dogg Must stand for Mad Dogg cause battling me is Dislecsic,
dont start it\
I'll take yo jaw apart homie, cause U don't spitt shit u fart it\
right Marty?! I'll sand yo ass back to yo home planet, wit yo space-ship all sparkly\
U know Im drunk from Gin man when Im unloading on Tinman, you hearing Screams fake Mc's loosing their future cause- Im- destroying- "Dreamz"\
and it seamz my bullets givenem' all goodnight kisses,
my weaponry's supreme\
decide how u gonna die, but u can't u -Indecisive, this crisis is due only cause to me it's an adiction\
I shoot u and T.J at once, like Im Starring in "Pulp Fiction"\
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if i was u m i'd set a deadline
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Mack. ill defeat your purpose, erase ya' *birth-log*.
Keep ya tech outta my reach, otherwise you'll be *unheard-of*
Mack, much props on the dude who's ryme you *bit-yours-from*
When you were born, the doc *hit-your-mom*, you fell back an *bit-your-tongue*
Customers fault, the *bitch-got-sprongue*, not ya daddy but coz his *dick-rots-son*
*time-to-stress*, onna scale of 'whack' yours comes *inline-or-less*
you dont *ryhme-the-best* put my *nine-to-ya-vest*, hollow *your-heart*
give it to 'tinman' coz he had a *poor-start*, alerg's dickryding your *saw-arse*
*ethnic-origin* dont mean shit here, gun to *matiks-trap* and *left-the-bitch-swallowin*
go to the *artist* who tried his *hardest* biting dont make you the *smartest* so *take-it-back*
*spit-back* as i *hit-mack* this *bitch-slacks* like an *xxl-jonny* mummy's boy's ill? like *get-well-sonny* (son)
*faggit-fucker* m-dogss whacker than this *matik-suker* i get *caught-up* in *this-moment*
*sniff-solvents* only way m-dogg gets *high-up-the-ranks* this loser *wrestling-fan* dick *nestling-in-hands* as you *eye-up-the-scanks*
when you *fires-their-blanks* you still *trying-for-heavy* but all the others *retired-their-ranks*
see a man this dudes *denying-his-semi*, leave dreams *inna-coma* so he can keep thinking he *made-the-deadline*
talents second to none, so i'll say your *lightweight* and it will *save-its-incline* your signature *im-easy*
more newbie that *i-geezy* or *his-flow* gonna getta *fist-fo'* but bitch didnt really *diss-me*
you have no accuracy your bars *miss-me* id get a betta fight outta ya *sissy*
i've lost interest in *your-bars* before i got to each *beginning*
my lyrical murder will give you *more-scars* sharing *dreams* wit *dreams* when you thought you were *tight-as-fuc*k* sat reminising.
yea *right-as-much* you dont come *forceful* take a session in *ryhme-wit-class* goto college for u its a *course-fool*
*tj* ima shoutout *tj's-runnin* he's about to explode coz giving yourself a *b-j* the only way yo *cummin*
*thats-that* you all *spat-whack* this aint *hip-hop* im watching mdoggs *dick-flop* burnt ya' ass in my toilet, saying your *shits-hot* i'll diss you in 2 syllablul mutli's, well dawg *its-not*
are you ready for my *quickness*
here to serve *business*
these emcee's *delingquant*
this the jurassic period of ryhmers, coz each one of my opponents have no talent thats *existant*
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ok i got kicked out of the home which i have a computer at..... so i'll do this with the short time i have left at the net cafe, gimme a while
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as i look down the list of names i cant help but laugh/
half of you whack fuckers couldnt be hot if i melt your ass!
indecisive, i never liked you, too quick to complain/
the praise you expect from us is strictly insane/
quick to flea under pressure, first one back when its dead/
ur mum was probly dildo fucking when pregnant, and damaged your head/
tinman, i ko'd you, heres your chance for some justice/
claims you underestimated me, prove it, show me answers u fuckwit/
you'll never come first to me, so stick to wearin the silver/ (tin)
i'm known to make shit happen, like when they scarin Matilda/
hmm... da notorious mack, let it be known your glory is whack/
don't ever forget you were biting, and you were boring at that/
the king of hypocrisy, gee it comes from your boss/
sayin fuck elite while in VDK, then runnin across!/
dreamz, who the fuck is this? another shrimp on the barbie/
you shouldnt be in on this, like a crip on a Harley/
fuck you i dont know who u are so u only get 2 lines....... lol
bein a mod has advantages, just ask m dogg, thats what powered him far/
you take plenty cheap shots like pissheads on happy hour at the bar/
so proud of his elite, when he cant contribute any wins/
all he has is runners like drug dealers, and plays the flute when they win/
now to the worthy contenders
he's stuck up like dildo's, thinks he's always running on top of us/
but he never shows up on time, its becoming autonomous/
automatik1, you couldn't spit as a reflex if u came on ur bitch/
stupid coon, he's got the condom on his nose and petrol stains on his dick!/ (petrol sniffer)
last but not least, spoke too soon, you're known to come patchy/
you think he's got the slightest chance, look how slow he attacked me!/
i've broken my wrist twice, and even still i can hit harder/
ur a bad sight... during birth, ur mum was pushing in, screamin to ur dad "KICK FASTER!!"
how can you call this a royal rumble, in 2 seconds you boys'll tumble/
your shit is worse to hear than listening to foil crumble/
im out, times up
NOTE: edited spelling
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ill spit just lemme holla
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i'll spit somthing in a few hours
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Yo this battle has begun……
I’ll take all of you guys out…
Round 1
Indy you are a friend but now you’re a foe//
I’m the hunter that leaves you cause you’re a small ass doe//
I wasted my time on you cause you know you have bitten lines//
I’ll call you 50, all you could rhyme bout is beginning shot all those times//
There no beef between us cause we have the same style//
But for now I’ll let the shots ring and get buck wild//
Round 2
T. J. I don’t ya either so this should be simple//
You’re a black-head so I’ll pop ya and call you “pimple”// (1)
I know nothing about you, so watch your back I’m coming for ya//
Your so bad, when your having sex your girl like “put in any hole duh”//
You couldn’t please any one even if your dick-riden fake ass left dubcc//
I’m gonna surpass you because I have big D-R-E-A-M-Z’S//
Round 3
Automatik1 only gun you ever grab was your gun-nat// (2)
Your so fake you walk in to a gay bar asking “where’s the girls at”//
You walked in there for two reason first cause your not in my class//
The second you told me “It’s been awhile since I had it in the ass”//
Like Em said “go to Sleep Bitch Die mother fucker”//
Never mind Fuck you just lead me to your mother//
Round 4
Yo Tinman my words are water so I’ll let you rust//
Like the rumors of Pamela Lee’s fake tits you’ll bust//
I’m melt you down to nothing and let you sit//
I’ll take it light cause your weak and I know your gonna quit//
I’m the can opener so I’ll tear you up and throw you away//
Believe me after I’m you’ll spit no more for dayz//
Round 5
Da Notorious Mack we know your rhyme aren’t wack//
“You got knocked the fuck out” and I’ll leave you on your back// (3)
You are a wannabe B.I.G. calling your self Notorious//
Forget you Mack Cause I will be one glorious//
Here there is no Affirmative Action I’m take over//
Drop the Notorious and flip the “M” cause game over//
Round 6
I Geezy “mothafuckaz betta watch their ass....”//
Are you gay or are you straight, forget it just let me pass//
This is a diss to the hard rapper that think their tight//
Not their ass….Bring it I’m ready for your fight//
Your softer than a big old belly...your not hood your not hard//
You can kiss the world good bye, cause I’m the best by Far//
Round 7
M Dogg let cut you to pieces and leave you in the gutter//
When this nigga rhymes or talk his St=St-St-Studders//
I give up My time has come to kill you fakes//
I will no matter how many battle it takes//
(1)black head type of pimple
(2)Secena Word for Dick
(3)From the moive FRIDAY
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Macks-feeble, ill beat him so bad he'll be 'dissin himself' like chris rock to 'black-ppl'...
N tinmans ya wack-equal, ur not-that-hard, i'll 'defeat' u so bad i tap my shoes together u already 'lost-ya-heart'...
Indecisive has 'lost-a-part', n my text-is-art hit u wit 'cross' ova combos now u indesicive ova what sex-u-r...
Leave u vexed-n-scarred, im not-wrong, 'Notor'ious couldn be a 'PHAT BITCH' 'flippin' his name on roton 'dot-com'...
Ya got-conned, my fire blisters-fools, M's 'not a muslim' but ill have him 'kissin da ground' like his lil 'sister-do'... (1)
Punches'l chip-ya-tooth, give ya an ass-rapin, M's verses jst 'FILLER'up like this mexican works at 'GAS-STATIONS'...
U passed-fakin? beat me? pleaze-g, it appears Macks got an 'ALERG' on his dick but he already had an 'STD'...
Ya cant see-me, my flow-shines, ya know NOTORIOUS str8 'BULL-shit' like johny depp wit 'NO-EYES'...(2)
This hoes-mine, Dreamz? ya punches played-soft, ur wack id have to 'K.O' da voters to 'see' wat 'Dreamz r Made-Of'...(3)
Ive sprayed-shots, ill break 'rules' now i got-ya-gotti, do i gota kill 'T.J' ina mirror 2 prove my bullets 'rock-ya-body?'...
Ya not-that-hot-see, u all got bad-text, so ima 'toss u dickz out the ring' in da rumble like 'homos' who jst Had-Sex...(4)
Leave all u fags-vexed...
1 M's sis is a lesbian a.k.a carpet licker
2 Once upon a time in mexico depp gets his eyes cut out... n notorious without an I = no-torous or taurus which is the bull star sign... get it.. sorry if im to creative
3. ya dream when u sleep so voters aint feelin dreamz...
4 ring is another word for ass now u undastand bitches now gimme dat title
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stupid coon, he's got the condom on his nose and petrol stains on his dick!/
how da fuck u gonna say sumthin like that? that kinda shit will get ya ass lit the fuck up
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stupid coon, he's got the condom on his nose and petrol stains on his dick!/
how da fuck u gonna say sumthin like that? that kinda shit will get ya ass lit the fuck up
^^ yea i agree, just a slight bit racist.. but whutever i aint trippin. staying outta beef.
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oh T.J are u from sydney kid? coz if u r walk thro redfern sayin that shit pleeze bitch do me a favour
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oh shit, I just got that rock ya body punch, funny ass shit Maxi...TJ, don't be a racist, skinny white kids shouldn't say coon...
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aww shit. Too much drama on this end, but I'm late so I'll take the DQ, whatever, I don't feel like spitting right now. But I'll help judge if that's the case. Peace.
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ok, it's about 4 am pacific time, march 13th worldwide, M Dogg took the DQ and i guess Tinman will be left no other option...I'ma vote on this today
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vito got it
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vito got it
from what i know the judges are me, illicit, sin and now maybe m, it ain't open for votin cause we need to rank em all in order to get one winner
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Ok, let's do this
Mack
Very good job. Like AlerG said, u gave everybody sumthin hard to come close to, the multies were mostly good and the punches were original, not too complicated but always hittin and kinda personal. Flow was tight too, you came aggressive as usual...well done...4.3/5
I TO DA GEEZY
Nice. The rhymes were often a bit simplistic but then again u threw in sum big words. The disses weren't bad overall, sum of them were pretty tight others were less original (dissin mack for bitin, the line u got at indy with)Even tho the bar length varied it was kinda easy to flow it...good verse overall, but i liked others by u way better3.8/5
Indecisive
You been usin multies lately and u ain't even bad at it...sum of the rhymes were quite good, sum of the punches too. But then again you had a couple weaker lines that pulled your verse down, also you could diss mack for sumthin else than bitin, it's just lame as hell by now. The majority of ur lines, sum of the wordplay and the disses to m dogg and the others were tight tho...4.0/5
T.J.
First off, I didn't like that stupid coon line either. Apart from that your punches weren't bad, but not all of them really hard. The flow was good and you had sum multies which mostly worked and it was kinda enjoyable to read......3.7/5
Dreamz
You have improved since ur last battle i peeped, yet ure not on the level the others spit on, because sum of ur shit is kinda simplistic and there's nothing lamer than you-are-gay lines with no wordplay. But overall that wasn't a bad verse, eg i liked how you got at mack and sum of ur punches weren't bad, i think u still got potential...3.1/5
Maxi
damn, that shit was tight too. I'ma compare this verse to Mack's cause you were clearly the best spitters to me: Flow and multies were about equal, Mack's might have been a lil easier to flow, but it's hella close. But as for punches you were even a lil bit better, shit was hard-hittin and pretty elaborate at times. So you get my vote by a lil bit...props...4.4/5
RANKING
1. Maxi
2. Mack
3. Indecisive
4. I 2 DA GEEZY
5. T.J.
6. Dreamz
since Sin & Illicit are gonna judge too it ain't like Maxi got the win, he got 6 points from me, Mack got 5 etc...i guess y'all know tho.......peace
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Mack
shit was hot, loved the scheme. nice punches for everybody involved and humorous/ironic metaphors connected with em. flow was like always off the hook. def worthy for the title. overall 4.5 / 5
I To Da Geezy
well, I noticed the will behind the potential but it jus wasnt converted right imo. wasnt bad, had a few good punches in there but reading it had me lose track often. shoulda been more consistent with it. overall 3.6 / 5
Indecisive
a few lines were wack cuz they seemed forcefully rhymed but also some great punches. flow was overall pretty good, sometimes off but didnt hurt ya verse. def not bad 4 / 5
T.J
except for the racist remark ya shit was hot. I thought it was funny and a bit hard hittin but jus not hard enough but imo still a dope verse. overall 3.8 / 5
Dreamz
this was average imo. not wack but also not competitive enough to prevail against any of the contenders. but the potential's there man. keep doin it.
overall 3 / 5
Maxi
shit was ill. started off hard and ended hard. consistent punchlines, witty meta's. flow was str8 but not better than mack's imo. like always tight man.
overall 4.4 / 5
1. Mack
2. Maxi
3. Indy
4. T.J
5. Dreamz
here's mah vote.
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I can 'sense' im in 3rd place and going down ... lolz. this is kinda new to me tho.. kinda wiki too!
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Aight.. I had a longer explanation but it logged me out but ima do it again.. fukit
Mack - Good multis, not many syllables in one but there were consistent. Personals came with hard punches and thats was tight. You attacked everyone, used some dope metas and personals, overall a pretty dope verse.
4.5 / 5
I to da Geezy - Ya verse was aight, you seem like a keystyler turned battler. Focus on your opponents more and get some personal shit on 'em and punish 'em. You battlin deez foo'z so just clown on 'em. Flow was a lil off, tough to follow sometime and in some bars the flow totally broke off. No really any personals, but you threw some punches in there which were aight.
3.7 - 5
Old Account Plz Delete Indy - Overall an aight verse, the multis are better but they're not perfect. If your gonna separate and/or 'decorate' ya multis its best to have them down, some of yours werent 100%. Your punches were aight, i could sense some personals thrown in there but the punches could have been harder hittin..
4 / 5
TJ - I liked this verse because you were pretty straightforward with everything and still managed to have some lyrical type ish in there which was nice. You came pretty hardcore wit some punches but i guess u gotta do what u gotta do.
4.2 / 5
Dreamz - You had some kind of rhyme scheme down which is a definite improvement to what i usually see and you threw some punches in there which was much mo betta too. You got the basic scheme down, now its just time to throw some hard hittin personals in the blanks.
3.8 / 5
Maxi - Overall a pretty solid verse. The scheme was good cuz when you continued a rhyme for another bar you kept the same multi goin which is crucial for your flow. Everything was pretty straight, you probably could have came with better and more syllable multis but these were good anyway. Punches were good and came with alot of personals.. dope verse.
4.4 / 5
RANK
1. Mack
2. Maxi
3. TJ
4. Indy
5. Dreamz
6. I to da Geezy
Someone count them votes up..
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turns out to be mack vs. maxi really. if M ain't gonna votes then congrats to mack, anyways both of y'all deserve the title 8)
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Mack - 13.3
Maxi - 13.2
Indy - 12
TJ - 11.7
I to da Geezy - 11.1
Dreamz - 9.9
if I got it right that leaves Mack by a notch.
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i thought we just gonna do it due to the ranking, like 1st place = 6 pts, 2nd =5 pts, but it don't even matter. Mack won either way, so...
NEW MIDDLEWEIGHT CHAMP: MACK
congrats
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lol, since when did people take battles to heart.... why did it only just start after i say something?? whatever, trippers
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i live in daceyville...... no difference from redfern actually
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i thought we just gonna do it due to the ranking, like 1st place = 6 pts, 2nd =5 pts, but it don't even matter. Mack won either way, so...
NEW MIDDLEWEIGHT CHAMP: MACK
congrats
ELIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEE TAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOVVVVAAAAAA
ya heard?... ;D
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I thought Maxi had it in my eyes.
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i thought we just gonna do it due to the ranking, like 1st place = 6 pts, 2nd =5 pts, but it don't even matter. Mack won either way, so...
NEW MIDDLEWEIGHT CHAMP: MACK
congrats
ELIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEE TAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOVVVVAAAAAA
ya heard?... ;D
snitch ;D
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ELIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEE TAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOVVVVAAAAAA
ya heard?... ;D
wha wha.. ;)
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who deleted my posts in this thread? faggot ass mods