West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Reef on March 25, 2004, 04:18:21 PM
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Whats up buddy, its been a while, how come we dont kick it no more
yehh i understand, im busy you busy, but remember how it was before?
parties all night, gettin drunk, high and kickin it wit you
rippin it, spittin it, i did all my killin through you
every night i'd call you up, i jus liked chillen wit you
we bonded, closer than most cuz i told you my secrets
please believe it i miss-you
i never dismissed you, always stayed true but hell, that aint the issue
so let me, grab a tissue, pen and a pad
lets try and relight the love that we always had
kick back, lemme produce you in my lines,
reduce audiences to tears, give sight to the blind
to everyone who see's me reminiscing the times
this goes out to my closest homie... my rhymes
aint very long.. Jus an idea i had
peace
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mmm interesting.. who this buddy? i liked it man, lyrically was tight, and it shows some real depth homie!
you still got it.. hell yea you still got it... aha :)
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mmm interesting.. who this buddy? i liked it man, lyrically was tight, and it shows some real depth homie!
you still got it.. hell yea you still got it... aha :)
to everyone who see's me reminiscing the times
this goes out to my closest homie... my rhymes
^^ Thats the buddy im talkin about
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ah i get it.. remember this slow brain i got from schooll.. still using it. lol
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Bump.. lets have some feedback people
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Whats up buddy, its been a while, how come we dont kick it no more
yehh i understand, im busy you busy, but remember how it was before?
parties all night, gettin drunk, high and kickin it wit you
rippin it, spittin it, i did all my killin through you
every night i'd call you up, i jus liked chillen wit you
we bonded, closer than most cuz i told you my secrets
please believe it i miss-you
i never dismissed you, always stayed true but hell, that aint the issue
so let me, grab a tissue, pen and a pad
lets try and relight the love that we always had
kick back, lemme produce you in my lines,
reduce audiences to tears, give sight to the blind
to everyone who see's me reminiscing the times
this goes out to my closest homie... my rhymes
aint very long.. Jus an idea i had
peace
yes, aint bad, da topic and stuff u wanted to express was cool, but i think you should drop more complex rhymez, u know what i mean like........... this "timez-rhymez"-stuff ( i aint a gen) ....but its okay, nice piece tho!
peace
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felt it man, class the way you was talking about rhyming and that. You don't drop anything anymore man.
I do think ya need to drop every so often to get back into the whole Gareefa frame of mind again cos the rhyme was good and all but it cudda been dope if ya get me.
keep dropping maaaayne