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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on March 29, 2004, 02:45:35 PM

Title: Random Spit by Bez
Post by: bez on March 29, 2004, 02:45:35 PM

 don't go fo them slow jamz so fuck twista-an-west,
I'll cut rappers up to shreds or leave blisters-at-best,
Hardcore in this quest, spittin rhymes thru-the-chest,
Commit crimes, poppin ninies, sniffin lines thru-the-breast,
Gettin ma walk on like Xzibit, ma spirit shows-no-fear,
Ya can't even get close to this even tho ma flows-so-near,
Not ready to settle down yet, so hoes-be-clear,
Only got two loves in this life, thats chromes-an-beer,
So ya know I'm makin ma cash, simply uppin-ma-stash,
Earnin money like dey chips so I'm lovin-ma-mash,
Travelin thru life so quick feels like I'm runnin-ta-crash,
Enemies better stay away from me cos I'm cummin-ta-blast,

Who's ready for war?, fuck peace we run-these-streets,
Blue flashing lights, 5 0, you know I gun-these-police,
I'm the daddy of the hood but watch me son-these-beefs,
Recognise cops from before and say I've done-these-chiefs,
But I gotta keep dealin the drugs, keep makin-a-liven,
Makin profits on every deal cos I'm takin-not-given,
I hear about customers that O'd and I'm hatin-da-killin,
But I got fresh clothes to buy so I'm slatin-tha-feelin,
Ya know I gotta rock nice gear, fresh stan's-and-tim's,
When ya ever hear stories of a man that plan's-and-win's?,
Well theres one here, I used to have ma hand's-in-bin's,
Free from pressure and pain, when i used to be band-in-sin's,
Come up in this world, paid ma family back for all-the-pain,
I broke the chain and released my parents from the wall-of-strain,
Now we got big houses, many cars, wheres the gangsta hall-of-fame?,
I ain't leavin this world until I hear all my foes admit defeat and finally call-ma-name........BEEEEEEEEEEEZ

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: Inspectah on March 29, 2004, 03:16:24 PM

That was tight homie.. I felt every line.. you should record this.. i believe this has potential to beat a 50 track.. nah that some serious shit dawg!

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: Reef on March 30, 2004, 07:00:35 AM

Dope rhyme.. Aint seen you spit in a while... u improved alot man

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on March 30, 2004, 09:02:35 AM

Quote from: • Indecisive • on March 29, 2004, 03:16:24 PM

That was tight homie.. I felt every line..

noticed u take da same words in all topix!
but its realy great! i felt it 2!
keep it up!
peace

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: kickz_deluxe on March 30, 2004, 09:10:01 AM

tightass shit

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on March 30, 2004, 10:51:25 AM

did u do adio battlez?
cuz i will listen to yo shit if you do sum!
thats realy cool

peace

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: bez on March 30, 2004, 01:15:33 PM

Thanks everyone.

I never got round to do audio shit, wouldent do myself justice just working on a PC mic and shit.

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: LP on March 30, 2004, 02:39:02 PM

Dope drop mayne,

Your multis are dope, though I think you should move up on more complex ones..  You Should try inner multis too.  I think this would sound nice on audio.

"I broke the chain and released my parents from the wall-of-strain,
Now we got big houses, many cars, wheres the gangsta hall-of-fame?,"

^^Fav line

Keep droppin
Pz

Title: Re:Random Spit by Bez
Post by: bez on March 30, 2004, 03:49:02 PM

Thanks LP.  What you mean by inner multis?  Just not at the end of each bar?