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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on March 30, 2004, 05:38:15 PM
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I used to smoke green to get away from the pain-I-feel,
Hate the things I've seen in the past now I can't explain-whats-real,
Mind blank from constant smoke, just purchase I'd be insane-tah-deal,
I'd always ask God for help but I'd refrain-to-kneel,
Clench my hands together tight and I'd look-up-high,
Speak in a tone that wasn't right, my lifes a fuck-up-why?,
Just a child but didn't know why mommy would duck-an-cry,
Til the day I saw fists fly, from then on I'd look-an-spy,
When I saw my daddy beatin, I'd just stare-and-watch,
Asked God to hold him back but he was rare-ta-stops,
Until mommy was in tears, why didn't you care-ma-pop's,
Pushin mommy til she grabbed her mothers photo she couldn't bare-ta-drop,
Why couldn't you love her for who she is, so beautiful not black-an-blue,
After the beatin you'd grab your coat & pipe and scream I'll be back-at-two,
Please Daddy don't tell me your a crack-head-too,
Mommy weepin echoes crept up the stairs, could you bare it, well this jack-had-too,
I wish I cudda been there for mommy, but this boy-was-cold,
Wish I cudda enduldged you in hugs, had nothin in ma arms but this toy-ta-hold,
Hate the sound of you cryin, but 5 years was how this boy-was-old,
"Tell anyone about this and you'll get it too" was what this boy-was-told,
Didn't get many hours asleep, nightmars kept-me-awake,
Just in time to here daddy arrive at 2, I've slept-since-eight,
Daddy came home to no tears, mommy must of krept-so-late,
Her lipstick left on my forehead, and my respects-so-great,
I turned and headed off to bed and I tried-to-sleep,
Voices and noises would haunt me so I cried-an-weap,
I'd see ma daddy in the morning and I tried-to-speak,
Scared bones in a little body, I was too tired-an-weak,
Daddy just stared at me and he knew he lost her-for-life,
It didn't really matter to me cos in my heart shes there-for-life,
But for him he lost his soul, but a woman he beat, he never cared-to-wife,
Presented her with suicidal oppertunities, she held the knife but never dared-ta-slice,
Daddy dropped me at school, watched him wave-so-sad,
In his heart of hearts he didn't know what made him behave-so-bad,
He found out that eventually that the slaves-go-dad,
He was trying to keep love at bay, loves what we all crave-so-bad,
After school I was waitin for Daddy-in-the-truck,
Many hours I spent standin, but daddy-never-showed-up,
Teacher came and told me that daddy-had-got-drunk,
Tried to explain that he drove into the river and daddys-car-had-sunk,
And thats my story, thats my life, thats me-since-five,
No education, no job, just being whatever I gotta be-to-survive,
But before you critise, you gotta look down the road to see-the-ride,
I lost everything before I had it, now I gotta history-to-deprive...dam!
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Hot shit homeboy, real deep.
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Upping
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Thats got some effort right their.. I liked the way if flowed but all your shit flows tight man.. you've elevated ahellavalot... :)
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cheeerssss for replying, good to know a few ppl will drop opinions and shit now.
Why no member of Elite never drop any replies to any threads I will never understand.
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... haha.. y you say that?
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cheeerssss for replying, good to know a few ppl will drop opinions and shit now.
Why no member of Elite never drop any replies to any threads I will never understand.
that aint just elite not respondin.. thats just us, nah mean we dont speak for the kru.. we just spit for 'em
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cheeerssss for replying, good to know a few ppl will drop opinions and shit now.
Why no member of Elite never drop any replies to any threads I will never understand.
that aint just elite not respondin.. thats just us, nah mean we dont speak for the kru.. we just spit for 'em
Why don't you, mack, m dogg, rod, vito or skillz ever drop replies on rhymes like this.
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I dont cuz i usually save my shit for battles..
Mack dont get really into the emotional side of spittin.. m dogg and rod barely key anyway and if they do they just got somethin to say and leave it like that.. vito occasionally does drop replies in your threads and skillz hasnt been active nor is he on elite anymore..
hopefully that was a sufficient explanation..
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cus i dont feel em....
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cus i dont feel em....
right
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cus i dont feel em....
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dont see whats so hard to believe about that.. yall spit totally opposite..
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cus i dont feel em....
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dont see whats so hard to believe about that.. yall spit totally opposite..
Yes but anytime he drops a rhyme I make an effort to read it and drop an opinion.
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cus i dont feel em....
right
dont see whats so hard to believe about that.. yall spit totally opposite..
Yes but anytime he drops a rhyme I make an effort to read it and drop an opinion.
i dont think u really wanna know his opinion..
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cus i dont feel em....
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dont see whats so hard to believe about that.. yall spit totally opposite..
Yes but anytime he drops a rhyme I make an effort to read it and drop an opinion.
i dont think u really wanna know his opinion..
why, cos its a good rhyme?
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cus i dont feel em....
right
dont see whats so hard to believe about that.. yall spit totally opposite..
Yes but anytime he drops a rhyme I make an effort to read it and drop an opinion.
i dont think u really wanna know his opinion..
why, cos its a good rhyme?
exactly you know its a "good " rhyme...why do u need me to tell you?...u jus told us all what a great rhyme it is....an it seems im not allowed to say i "werent feelin it"....an im not gunna lie to ya so it that simple...cant handle my feedback...i wont give you it....
an dont peep my threads...it means nuttin to me....
"got beef wit radio if i dont play their show...
they wont play my hits,well i dont give a shit so?.."
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cus i dont feel em....
right
dont see whats so hard to believe about that.. yall spit totally opposite..
Yes but anytime he drops a rhyme I make an effort to read it and drop an opinion.
i dont think u really wanna know his opinion..
why, cos its a good rhyme?
exactly you know its a "good " rhyme...why do u need me to tell you?...u jus told us all what a great rhyme it is....an it seems im not allowed to say i "werent feelin it"....an im not gunna lie to ya so it that simple...cant handle my feedback...i wont give you it....
an dont peep my threads...it means nuttin to me....
"got beef wit radio if i dont play their show...
they wont play my hits,well i dont give a shit so?.."
ok
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dope, pleaze make it audio cuz i wanna hear it
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THANX, I USED IT FOR A POEM IN SCHOOL. IT WAS AN ASSIGNMENT. I TOLD THE TEACHER I MADE IT UP MYSELF. LOL.
BY THE WAY STOP CRYING IF PEOPLE DONT GIVE YOU PROPS FOR YOUR SHIT. PERSONALLY I THINK THAT RHYME WASNT TOO BAD FOR A FAG WRITING IT. TAKE THAT AS A COMPLIMENT YOU CRUMPET.
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ur the one just harrassing everyone ur the fag and taking everyone elses work thats why its all gonna comeback on you and ur ass aint gonna get no where in life and ur gonna go to hell AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
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lol
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it was dope like all shit you write, u should start wid audio shit and allota practice wid yo voice..
it might work...
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THANX, I USED IT FOR A POEM IN SCHOOL. IT WAS AN ASSIGNMENT. I TOLD THE TEACHER I MADE IT UP MYSELF. LOL.
BY THE WAY STOP CRYING IF PEOPLE DONT GIVE YOU PROPS FOR YOUR SHIT. PERSONALLY I THINK THAT RHYME WASNT TOO BAD FOR A FAG WRITING IT. TAKE THAT AS A COMPLIMENT YOU CRUMPET.
Jemuel?