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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Tax on April 04, 2004, 06:32:09 AM

Title: bored
Post by: Tax on April 04, 2004, 06:32:09 AM

i jus started wid dis rap shit u can call me an learner
but soon i'll b as good as da mack an terra firma
im on an earner, i gotta make da cash
but 4 now im a burner,so cum on lets gets mashed
cause wen its comes to blazin green i jus cant resist
u know i've lit more lghters than a fuckin arsonist
burnin shit till da shit collapse
all dis shit can happen by listenin 2 my raps
my flow so's sick it could pursuade a man 2 kill
jus like wen me and my boy mack find dat little fucker will.

 

Title: Re:bored
Post by: 'Illicit' on April 06, 2004, 06:05:08 AM

yeh man arrogant shit is hot.  if u really a starter then that was tight dawg.
I jus wouldnta mentioned that u a learner cus nobody wanna hear that. jus spit ur shit, and in time practice using a bit more complexity and wit to it.

peace

Title: Re:bored
Post by: da_notorious_mack on April 06, 2004, 09:31:42 AM

i liked it..specially the last line lol

Title: Re:bored
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on April 12, 2004, 03:40:54 AM

Quote from: Tax on April 04, 2004, 06:32:09 AM

i jus started wid dis rap shit u can call me an learner
but soon i'll b as good as da mack an terra firma
im on an earner, i gotta make da cash
but 4 now im a burner,so cum on lets gets mashed
cause wen its comes to blazin green i jus cant resist
u know i've lit more lghters than a fuckin arsonist
burnin shit till da shit collapse
all dis shit can happen by listenin 2 my raps
my flow so's sick it could pursuade a man 2 kill
jus like wen me and my boy mack find dat little fucker will.

 

cool...