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Title: Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on June 06, 2004, 03:51:17 AM

Sadnizz iz to know that they mourn when you born//
why cant sum parentz accept their own bred corn?//
Rich peeps or poor pees dont care how we grow//
i saw a torn form come out of a bad storm//
this kid is the son of a porn, cant walk, is ever prone//
cuz these "sage" grown-upz used a worn-up condom//
kid's eyez will neva see anything like his parentz dont see his fate//
his ears wont hear anything like his parents dont hear his hate//
they wanna throw dice, cant devise his handicaped condition//
and cant imagine how theyll have to fight for his position//
they look in his eyez and try to use their whole vision//
and they see in his eyez da reflection of their decision!//

Title: Re:Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: kickz_deluxe on June 06, 2004, 04:03:59 AM

wow...........gurl, u fuckin improved!!!  :o
i havent been readin a piece written ba u for a long time, n i see u improved a lot....

keep writin girl !!!

Title: Re:Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on June 06, 2004, 04:32:45 AM

thank you

Title: Re:Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: bez on June 06, 2004, 10:53:54 AM

niccccccce, really liked that.

Title: Re:Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: Kill on June 06, 2004, 02:57:58 PM

sum better lines, sum more stereotypical ones, overall i gotta say uve improved tho

Title: Re:Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on June 07, 2004, 01:54:40 AM

thanx a lot! :)

Title: Re: Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: 'Illicit' on July 03, 2004, 09:54:04 AM

yeh sure did. weiter so.

Title: Re: Whats Sadnizz?
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 03, 2004, 12:22:01 PM

mann, dankeschön...ich werds versuchen...! ;)