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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on June 29, 2004, 06:17:31 AM

Title: Phone Tap
Post by: 'Illicit' on June 29, 2004, 06:17:31 AM
we tappin ya phone, sittin in vans outback o' ya home/
send a savage ta go upstairs and bam on ya do' to ask ya fa blow/
til u ghastly say no and slam shut ya do'/
have the savage plant tha C-4 then ya whole family explodes/
that's how we massacre foes, put a gat to ya dome/
i manage ta throw betta punches than boxing champions know/
i cant leave rappin alone, im mackin these hoes/
in an elaborate tone, im the italian stallion o' flows/
and whoever askin fa mo', ill be happy ta show/
how it is, endin up in a garbage can full o' clothes/
til the cops find ya ass on the road/
and lack of evidence shows that i can make murder look like an accident tho/
extravagant modes, of havin ya go/
fuck wit me im blastin ya whole crew wit money shots like basketball pro's/
flashin ma gold, pay for silence like michael jackson his hoes/
wont turn money to powder cuz i cant stand cash in ma nose/
gimme a bitch i put her ass on the stroll, refuse then git cracked n swolled/
slapped n blown if u dont like it then stagger home/
dont come back mind ya own, or im tappin ya phone/
i want ma money life of a don aka a lavish ass-hole/


lol this aint really supposed to make sense its just somethin i started freestlyin wit, fucked up but took it and wrote shit to it. i was tryin to keep the whole rhyme scheme similar. what yall think.
Title: Re: Phone Tap
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on June 29, 2004, 10:06:17 AM
damn its realy hot for a freestyle i think, it just dont like my favorite style, but how you said this should be a freestyle you wrote just to try keepin the rhymesheme similar, and i think its pretty hot for that..I liked it tho...keep it up, dude!
peace out
Title: Re: Phone Tap
Post by: 10dency on June 29, 2004, 10:05:29 PM
hot!! love the multie use def!...keep that shit comin ...it was especially ill for a free,..peace

-10
Title: Re: Phone Tap
Post by: bez on June 30, 2004, 06:35:07 PM
nice lil peice there man!
Title: Re: Phone Tap
Post by: Inspectah on July 16, 2004, 03:41:43 AM
Hey,

Im liking this piece, i followed the flow all the way thru. It was really tight. I'd like to see more of these pieces!
Nice one homie.