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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dreamz on July 03, 2004, 09:26:59 PM

Title: Problemz I Face
Post by: Dreamz on July 03, 2004, 09:26:59 PM

I gave you my feelings but you shot them down//
Everyday I found this out and began to frown//
You played me like a chess game, strong and with a strategy//
I got punk'd, payback is a bitch, no wait it's tragedy//
I'm gonna do me cause it's what I do best//
Give you the cold shoulder till the day that you confest//
I though you were a good friend But I was way wrong//
Keep your friends close but emenies closer, with that your strong//
I sat there defend you in everyway that I could//
Do the thing differnt never I would//
Really the truth is why did you betray me//
I thought we were friends,I though we could be//
I'm "LOCKED UP" in you, cause I care//
Tred on ground that one else dares//
I got 99 problem and a bitch aint one thats a lie//
Cause you cause all of them,our bond it's untied//
Problemz I Face is should I trust you and screw everyone else//
Cause of this the pain is rushing and so is my pluse//
I stayed tru for you, but your two face and false//
I cant' say I hate you cause it's not my impulse//
One day I will up and leave at this place//
Cause you are the Problems I face//

"You did my friends in, are you watchig out for me, or do you want to hurt more people."

Title: Re: Problemz I Face
Post by: bez on July 04, 2004, 05:14:44 AM

Nice man, simple rhyme scheme and shit but its still cool.  Sounds like a fucked up situation tho.

Title: Re: Problemz I Face
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 04, 2004, 06:51:00 AM

Quote from: Dream/\Keeper on July 03, 2004, 09:26:59 PM

I got 99 problem and a bitch aint one thats a lie//
Cause you cause all of them,our bond it's untied//
Problemz I Face is should I trust you and screw everyone else//
Cause of this the pain is rusjing and so is my pluse//
I stayed tru for you, but your two face and false//
I cant' said I hate you cause it's not my impulse//
One day I will up and leave at this place//
Cause you are theg problems I face//

Quote

yea this rhymestucture iz simple, but it doesnt prevent it from being deep n soundin that well....
n sad, damn i can understánd what you feel like...

Title: Re: Problemz I Face
Post by: Dreamz on July 04, 2004, 08:54:32 PM

yo thanks props

Title: Re: Problemz I Face
Post by: kickz_deluxe on July 05, 2004, 09:32:24 AM

yeah, man, i just can repeat whut i already said once before.......u improved a LOT! damn, i know u since u been on this fuckin board man and....u can be proud !

peace

Title: Re: Problemz I Face
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 05, 2004, 11:05:15 AM

Word @ kickz

Title: Re: Problemz I Face
Post by: Dreamz on July 05, 2004, 09:04:22 PM

yo thankz to all
thanks for saying I imporved
props