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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: xOvErDozEx on July 05, 2004, 12:14:30 AM

Title: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: xOvErDozEx on July 05, 2004, 12:14:30 AM

Jabbing...
Klu~Matiks New~Faggot Style Is Too~Static, Your Gonna Lose~Maggot
Im Too~Tragic For You Like Rude~Habits Mind Your Manners Dude~Slamit
First Of All In Your Flow On My Boi Eze You Cant Be Dissin~Me
I Would Hope Your Not As Bad As Battling As You Are At Kissin~BREE
So Listen~B Heres The Shit Im Rippin~G Watch The Verse Make HISTORY

Check ThiS ShiT...
People Roleplaying My Life Like The Jesus Imitation~Of~Birth
They Say It Took God 7 Days To For The Creation~Of~Earth
Call Me The Father Coz My Creations Will Forever~Reign
You Trying To Diss On Me You'll Definately Endeavor~Pain
The First Of The Seven~Days Was Overdoze's Making~Of~Mitch
Created To Be Forever Challenging But Also Hating~A~Bitch
Having Satan~Equipped To Help Him Flow - Develope~His~Best
Im Telling~The~Test For Klu Matik Theres No Telling~Of~Death
The Second Day I Developed A Method For Taking~You~Down
Placing~A~Frown Upon Your Face Without Even Making~A~Sound
The Arrival Of The Third Day Was The Dawn~Of~Destruction
Klus Getting Whacker... In The Meantime A Spawn~Of~Corruption
With A Yawn~Of~Erruption You Know That I Spit Volcanical~Acid
So Stand Back And Watch Closely No Need To Panic~I'm~Blastin
Fourth Day Comes In, I Soon Start To Develope~Expectations
Young Mitch's Skills Are Multiplying Like Cellular~Respiration
Incoming Of The Fifth Is Klu MatiK's First Gradual~Graduation
Little Youngsta Could Soon Roll Up Wit Some Happy~Collaborations
Sixth Is The Day To Cope~With, Hoping, For Things To Boast~With
You Could Be Duckin From Frozen Ropes And Holding In Frozen~Oceans
The Seventh Is The Day The Arisen Youngsta Falls Back~To~The~Ditch
Hes Blasted~To~Bits Tha Soon-Ta-Be Decappitated Faggot~Is~Mitch
The Seventh Day Is Today So You Went From Arisen~To~Hell
Locked Up In The Time Capsul Itself Like A Prisoner~Cell

Finsher...
Im Bombing Faggots Coast To Coast Then From Iraq~To~Iran
Sending Pilots And Kamikazees Like Bombing Packs~On~Japan
Flack Jacket~For~Man Who Lives And Dies For The Love~Of~Rap
The Blood~And~Gats Are Ferociously Tappin A Hundred~Cats
With No Running~Back Coz This Apocolypse Searchin~For~Death
Put A Needle To Ya Vein So The Blood Will Squirt~From~Ya~Neck





It Is A Spit I Thought Was One Of My Better Ones Against KlU MatIk On Another Site Before it Closed Down But I saved It Coz I Thought It Was On Of My Best

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: kickz_deluxe on July 06, 2004, 09:17:21 AM

technically your text was very good, i think, very good. but i didnt like your opinion, your position, u expressed with your lyrics. but thatz everybodys own business, aint it?!
keep workin man
peace

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: supermanstick on July 06, 2004, 01:38:34 PM

Decent, try to mix up your rhyme scheme a little more.  But the subject was good tho.

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: xOvErDozEx on July 06, 2004, 07:23:02 PM

thanx im trying to improve with this flow so i tried to stick with a topic on that battle

i wanna up my vocab but its hard

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: bez on July 08, 2004, 04:24:48 PM

very nice piece.

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: skeetabugg314 on July 08, 2004, 06:51:02 PM

your games on point...stay focused you got potenitial....I feel it cause I think your styles kinda of like mine

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: xOvErDozEx on July 08, 2004, 11:54:23 PM

thanx for the feed anything helps

i just wanna elevate

Title: Re: ChecK ThiS AnD DroP SuM feeD
Post by: da_notorious_mack on July 09, 2004, 06:20:18 AM

spit something else...i dont rate old battle verses..thats suspect...