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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dreamz on July 16, 2004, 09:57:22 AM

Title: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: Dreamz on July 16, 2004, 09:57:22 AM

The winds of change dance in our lives//
Like northern lights chasing their own shadows in the sky//
We can see better ways and easier days//
We know there must be a more honorable and humane way//
It is for us to pick the flower in our minds//
It is matter of standing up and not just standing behind//

Hunted. Chased. Cornered. Finally, Weak//
Killed like animals! Won’t someone speak//
Here first! The land is theirs//
Used, not owned, but borrowed from heirs//
Here first, but alas, also first to die//
Call them thieves; An easy lie//
Not used to whites. Afraid even//
Quite unlike their Mikmaq brethren//
Just surviving, a daily task//
Were they really civilized? You dare ask//
One of the last rushes forth to speak//
Holding aloft a branch, where three limbs meet//
If Mamaq and whites can live together//
Why are we, the third limb, left to wither//
Hunt them. Kill them. They are in our way//
Spread word of our ill deeds? We say nay//
We are discoverers. Conquerers even//
Guns against arrows? No matter. They’re heathen//
Now all gone. Or so you say//
No living beothuck, no beothuck problem eh//
Seneca and Mohawk, mixing blood//
If truth be known, wait for the flood//
Hunted. Chased. Cornered. Finally, weak//
Are they all dead?? Who dares speak//

Title: Re: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 17, 2004, 05:42:23 AM

Quote from: Dream/\Keeper on July 16, 2004, 09:57:22 AM

The winds of change dance in our lives//

this line sounded first like written by Skorpions llol

Quote from: Dream/\Keeper on July 16, 2004, 09:57:22 AM

Hunted. Chased. Cornered. Finally, weak//
Are they all dead?? Who dares speak//

these linez r cool, n overall a interestin structure...keep it up
peace

Title: Re: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: 'Illicit' on July 17, 2004, 06:31:16 AM

Quote

this line sounded first like written by Skorpions llol

its the final countdown da da da da lol

anyway, for a poem it was a nice piece.

Title: Re: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: Dreamz on July 17, 2004, 09:25:00 PM

yo props thanks

Title: Re: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 18, 2004, 01:46:40 AM

Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 17, 2004, 06:31:16 AM

Quote

this line sounded first like written by Skorpions llol

its the final countdown da da da da lol

lol exact

Title: Re: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: RXL on July 22, 2004, 08:23:16 AM

Tite piece.

Title: Re: ~Change.....A Native Piont of View~
Post by: bez on July 22, 2004, 11:45:25 AM

I thought it was tight, flowed nice and was well wrote.  Good shit.