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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: rafsta on November 09, 2004, 09:44:26 AM

Title: my opinion
Post by: rafsta on November 09, 2004, 09:44:26 AM

this is no hatin bullshit its the truth


This rhyme goin out to cliche bullshit america,
the world is lookin down on youz all coz of media,
what the fuck are the ladies you got thinkin ?
dressin like skank hoes got the gentlemen missin,
MTV is a big cause of havoc, brainwashing kids is a habit,
voteing bush in now thats another big no no,
why not go the lesser of demons why go the hoes hoe?
simple facts state you all in a bad direction,
terminator two done did won the election,
feel shame when you travel all because of tv
when i know theyres decent ppl livin there freely,
95% of youz are all bustaz,
5% misrepresented by suckas,
good luck in your next four years to come,
you wont buy your freedom when shit is undone.


FUCK CLICHE U.S.A

(im referring to tv and representation, this is an outsiders view of america, you goto change the shit.)

M.T.V MUST DIE !!!

Title: Re: my opinion
Post by: da_notorious_mack on November 09, 2004, 02:46:24 PM

95% of youz are all bustaz,
5% misrepresented by suckas,


i liked dat shit....it was pretty cool....content was nice..u  jus need to improve technically....but u didnt seem 2 have a problem sayin what u had in ya mind in a clear way...jus add sum multis an metas..an youll be on ya way..lol


stay up

Title: Re: my opinion
Post by: bez on November 11, 2004, 02:15:55 PM

GOod shit mate, liked it.

Title: Re: my opinion
Post by: Kill on November 12, 2004, 11:10:13 AM

u've improved :D

Title: Re: my opinion
Post by: rafsta on November 16, 2004, 07:14:51 AM

thanks for the positive feedback !