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Title: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on November 10, 2004, 01:45:57 PM
This is just a song a wrote in class a while ago, but never got the chance to record...Peep:

I'm crazy...and plus lately I'm lazy
Daily...nothing phases me, God faces me
Every single night right before I fall asleep
Tellin' me that I'm doomed, in my room, I don't stop to think
Continue practicin' my Satanic lifestyle
Broken on the inside, the outside- a slight smile
I write while I shed tears on the page
And when I record this I will probably be blazed
Amazed...Cuz my brain don't get it
My heart wants pureness, but I won't let it
Demented? Maybe, entrance- baby, exit- insanely
Mainly I am just spillin'...my ink on the page
And my rage is just buildin'...I desperately need change
I hope I shape up a little bit sooner
Cuz if not I'm doomed...Me and my future.

(Chorus) 2X
DOOMED...I don't even fit here
DOOMED...Spillin guts as I sit here
DOOMED...I serve no purpose
Am I weak or am I strong? My soul is just hurtin'

I have a pattern in mind
Which I wish to work out in words that will not fit the spaces nor match the design
Doomed...Cuz I don't know what's happenin'
Life moves to fast when you're rappin' and you're passionate
Ashin' it...The blunt that I'm smokin'
This can' t be real, I am so hopeless
I focus, but that is just a dream
Cuz I am so outta' place in outer space, so Natalie
Please don't let me go down this path
You were the lift I needed, and I've seen it, but now I'm back
For repair time of lover make room
Cuz from a birdseye point of view I look doomed

(Chorus)

Title: Re: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: *Jamal* on November 12, 2004, 03:21:12 AM
You should record it... seems like it would be dope...
Title: Re: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: bez on November 12, 2004, 03:04:42 PM
It was aight man, be better recorded of course.

Still cool though.
Title: Re: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on November 12, 2004, 07:49:05 PM
Yea, I didn't think it was good enough to record... :-X
Title: Re: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: *Jamal* on November 12, 2004, 07:56:13 PM
Quote from: Now_I_Know on November 12, 2004, 07:49:05 PM
Yea, I didn't think it was good enough to record... :-X

That chorus kinda reminds me of Blade's  "Rescue Me"
Title: Re: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on November 12, 2004, 08:23:18 PM
Quote from: *Jamal* on November 12, 2004, 07:56:13 PM
Quote from: Now_I_Know on November 12, 2004, 07:49:05 PM
Yea, I didn't think it was good enough to record... :-X

That chorus kinda reminds me of Blade's  "Rescue Me"


Well, I wrote that a long time before I heard Blade's song...LOL
Title: Re: Doomed (Full unrecorded song)
Post by: Kill on November 15, 2004, 11:13:54 AM
not bad, could be tight recorded, looks quite flowable