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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dreamz on January 05, 2005, 08:46:26 PM

Title: Are you just a Dream???FEEDBACK
Post by: Dreamz on January 05, 2005, 08:46:26 PM

Are you just thoughts place in my head//
Are you the reason all my feeling are not dead//
How come we're only together when my eye are shut//
How come when your mention i get a nervous gut//
Why is it we hardly ever talk, but i think bout you all the time//
Why is it I wish and pray everyday that you will be mine//
Is it just my emotions runnin wild, that basiclly what it seems//
Is it cause your real or are you just a dream?//

Asking myself these questoins, only to find a blank//
Your a perfect 10, but to you what do I rank//
Will I just be your friend or will there be more//
Your unknown to me and I just want to explore//
From head to toe, from your heart to your mind//
I want to be open but my emotions keep me confined//
They keep me in the darkness of the shadows//
But your the light which shynes from the meadows//
So here I told you the ways about you I feel//
So are you just a dream or are you something real?//
   








 

Title: Re: Are you just a Dream???
Post by: thatboi on January 08, 2005, 08:09:15 AM

It was ok but you definitly gotta add some more to that fo sho.

Title: Re: Are you just a Dream???
Post by: bez on January 08, 2005, 12:29:44 PM

Sweet and very short. 

Title: Re: Are you just a Dream???
Post by: Dreamz on January 22, 2005, 09:12:20 PM

FEEDBACK

Title: Re: Are you just a Dream???
Post by: boycriedwolf619 on January 23, 2005, 06:37:12 AM

nice man that was deep

Title: Re: Are you just a Dream???
Post by: Dreamz on January 23, 2005, 08:04:14 PM

yo thanks

Title: Re: Are you just a Dream???FEEDBACK
Post by: hope glimmers on January 24, 2005, 09:37:21 AM

keep em comin dream, your posts are always good, dont give up.. good luck