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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dreamz on March 20, 2005, 07:46:33 PM
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I have been through heaven and hell, suffered with pain//
I cut myself, bleeding blood, my mind drives me insane//
Nine time I cut to see what happen, cut so deep I get numb//
People ask me tons of question I answer to them none//
I sit in pools of blood thinkin have I lost my mind//
Wishin for the creator to take me, prayin for it to be my time//
You told me that you will take something that only one preson can take//
but i'm sorry it's gone, I'm being truthfull not fake//
I sit here and type thoughts, words and rhymes//
I cut to bleed and numb the pain, have I lost my mind//
I can see it in the stars
I can see it in the stars
You can read it in my bars
I can see it in the stars
I was wasting your time but still you care'd//
Were you a dream or were you real I don't even dare//
I caus'd you pains to point that I bleed my tears//
But thoughts of you brought me up kill'd my fears//
I can hear your voice but realize I'm alone//
I stare to the stars with my feeling cement'd in stone//
You know where my heart is, all with you nuttin left behind//
I can feel it in the air, the facts I say are you, but I've lost my mind//
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yeah she does........ call me and we'll talk or something
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not bad...
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the 4 line hook was inspired by
"Feel it in the air" by beanie sigel
that song hot i'm gonna rewrite this sumtime to go the beat
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Not bad not bad.
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i'll have the final key like friday so check back and let me know
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whatever happened to the final key?
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[size=08pt]Not bad at all. I felt a lot of emotion in this 1 & though the rhyming wasn't too complex/complicated, the realness made up for it in my eyez. Keep expressin' yourself, dawg. I can relate; 8.3/10 - Peace*[/size]
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felt it!