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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: DiSSENT on May 17, 2005, 03:35:11 PM

Title: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: DiSSENT on May 17, 2005, 03:35:11 PM
[size=09pt]When I say my shit's 'Uncut', I don't mean un-'Circumsized'
it means if you DiSS me, it's risky cuz I'll really Hurt Your Pride
my pen's the sword I use to slay foo's like Joker in Batman
I think 'bout Rap so much, you can read verses in my Catscans
English or Espanol? I been skilled w/ Words From The Start
like 'Aliens', these paragraphs get hot & 'Burst Out My Heart'
this is why I'll Forever Shine & grind; I think of Clever Lines
w/ this Deadly Mind of mine, I plan things way Ahead Of Time
I'll separate your Head From Spine if you step up Against Me
it's just too tempting cuz it gives me a chance to Vent, See
I'm the M.C. that'll put L.A. back on the Map, Slash, Atlas
this is far from an act, my impact'll straight Snap Earth's Axis
with or without 'practice', I got 'game' like a damn 'Arcade'
'can't be seen' like 'Bin Laden', but I'm not in some 'Dark Cave'
some may say I'm Stark-Raving mad, but I'm Glad Though
long as I'm Acknowledged, go ahead & call me an Asshole*[/size]
Title: Re: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: K0NfUzIoN on May 17, 2005, 08:29:43 PM
Also a great verse.. flowed well and hit hard
Title: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: DiSSENT on May 18, 2005, 07:15:12 AM
Also a great verse.. flowed well and hit hard

[size=09pt]Thanks for not sleepin' on my shit, homie. I'm grateful that I got some skilled MC's reading my work & letting me know what's up. Bumpin' This*[/size]
Title: Re: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: ainsy on May 19, 2005, 03:16:01 PM
really good piece, i aint been on here for ages n its good to see some guys wit nice rhymes in here, keep em cumin (Y)
Title: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: DiSSENT on May 20, 2005, 09:26:59 AM
really good piece, i aint been on here for ages n its good to see some guys wit nice rhymes in here, keep em cumin (Y)

I appreciate the props, homie. I'll keep 'em comin' if people keep reading - Uppin'*
Title: Re: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: bez on May 20, 2005, 10:06:36 AM
Fucking dope mate, love your drops.  Keep em coming.
Title: "Acknowledge" (Don't Sleep)
Post by: DiSSENT on May 20, 2005, 10:50:08 AM
Fucking dope mate, love your drops.  Keep em coming.

Much respect, dawg. I know I tend to repeat myself regularly, but thanks for the feedback..it's always helpful & appreciated. Bumpin' This*