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Title: fucked up love
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on June 23, 2005, 01:12:55 AM
i cant pluck up my courage to look into your eyez
i cant interrogate my knowledge to give maself advice
my entire world i built so strong is burnin up in fire
Id hate ya but like an annoyin song s sayin its only desire
i used to think id leave you, throw you away n cross you out
but i can forgive you, say its okay n laugh so loud
its like nuthins on my mind, at the same time ive to say a lot
this time im able to trust n forgive, but next time to kill-I swear to God!
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: Mr. O on July 05, 2005, 12:44:03 PM
this is cool poem type..i liked the second line..
kinda offended when you swear to god...i don't swear..but since it's ya thing..it's kew..
keep it up
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 05, 2005, 01:13:11 PM
thanx,man, can understand whatcha mean with da swear to god, but its just the expression of my feelings i had in this situation, ya know...maybe i wouldnt really swaer in real life...thanx for yo feedback
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 02:45:11 AM
yeh the second line was ill, keep it up

Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 08, 2005, 09:36:09 AM
thanx man, i appreciate it!

"give me a pen, a pad n a mic n im free.."  ;)
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on July 09, 2005, 08:35:08 AM
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D

tja es geschehen noch zeichen und wunder  ;)
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: Miss NWA Whoorider on August 18, 2005, 01:51:45 PM
see i can talk gibberish too
ajsjsjdhdhdh:)

hi illicit and the poem was nice man
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: *Z* - The Queen of Dubcc on August 25, 2005, 04:41:11 AM
heyyy its german  :)

but thnx for feedback
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: Kill on August 25, 2005, 11:38:40 AM
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D

dich gibts auch noch? ich werde nostalgisch hier...
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: 'Illicit' on August 26, 2005, 11:26:08 AM
Quote from: Sonic Kill on August 25, 2005, 11:38:40 AM
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 11:55:39 AM
das mich jemand mal zitiert hätt ich auch nie gedacht  ;D

dich gibts auch noch? ich werde nostalgisch hier...

ab und an schon. kann die finger eben doch nicht vom board lassen  8)
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: hope glimmers on August 30, 2005, 03:26:36 PM
its real.. its deep.. its a good piece in my opinion... i really like how you worded it all.. turned out good.
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: G funker on September 04, 2005, 01:54:05 AM
Quote from: 'Illicit' on July 08, 2005, 02:45:11 AM
yeh the second line was ill, keep it up


  ;)
Title: Re: fucked up love
Post by: g unot on September 09, 2005, 12:05:34 PM
 :-*