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Title: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 12:14:44 PM
Aight, ya'll gotta peep this and tell me what ya'll think, PLEASE PLAESE PLEASE


Aight, I recently started producing beats (for the fuck of it, not anything serious)...Well, not a lot of people have heard my beats...I'm not that good or anything, so I make beats when I'm bored...I've made around 10 beats up to now...All within 2 months...Now I just randomly picked snippets from some of my beats which I produced, and put it into a Mix...Check out my first beat mix, and please drop some feedback...Even if u think it sucks real bad (which would be likely), tell me what u think and how I can expand as a producer...



CLICK HERE FOR MP3! (http://artists.hubba.com/phiasko/albums/3092/sccitmix/download.mp3)

Click HERE for M3U (Hi-Fi)!! (http://artists.hubba.com/phiasko/albums/3092/sccitmix/play.m3u)



Thanks ya'll...I appreciat some feedback, since this is my first mix with my first few beats, PeACe...    
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: .:R-E-L:. on August 17, 2002, 12:19:33 PM
its aiight...aint feelin it 2 much..but how u mixed them was tite
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Don Seer on August 17, 2002, 12:21:25 PM
they aint too bad.

what ya using?
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Instant_Killa on August 17, 2002, 12:25:02 PM
i was not feeling any beat, but nice effort

peace
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 12:27:43 PM
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they aint too bad.

what ya using?




I use fruity loops...That explains the whackness...
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 12:30:06 PM
LoL, Overseer...Why did u move this topic too tha lab? Because u hate me right...Thats BS...If u move my shit u have too move I-Bo's shit too...My shit deserves too stay in the general more than Ibo's, because I live on the west coast, and I make West Coast beats...It fits in the West Coast Connection board...U cant just move mine because u hate me...whatever...LOL


Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: infinite59 on August 17, 2002, 12:40:58 PM
Tight as fuck for friuty loops man..... you got talent.
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Maestro Minded on August 17, 2002, 12:41:00 PM
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LoL, Overseer...Why did u move this topic too tha lab? Because u hate me right...Thats BS...If u move my shit u have too move I-Bo's shit too...My shit deserves too stay in the general more than Ibo's, because I live on the west coast, and I make West Coast beats...It fits in the West Coast Connection board...U cant just move mine because u hate me...whatever...LOL


you live in westcoast, yes.. but my beats are more westcoast than yours...your beats does not deserves to stay in the main setion more than mine


im downloading
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 12:43:39 PM
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you live in westcoast, yes.. but my beats are more westcoast than yours...your beats does not deserves to stay in the main setion more than mine


im downloading




that doesnt make sense...Crooked I lives in the west coast, but he sounds East Coast...Does that mean he deserves too be discussed in the Outband Connection Boards more than Ja Rule?
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Maestro Minded on August 17, 2002, 12:46:50 PM
pretty good beat... some of them above avreage..

the beats i felt the most are: 2,3,5


keep doing your thang
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 12:49:41 PM
R-E-L - Thanks, next times drop a little more criticism

Psy - Thanks for the feedback...

Apoocalyps - If ure gunna reply, I'm gunna expect a explanation for why you're not feeling it...Maybe be a little more constructive with the criticism

Infinite - Thanks a lot homie...U gave me the correct criticism on AIM...I appreciate that...PeAcE
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Maestro Minded on August 17, 2002, 12:49:55 PM
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that doesnt make sense...Crooked I lives in the west coast, but he sounds East Coast...Does that mean he deserves too be discussed in the Outband Connection Boards more than Ja Rule?


im referring to your statement..

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...My shit deserves too stay in the general more than Ibo's, because I live on the west coast, and I make West Coast beats...



and last time i checked, Crooked didnt sound "eastcoast" ... theres alotta lyricists in westcoast too.. (and im not rtalking about snoop)
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 12:53:24 PM
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pretty good beat... some of them above avreage..

the beats i felt the most are: 2,3,5


keep doing your thang


Thanks


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and last time i checked, Crooked didnt sound "eastcoast" ... theres alotta lyricists in westcoast too.. (and im not rtalking about snoop)



Crooked I was just an example...u know what I'm saying...If somone lives on the West Coast, there is no arguing they are West Coast...
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Don Seer on August 17, 2002, 01:20:49 PM
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I use fruity loops...That explains the whackness...


ahhh right.... but u can use fruity like a sampler. chop up your own instruments etc, wont sound so midi/clean then.

e.g.

http://www.psycreate.demon.co.uk/BC-daz.mp3

Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 01:24:28 PM
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ahhh right.... but u can use fruity like a sampler. chop up your own instruments etc, wont sound so midi/clean then. just use

e.g.

http://www.psycreate.demon.co.uk/BC-daz.mp3





Word...I dont use only Fruiy Loop Samples...I use a lot of other samples, like from Findsounds.com etc...Thanks though...
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: ROCCY on August 17, 2002, 03:05:34 PM
number 2, 3 is my favorite which were gonna do a collabo on, 4 is coo, 6 is tite, over i would give u a 4.5 out of 5, its pretty good dogg make another one. pz
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 17, 2002, 03:20:04 PM
Yo, who wants too do a beat callabo with me? I really wanna do one...Where I lace the drums, and somone laces the intruments...Anyone up for it?
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Primo on August 17, 2002, 05:15:20 PM
not bad ..I can never get anything good outta fruity loops .....Peace
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Tha_Reverend on August 17, 2002, 06:47:36 PM
they were aight.  for a beginer.  keep it up I guess.  If that's your thang.





-Tha Rev
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: ZILLA THA GOODFELLA on August 17, 2002, 09:11:41 PM
Yo They are real tite 4 Acid Pro.....I think I already told U.....

And Yo sccit.....Hit me up about dat Beat Collab.....




Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: jay on August 18, 2002, 03:25:18 AM
u shouldn t use the sample from lookin at me soo often,but your beats are pretty cool so far.
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 19, 2002, 11:07:26 AM
aight, thanks...anyone else care too drop some feedback...which ones they liked and which they didnt?
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Trauma-san on August 19, 2002, 06:55:00 PM
I like the first one, but not the distorted sound that keeps going over and over

I like the second one, it just needs a better bassline, that sounds more like bass.

The third one is dope as hell, LOL.  You've got a good ear for melody, I think.  If you had a better bassline to work with though, it'd do miracles.  It probably needs to be mixed a little better, too.  You might wanna hook up with The Rev. online and have him play bass that you can mix in to it, if he's down for it.

The fourth one is pretty original, too, LOL.  Man, you're actually halfway decent, ha, with a little practice, you'll probably be alright.  It sounds like some cash money stuff, LOL.

The fifth one is good too, just sounds a little hollow, because again the bassline doesn't sound real, it sounds too synthetic.  But pretty creative for what you have.  

The sixth one is pretty creative, too.  I think you've got potential, if you had a better Synth to mess with, you'd be better off, though.  Some of the sounds just sound so fake, it's hard to do anything with them.  You need a kit with better drums, and better bass, definately.

The seventh is nice, the drums are good.  

The eigth one has a good melody, too.  
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 19, 2002, 07:09:02 PM
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I like the first one, but not the distorted sound that keeps going over and over

I like the second one, it just needs a better bassline, that sounds more like bass.

The third one is dope as hell, LOL.  You've got a good ear for melody, I think.  If you had a better bassline to work with though, it'd do miracles.  It probably needs to be mixed a little better, too.  You might wanna hook up with The Rev. online and have him play bass that you can mix in to it, if he's down for it.

The fourth one is pretty original, too, LOL.  Man, you're actually halfway decent, ha, with a little practice, you'll probably be alright.  It sounds like some cash money stuff, LOL.

The fifth one is good too, just sounds a little hollow, because again the bassline doesn't sound real, it sounds too synthetic.  But pretty creative for what you have.  

The sixth one is pretty creative, too.  I think you've got potential, if you had a better Synth to mess with, you'd be better off, though.  Some of the sounds just sound so fake, it's hard to do anything with them.  You need a kit with better drums, and better bass, definately.

The seventh is nice, the drums are good.  

The eigth one has a good melody, too.  





Thanks a lot man!...I appreciat that a lot...

See guys, That's exactly what I was looking for...A track by track review with good criticism...I guess people dont have time nowadays though...Thanks a lot Trauma...


Oh, and yall have too understand that I'm working with Fruity Loops...Im not looking to be a big name producer with these beats or anything...LoL...It's all in fun...I'm not gunna go out and buy real equipment for producing...I just make beats when I'm bored...Thanks again though Trauma...PeAcE
Title: Re: My first time ever...M U S T  PEEP!
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on August 21, 2002, 12:43:03 PM
bumpin...


Sccit Mix 2 coming soon!