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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: jay on August 01, 2001, 06:45:22 PM
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:o ;D ;D ;D ;D
http://www.theshiznit-thugpound.com/Jaymastajay/Shiznit%20Productions/Shiznit%20Cd%20Promo.mp3
its big but its worth downloading ! !
7,77MB!
1.MA$$APEAL - COLD STEEL
prod.jaymastajay
2.So Much Style & Eemence-Unbelievable
prod. Eemence
3.SMS - Kickin it
prod. jaymastajay
4.Mcee - Keep it real
prod.???
5.So Much Style Feat. DOCB- Lyrical Confusion
prod.DOCB
6.AlerG - Cast Away
prod. jaymastajay
i didn t have time to cut it THAT good but its still dope ...
Go n check 4 yourselfs n pick your favorites.
Peace
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TITE!
JUST D/LD IT!
WHEN ISIT AVAILABLE 2 £££??
peace
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ima tell you what i really think
AlerG and DOCB were both tight on the mic...MCEE was aight.....i wasnt impressed by the rest
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YEH IMO, THE BEST WAS THE END WITH ALER-G'S VERSE, EASILY THE BEST BIT
peace
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what about the beats?
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i dont think u wanna know my review on the beats.......but if you do...i will tell
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"what about the beats? "
i ve already asked.....
not only my beats all of them ...
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ok...it's your decision.....but dont forget that the reason you're hatin on me is cuz i didnt like one of your tracks.....
Track 1. Yoy already know that i dont like that beat...(i have already explained why)...... i can feel MASSAPEALS rappin...... a good thing is the radio-voice on the background
RATE:
rappin:2,5/5,
beat: 2/5
Track 2. The beat is good, laid back, but still hard-core. Hmm.....i dont wanna comment the rappin skillz.... (no diss ::)) ....
RATE:
rappin 1/5,
beat, 3,5/5
Track 3. SMS is a liiitle better on this one.....but still... ...the beat is gettin better, actually...but the intro sound a little like xzibit-x .....
RATE:
rappin 1,5/5,
beat: 3/5
Track 4. This beat is tight, but if fits on some movie or somethin , not a hiphop-track...u know what i mean..? so the rate will be low ....MCEE is aight on the mic...not good...not bad....
RATE:
rappin: 2/5,
beat 1,5/5 (becuz of the bad combination)
Track 5. This is a good one. The mix between the beat and the rappin is good...I guess the rapper i hear is DOCB...he's tight. ...
RATE:
rappin: 3,5/5
beat: 3,5/5
Track 6. AlerG is tight on this one, but the beat is not on his level.....it's good though
RATE:
rappin 4/5
beat:3/5
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this is intersenting.... i bo liked my rapping more on kickin it than on unbelievable...can you give me any tips on how i can get better?
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well.....ok
Track 2:
I can cee that your rhyme is taken from a battle, cuz it aint synchronized with the beat, a rhyme gotta be synchronyzed to be good. U know what I mean?? And sometimes, your voice is raisin one octave at the end of the bar. ex: anywone dissapointed with this album just dont really know whats craccalaccin
Track 3
I gotta admit, you start real good on this one, (maby2,5/5). And is being more synchonized than the first one, it's hard and good but is becomming more and more a battlebeat at the end. When i listen to it now i realize i judged it to hard, maby becuz of already being influed by "Track 2"....overal rating should be 2-2,5/5.
i just wanna say that it's huge by you to take my ratings like a man and not strat beefin....
peace
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oo...i forgot the tips....
1. When you're rhyming for a beat, dont start before you got the beat. And write your rhyme with the beat bumpin on the stereo (or computer). So that you can feel it it's good or bad.
2. As i said, the important thing is the mix, so you dont need to find many difficult words here and there....just concentrate makin the rhymes fit to the beat.
3. Try not to rais the voice at the end when you rap..
that's all
im not a rhyme-teacher, but i belive that if you follow what ive said, you will end up near 3,5-4 in rating
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by the way, jaymasta ....what did you think of my riview??? bad as usual??
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no disrespect or nothing i-bo but as i am listening to your beats ( sadam hitler ) or your raps ( jaymastajay is a gay) i can hardly support your ratings.
not only that you didn t rate any song better than 3/5 but the way you talk make s me think your andre young himself.
i m not trying to diss you right now but none of YOUR beats or rhymes that I ve heard so far is better than anything on this promo.
on your review you always try to find something bad about my beatz....
"AlerG is tight on this one, but the beat is not on his level....."
shit like that u know++
after i read this shit i dl ed sadam hitler again....
alerg is lightyears ahead of you on this one.
you just always seem a little arrogant to me , sorry
peace
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well...i respect your opinion.....
i produce beats, but dont think that i rate them 5/5 ....if a beat is 2/5 ...it's aight.....3/5 is goood ...4/5 damn good and 5/5 is battlecat-style
you've head the Sadam Hitler-song...and if you dont like the beat...fine...but i rate that beat 3/5 (witch is as much as your beat).....Have you heard the "Bazz In Ya Azz"-beat??....if you havent ...check http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/278/keelah_mc_aka_i_bo.html
ima upload 4 beats today and one of them is the one you heard on my bad diss-song....but ive redone it.
if you think you're beats are worth 4/5 - 5/5 then YOU are the guy who's claimin to be dr dre...
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this is amateur-tracks......and usualy amteur rap cant reach more than 3/5 in skillz......(but AlerG and DOCB were above, if you didnt notice)
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JayMastaJay
on your review you always try to find something bad about my beatz...
track 3
the beat is gettin better, actually...but the intro sound a little like xzibit-x ....
the only negative part is the xzibit-part
Track 2. The beat is good, laid back, but still hard-core.
i cant cee any negative there
Track 5. This is a good one. The mix between the beat and the rappin is good...I guess the rapper i hear is DOCB...he's tight. ...
i cant see no negative in that line
....???....i actually dont understand what you're talkin bout....
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Just to make it clear...i want everybody to go to http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/278/keelah_mc_aka_i_bo.html and check my 2 beats...i want y'all to be honest and tell me what y'all think of them
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i was talking about MY beats...
i ve already posted the tracklist including the producers.
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prod.jaymastajay
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prod. Eemence
3.prod. jaymastajay
4.prod.unknown
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prod.DOCB
6.
prod. jaymastajay
i downloaded your track and i have to say that any of your tracks that i ve heard was played out in at least 60 seconds.
your chords are way to simple to be dope.
i always feel like my old atari computer speaks to me from his grave...
( not a diss , just about my impression)
i know what u WANT to express on your beats , and the quality is there ,BUT the chords + the whole arrangement are not god IMO.
of course they sound good with alerg over it but IMO,even Alerg didn t rescue the song(SH).
I m not into all that " club" rap shit like jay z , swizz beats , dmx , shit u know maybe thats why i think your beats are corny.
but i think if we could just go our own ways without confronting us too much .it ll all be good huh?
Peace
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ok...im cool with that...but i gotta say that i didnt notice that you was the producer on track 6.....cuz it wasnt ment to be a diss....
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aiiiiighhht
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unbelievable is produced by docb
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i thought the mix was tight and i am looking foward to having about 2-3 more songs on the shiznit cd, peace.