West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Pillow on April 30, 2002, 08:17:58 PM
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yo REL i dont even know who tha fuck u be men, but you sure do talk alot of BS, so lets settle this shit lyrically, i am calling you out. if you aint all mouth, then you will except.
RULES:
1. max bar limit 25
2. its 4-30-02 so it has to be posted by 5-3-02 or u loose
3. No crew votes
4. first to 5 votes win (3-0 = K-O)
Peace out
..::Pillow::..
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HaHa..REL is gonna Get ssssssssssmoked....lmao
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Im down
Also, no votes by hataz
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Time for ur spirits to be lifted as I come explicit//
Im gifted, but dont get your hopes up, im tremendous//
Your defenseless, like BUSTA, I break yo bones//
And I eat ur ass like ice-cream cones//
Pillow taken the blows, the hits and the punches//
Knockin you down like DE LA HOYA, and settin u up on cruches//
And like TOYA..."I DO".......Brake Foos//
And choose, to send you to a state of redardation//
I cripple you so that you cannot even participate in masturbation//
At my hotel there is no accomidation......jus pillows//
I send wannabe-thugs like u, to a penitenterary//
And R-E-L will eventually destroy ur memory//
Because of the hardcore rhymes, I produce and pronounce//
And I announce that, Im the Master of Ceremonies//
R-E-L turning ur oaths into disaster testimonies//
I eat you up like Kentucky Fried Chicken//
I also beat ur lucky bride when she starts bitchin//
*Reminising*
You talk to yo mama, to affectionately//
Exceptionally well written bars cause you to act reluctantly and hesistant//
I Also do not accept an animadversion//
Causing a conversion, and putting my rhymes into exertion//
*Remembering Politics*
Democratic, Republican, or illetirate??//
Fanatic, like men?? I dont give a shit//
Tommorows ur last day
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actually friday was my last day....lol...well maby one day u will learn how to count...lol na men i am just playin. but here go my verse
Psycotic criminal, i'm deceasin and reapin any emcee thats beefin/
Gonna get mentally weakend when im through creepin, flow is unleashed and/
Ur chance is decreasin for you to defeat Pillow/
Woops, my bad, u never had a chance in hell/
Im standin in handsome wealth, after my hand was dealt/
I gotta get down for what it is that i know/
Show bizz is tha show but fuck tha fame, im about that fortune competition gets scorched and im sippin on 4 - 0/
When i hear a clean beat i rip it like scizzors and go wild/
They call me that cold child, aint like tha rest ah ya cuz i got my own style/
Let my actions speak for my words otherwise keep a low profile/
Burned ya so im watch ya soul fry/
Leavin a trail ah dust for you to go CHOKE ON/
Words, sticks or stones will never break my bones cuz im SO STRONG/
And BEFORE LONG, any and everybody's gonna recognize/
That i cause for careers to be jeopordized/
Under control of the devils mind, bitches i got ya pressurized/
Im like the muthafuckin holyness of hip-hop and before i rhyme and define/
The designs of a lions heart, im al capone'in some organized crime/
Distorted and blind, thats what you are and thats what you'll be/
Rollin solo, comin fo ho's - i'll single-handedly make ya faculty flee/
Practice and preach, back up and keep/
Ya mind on my rhymes cuz u know the shit that i spit will wrap up and teach/
Your fake, buster ass to get kept up in check and your prize stays half in ya reach/
along wit ur momma, cause she taste like a peach/
so basically REL...come back to me when you get some real ass lyrics/and learn how to spell.
you got smoked niggaaaaaaaaaaa
..::Pillow::..
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[size=18]VOTES[/size]
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It just seemed like R-E-L was better, but Iwas feeling Pillow more... I would give a tie, but no one wants that, so I'm was better,
vote= REL
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THNX homie....
1-0
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VOTESSSS
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It just seemed like R-E-L was better, but Iwas feeling Pillow more... I would give a tie, but no one wants that, so I'm was better,
vote= REL
that vote didnt make sense.
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Both droped hot...but since I cant vote..But I woulda gone for Pillow...better nd titer rhymes
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>:( >:( >:( >:( >:( >:( >:( >:( >:( >:(
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i'mma go with REL he flowed better and was a lil more altogether with his shit.
one
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^^thnx yo.....2-0
VOTES!!
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I'ma take my vote off for now... I voted half a-sleep, and I feel I own them a better review... so tomorrow I'ma give it a full review.
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well, can we kno if ur vote stands or is different......but we r jus waitin on a review??
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aiight thanks for being honest MDogg. so its back to 1-0
Pillow
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any many mini mo catch a tiger by his toe.........um. ::)
Vote Rel.........had an iller batte verse
holla
OnE
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:-/ :-* :'((YO YO YO ARMZ is the iLLIst NIggA)
aiight this was a hard one i had a hard time i mean i like mike robberts and the space caddets but i also have to go for george bush .... I like chicken...I give this one to...I need drugs.. To MIKE ROBBERT AND THE SPACE CADDETS but george bush is my dunnscout
KEEP YA SHIT THURO SHHUNNNN
PZ
ARMz Tha MAhD SCIeNTIST
east coast and grimy for liffeeee :) ;) :D ;D >:( :( :o 8) ??? ::) :P :-[ :-X(another one for sccit)
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pillow wont that shyt no doubt
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i got this infection in my ass that will not go away i need something soft to rest it on..........fuck it
pilliow man has another vote give it to pilliow man
here it goes you got it pillow man another one in the bag for pillow man pillow man has one more notch to the top everyone clap for pillow man
1 from me to pillow :o
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:-/ :-* :'((YO YO YO ARMZ is the iLLIst NIggA)
aiight this was a hard one i had a hard time i mean i like mike robberts and the space caddets but i also have to go for george bush .... I like chicken...I give this one to...I need drugs.. To MIKE ROBBERT AND THE SPACE CADDETS but george bush is my dunnscout
KEEP YA SHIT THURO SHHUNNNN
PZ
ARMz Tha MAhD SCIeNTIST
east coast and grimy for liffeeee :) ;) :D ;D >:( :( :o 8) ??? ::) :P :-[ :-X(another one for sccit)
HHHHHHHHHA sup home boy...this is my persian homie here..and one of the best net-producers also..and a good rapper..wlecome dogg
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aiight men the shit is tied 2-2. no more votes because MDogg still has to give his. so he is tha deciding vote.
peace out
..::Pillow::..
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Posted by: J-STEEZ_INEFFFABLE Posted on: Today at 01:35:41
pillow wont that shyt no doubt
please explain tht one.coz its like ur first post an u vote for sum battle w/out an intro damn.
---------------------------REL----------------------------
tigh shit from u there.
ill flow
consistent ryme scheme
dope shit!!
neat punchlines et al.
memorabel lines:
And choose, to send you to a state of redardation//
I cripple you so that you cannot even participate in masturbation//
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pillow:
the first ive ever seen from u.
but it lacked overall cinsistency an weak punchlines ,theres a lotta room for improvemnt.
memorable lines:
Ya mind on my rhymes cuz u know the shit that i spit will wrap up and teach/
Your fake, buster ass to get kept up in check and your prize stays half in ya reach/
along wit ur momma, cause she taste like a peach/
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vote=REL
PZ
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3-2......but i dont get who voted 4 u besides, "Eastside and Grimy"
well, wtvr
It dont matter if MDOGG voted before or after this vote, cuz it wouldnt b a KO, we still need more votes
3-2.......VOTES
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Last time, I was kinda tired, but I read through both, and I was really feeling Pillow, but REL seemed to have better structure, and had better lyrics. But Pillow to me was better because it made more sense, but, since REL seemed o have more skillz, I gave it to him. That wasn't really fair, so now I am able to give a full review after some sleep and a class, so I'm a wake.
REL... great rhyming, and great punchlines. This was a good battle rhyme, stumbled at time in terms of flow, but didn't urt too much.
Strong points, hard hitting lyrics, and actual structure.
Bestline:
And choose, to send you to a state of redardation//
I cripple you so that you cannot even participate in masturbation//
Weak points, some "feeler" lines, as it seems they were put up there to feel up space. Everyone does it, but it does hurt.
Weak line:
Your defenseless, like BUSTA, I break yo bones//
And I eat ur ass like ice-cream cones//
.::Pillow::., This wasn't a rhyme full of punchlines, which is what people like nowadays. But this was a good battle rap, eachline it seemed set up each other. Pillow, it seems that you have skillz, but this boards voters like more punches, trust me, I have to change styles 'cause of this.
Stong point, good rhyme, more of a rap as oppose to straight punches, but like Ali, if this was boxing, it'd be great dancing...LOL
Best line:
They call me that cold child, aint like tha rest ah ya cuz i got my own style/
Let my actions speak for my words otherwise keep a low profile/
(remember this, 'cause I feel it's a good thing)
Weak points, kept back on some punches, and even for a regular rap, needs more punchlines.
Weak lines:
I gotta get down for what it is that i know/
Show bizz is tha show but fuck tha fame, im about that fortune competition gets scorched and im sippin on 4 - 0/
(watch those uneven lines)
With this being all said the vote goes to............ by the score or............ 4.1-4.0............. I think Pillow had a better rap, so with my vote, I'ma give it to Pillow. It's my vote, but watch out 'cause other voters are a little bit more picky. I do like raps better though.
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please explain tht one.coz its like ur first post an u vote for sum battle w/out an intro damn.
---------------------------REL----------------------------
tigh shit from u there.
ill flow
consistent ryme scheme
dope shit!!
neat punchlines et al.
memorabel lines:
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pillow:
the first ive ever seen from u.
but it lacked overall cinsistency an weak punchlines ,theres a lotta room for improvemnt.
memorable lines:
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vote=REL
PZ
A Vote is a Vote..and he said ' pillow won that one'dont u think hes voting for pillow? LoL?
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3-3
VOTES!
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yo REL go a little slower through the bored and u will see its my 3 votes, just in case u didnt see. so its 3-2 me
and thanks for re voting M. i appriciate it and thanks for the vote. i will take ur advice about the punchlines
peace out
..::Pillow::..
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naaah.....
i got votes by:Timelock, PimpFemcee, & Windtalker....
thats 3 homie....
3-3, VOTES!
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Its also really funny how there are people here, giving u madd props and shit, and there first post on tha board was here.....
:-/ weird shit maan
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i got this infection in my ass that will not go away i need something soft to rest it on..........fuck it
pilliow man has another vote give it to pilliow man
here it goes you got it pillow man another one in the bag for pillow man pillow man has one more notch to the top everyone clap for pillow man
1 from me to pillow :o
WTF? this guys first post is a vote for Pillow? I think thats against the rules...Lol, i dont know how the hell this counted, but oh well...LoL
My vote is for REL...
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WTF? this guys first post is a vote for Pillow? I think thats against the rules...Lol, i dont know how the hell this counted, but oh well...LoL
My vote is for REL...
I dont think this is fair..there both friends..in real life..so I wonder who he would vote for ::)..
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with that being said. 3-2 as the vote didn't count.
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well.....it was 2 people, whose 1st post was for pillow, but wtvr......
4-2, i gotta vote from NIK
but still check out those 2 cats
VOTES!
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I've meet TimeLock in person, and he has voted in some of my battles, and he had voted against me and some of my battles. So I'ma trust the vet on this one, and I guess it stands... 4-2.
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yo REL i usally dont speak on how ppl are voted for, but u are a pussy ass bitch. talking about the 1st post they put on here is for me. its like WTF? i dont need to get ppl to vote for me, i WANT honest votes, and u are having ur best friend vote for u and now i know. who hasent been on tha boared for what......2 months +. its BS if u ask me. u aint nothing but a pussy that cant stand to loose.
Pillow
He hasnt been on, but when he gets on, he checks tha WHOLE board...from tha main board to tha swap meet.....
but usually people who havent posted on tha board yet, they dont check keystyling FIRST......
and i thought now i know was a vet and honest, guess i though wrong tho
He is honest, jus cuz he doesnt vote 4 u, doesnt mean hes not honest....I DONT GOTTA GET PEOPLE TO VOTE FOR ME!!
so...its 4-2, WAITIN ON VOTES....a MOD ruled that it stands, 4-2....
VOTES
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yo now i knows vote dont count u faggot. u called him and told u to vote for him. he hasnt posted ANYWHERE except on this thread in like a month. mother fucker please. just be honest and stop tellin peeps to vote for u!
pillow
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muthafucka, u betta not make assumptions....
i didnt tell him shiiiit, and check other places, he DID post
and a muthafuckin MOD ruled his vote 2 be valid so stop tryna run shit....
4-2....
VOTES!!!!!
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yo now i knows vote dont count u faggot. u called him and told u to vote for him. he hasnt posted ANYWHERE except on this thread in like a month. mother fucker please. just be honest and stop tellin peeps to vote for u!
pillow
Exactly!!!!!!! he didnt vote on anything else but in this thread..ooh..it kinda obvious kid..
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Pillow Came Tighter In My Eyes. A Slightly Better Flow.
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Anymore Bullshit And Thats It...This Thread Will Be Locked And The Battle Will Be Void.
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pillow is getting my vote... his rhyme made mre sense
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i dont know enough about this, but i dont think best friends votes should be counted, so if NIK is REL's best friend, it would be good if his vote decided who won the battle...
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Leave It I-BO....It Dont Matter Anymore.
4-4, Next Vote Is The Winner!
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I got rid of some B.S. 4-4... next vote wins!
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[size=20]JUST ONE VOTE[/size]
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^^^^^^^^^
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How com sooooo many people that check here, dont vote??
Dont u read Logics rules??
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i kinda agree wit M Dogg, REL was tight, but Pillow had my attention throughout the whole verse while reading, he gets my vote
Pillow
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LAAADIES AND GENTLEMEN .. WE HAVE A WINNER :o :o
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FINALLY tha madness is ova lol. thanks u all for ur votes, i appreiciate it. i take it 5-4. good battle REL
peace out
..::Pillow::..
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fair enough.......................good battle
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i dont know enough about this, but i dont think best friends votes should be counted, so if NIK is REL's best friend, it would be good if his vote decided who won the battle...
No, hes not my best friend...I rarely see him...Ohh so your calling me a lier now muthafucka? LoL, I would vote for pillow, but he has a small vocabulary...LoL
I dont think this is fair..there both friends..in real life..so I wonder who he would vote for ..
Yea, and your saying that gay guy with one post is fair?
Its kinda obviouse Pillow asked him too sign up just so he would vote
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directed to now i know: i have a small vocab?? u show me where i have a small vocab u ass. i dont even kno ya and u comin at me like that. fuck it i am callling u out.
..::Pillow::..
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^^brace yo self
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^^ you betta brace yo self..ur about to face my crew..
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directed to now i know: i have a small vocab?? u show me where i have a small vocab u ass. i dont even kno ya and u comin at me like that. fuck it i am callling u out.
..::Pillow::..
Im a retired keystyler sir, sorry, there wont be a battle...LMAO
I use my rhymes for audio, for me the keystyle board has became a waste, Ive already proven myself on this board by never losing a battle (From my prime till now)...It seems like u cant handle criticism...Thats a bad start on this board...You need to be able to take criticism, and IMO you need a lot of work before u start calling out people who have been keystyling since this board opened...No offence, Peace...
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This thread is annoying. Lock it up.