West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Tecknine on March 01, 2002, 05:36:52 PM
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Modern day diciphal , hard to find shit delightful\\
My enfurious recital, it's vital to hold the title\\
I wanna reign superior to the inferior\\
But some how my envisions don't meet the criteria\\
Persuing impossible dreams,to intervene\\
Thoughts of my queen ,burn my inner conscience like Listerine\\
Hold me tight,tell me shit's gonna be alright\\
in the night,infinite celestial bodies glowing bright\\
Be there throughout my trials and tribulations\\
Peaceful meditation through hip-hop translations\\
Love has many equasions, and simply deceitful arrangments\\
Agony while you're missin',memories of your eyes glistenin'\\
It's a mission just to get through 24-hours of livin'\\
I have my lyrical presision,hip-hop is my religion\\
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tight lil rhyme dawg keep it up....
i like the pic tooooo its hott i got on my desk top....... loool
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uppin
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Modern day diciphal , hard to find shit delightful\\
My enfurious recital, it's vital to hold the title\\
I wanna reign superior to the inferior\\
But some how my envisions don't meet the criteria\\
Persuing impossible dreams,to intervene\\
Thoughts of my queen ,burn my inner conscience like Listerine\\
Hold me tight,tell me shit's gonna be alright\\
in the night,infinite celestial bodies glowing bright\\
Be there throughout my trials and tribulations\\
Peaceful meditation through hip-hop translations\\
Love has many equasions, and simply deceitful arrangments\\
Agony while you're missin',memories of your eyes glistenin'\\
It's a mission just to get through 24-hours of livin'\\
I have my lyrical presision,hip-hop is my religion\\
1.5/5
Pretty weak to be honest. Keep your head up though
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nice
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1.5/5
Pretty weak to be honest. Keep your head up though
LOL King Suge thinks hes all thatm "mistah hard review givah" lol punk, 1.5/5? if that wuz true , primo wouldnt be sittin here.
although I must say, you tried on the topic it just didnt seem like u put all your heart into it, good effort though. and good flow, no abundance of multis lol. 4/5
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damn..that shit ain't weak..it's from tha heart..you're keepin it real dogg, good shit, keep doin it
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seeing it took me about 5 minutes to write it doesn't suprise me
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i think i got tha BEST suggestion for u Primo. take that pic off yur post....it makes it hard for us to focus on yur rhyme. LOL ;D