West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Naz-T on February 06, 2002, 09:44:46 AM
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You still down..ok
15-25 bars
I'll go first
One Love!
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fuk it, I'll post it now..
reply quick.
You can't beat me, don't even go-at-it...nah you blow-at-it, /
but no don't-sweat-it../
I saw you spitting shit to this homie 'flow-matic'/
dikridaz all impressed, classifying you 'po-etic' ../
But you got to ‘go-grow-at-it’ and get rid of all those ho-mo-habits/
coz to be defeating me you got to learn how to spit that shit -
you fukin faggot , /
You wanna get respect... without giving the head?/
You gotta quit playing games , concerning 'pictionary'/
My lyrics come from the heart..no not the 'dictionary '/
Yo shit is just hillarious, whack as 'donald duck'/
You wanna play this serious, you tell me 'what is up'?/
"Lyric-ally?"..." you name-it-G", The T "don't-give-a-fuck"/
heyo
I keep 'beefing-on" the" heat-is-on"/
turning topics into "viet-nam"/
Naz-T the meanest-dawg...haha thinking you can beat me, keep dream-ing-on/
Now motherfucker make a choice, be a man and reply/
I fight to survive, never hide, must be my pride/
Death before dishonor, Still I will stay alive/
Don't mistake me, I aint that easy/
I'm a soldier fucking veteran, Naz-T no lil-greezy/
Though you Ending replies with "peace" .. you provoke and get-a-war/
Enemies you can't defeat, now die by my met-a-phores/
My lyrics got ya in a head-lock! confusing twisted like a dread-lock/
yeah
Dying aint easy, But living's even "harder"/
When you go against my flow, you know you got me "started"/
One Love!
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8) Surprise, bitch! Here's AMC to give ya tha itch!/
allways dope rhymes to, i'll get ya down int ya knees witch/
the T don't give a fuck? Get off of my jock!/
you don't know what's fuck till you suck my cock/
ya rhymes are worst than "newbies-kids-on-da-block/
Naz-t as emptied here his hoe-wack-rhyme-stock/
wanna play pictionnary, go search more shit less ordinary/
wanna elevate ya game? come into my dictionnary/
i have rap-g-funk-rhyme-dope-slang-thang-gang-bang/
i never go to ta easy way , just hard way street gang/
i end replies with peace, ya push me now and feel my piece/
ya rhymes didn't even scratch me, i'm still in one piece/
by now i've made ya look like Vanilla Ice/
ya fuckin' fake don't forget i'm rolling da dice/
now you wishin' you look like Mickey tha mice/
i beat ya now and i'll beat ya twice/
in wcc i got respect, i'm gonna put ya in da sect/
i'll be of this murder the first suspect/
Allways More Crimes is coming for you /
and play you like an yo yo (that ain't no new to you)/
ya came to fuck me and i fucked you/
Naz-t come to me and you'll see/
fightin' with me is not like fightin' to a newbie/
now you're sorry and beg me for mercy/
better pray bitch, i am for real , see/
i'm the warrior that eat soldiers for lunch/
better not diss me cuz i ain't in ya bunch/
do not get me started or i'll give ya my punch/
now i'm smashin' ya between my theeth like swiss chocolate crunch/
PEACE! Now everybody vote!
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;Dvotes wanted! Evrybody vote! Peace!
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By the way... Rules... first to 4 votes wins...4-0 ko. Peace! Feel my piece!
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Nice...:)
yep vote!
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damn this is close, AMC was hard, and Naz-T came hard too but i liked Naz-T's wordlay more so ima go with him. but basically its more of a tie.
damn i think I should call it a tie cuz i basically would like to vote for both of you.
TIE
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Damn Naz... Can we say 1-1? Does that mather? More votes pleeze!
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1-1 is the same as 0-0 but since 4 means knock out, it's aight with me ;)
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As you wish for! if you wanna we put 0-0! I must say you're a cool opponent! Some gees around here could learn something with ya! Peace! And now yall must vote or i'll stop votin' in ya posts... Peace! (again...)
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i did homie, sorry if i missed some battles it aint personal now go vote on my battle with i-bo but only if ya find time
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I voted already Illicit, you had some hard rhymes in there..:)
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i know u did, thanx a lot homie
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;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;Dwe do really need votes! Pleeze vote!
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haha yeah..no one is votin!! :(
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>:(This is a fucked up situation... we voting on ya threads and yall do not even vote in here! Damn! why do they not vote? I'm gettin' tired of this...Vote!VOTE!VOTE!VOTE!
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Alright, AMC... I know you're going to think I'm beefing when I say that I'm voting for Naz-T but there are some things that are fundamentally wrong with ya style. Don't get me wrong, I love the way you always come rougha and ready for battle but here are some things you need to improve on:
1) Multisyllable Rhyming. Basically, you just rhyme the last syllable of every line with pieces of that line and the lines after and before it. This is in part related to my second suggestion regarding vocab. Here's an example of what you do:
Surprise, bitch! Here's AMC to give ya tha itch!/
allways dope rhymes to, i'll get ya down int ya knees witch/
Instead, try doing sometEnhing more like this:
Enough with these formalities, let's get to the fatalities ~
You really wanna battle me, the man who eats emcees like greens?! ~
2) Vocabulary. A vast and varied vocabulary is an essential piece of every good emcee's arsenal. It's really hard to make multisyllable rhymes when you're using single syllable words. Just read more and look up any words you don't understand in the dictionary, that's all I can say.
3) Use more wordplay. Wordplay is so important. Simply put, no emcee can be any good without wordplay. Wordplay does not involve sticking all of your rhymes in quotation marks or writing them in caps as some people seem to think it is (LOL). Wordplay involves using staples of poetry such and metaphors, similes, and alliterations in your rhymes. Here is an example of wordplay:
I'll liquify and drink you just to piss you off ~
4) Expand your Horizons. There are many more ways to attack people than just with knives and guns and in order to make allusions to historical events and things in literature you need to have a better knowledge of the world around you and do more reading.
VOTE = Naz-T... because I saw examples of all of these things in his rhymes.
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thanks for voting NoT :) some nice advices too..
2 - 1 keep on votin!!
One Love!
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I'm takin' notes... See i ain't no American or English native... All the words of English i know are from my own research and auto-didact... my specialities are French, Portuguese and Spanish! But around here no one nows any good French , Spanish or Portuguese... so i'm tryin' to do my best homie, and by the way... i beated Flowmatic once, i beated Pelon , some battles i had have been pretty close ones,and been havin' good critics from yall. So if i do thaht with all the limitations i have, seems like if i keep havin' good advices like yours i'll improve myself.
But... do not try to say i do not read, i read alot more than you all may think... See i ain't no ignorant: I have a PHD on latin languages man... no bullshit I speak fluently Latin, French, Portuguese, Spanish and Italian, and a French teacher at a school Here's da proof:
Je suis professeur de Français au Portugal et j'enseigne tous les niveaux de Français. (French) Galia lingua magister in schola sum.(Latin) Sou professor de Francês em Portugal (Portuguese)... need more? I don't mean to be disrespectfull, i just wanna learn... And i battle as much as i can to improve.
Tell me to rap in some of those languages and you'll see metaphors aliterations, antithesis, and every retorical style figures you want! Peace!(again and again...)
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ima vote inna sec. but yur guys rules are all fuked up lol. How is it "first to 4" and "4-0 is a KO"?? lol. whetha u get 4-0, or 4-3....its still a win. shoulda been 3-0 is a KO or sumthin. but thas coo lol.
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tight battle yall, pretty close...
AMC had a pretty nice flow to yur shit, one the better i seen frum u, n sum strong punches. woulda liked more multi's tho n metaphors, but overall a very tight flow.
AMC, tight line:
"wanna play pictionnary, go search more shit less ordinary/
wanna elevate ya game? come into my dictionnary/"
NaZ-T showed alot, i neva really read much of yur shit yet but yur far frum a rookie. strong punches n also a good flow. tight multis throughout n metaphors, i liked tha "war" theme u stuck with. really strong verse!
NaZ-T tight line (prolly tha tightest of tha battle):
"Though you Ending replies with "peace" .. you provoke and get-a-war/
Enemies you can't defeat, now die by my met-a-phores/"
vote=NaZ-T
*rememba AMC, he spit first so is at a disadvantage....so usually voters will give tha person who drops first a bit of an edge in tha voting. So to win, u really gotta over shadow they rhyme. but u gettin alot better fah sho. keep at it homie.
good shit yall
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thanks homie, 3 - 1 amc, are we goin to 4?
peace
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Tone you're right next time i'll change the rules. To Naz-T seems like ya goin' to win... But i want to go till the end so people can vote and do some critics so i can take notes... aight? Peace!
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yo it;s aight with me, ppl wil have to keep voin though :)!
And vote in my battle vs KVB too please,.,he hasn;'t replied yet.but when he has
One love
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Thank ya! Ya cool! Peace!
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Vote - Naz-T
He Straight Ripped It Up...Nice Verse From AMC, But Damn, Tight Shit Naz...
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Thanks Logic, aight AMC 4 - 1, good battle...
you are a good opponent.
Peace..