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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: CodeCaine on December 08, 2001, 08:16:00 PM

Title: peep this my HIGH freestyle that i just wrote
Post by: CodeCaine on December 08, 2001, 08:16:00 PM

my rhymes are tight// tha time is right// to rhyme tonite// so prepare for a flight// to a world to alot of crimes and fights// ya shoudnt have fuck wit me nows not tha nite// ya see i value my life more than ya life// thats why i'll take yours and not think of ya wife// i have ya whole family crying and shakin// and ya moms wit a RIP cake in tha oven baking// dont call tha cops cuz i dont fear tha Bacon// my life is already over why hasnt been taken// i used to love to play basketball// but that kinda ended when dad didnt call// i used to have goals and high dreams// but not when he left us it seems// my older moved out at 16 yrs old// he never did what he was told// so he wuz on his and that drama// a few months later he had a baby momma// i am still inspired by him and what hes been thru// if though i dont tell he knows that i do// cuz he can see it in me when nuthin else is new// he has always been there for me and been around// hes a big reason i wuz never beat up or got clowned// my bro kept it cool with all tha tru thugs// thats prolly why they gave a lil homie hugs// i knew my brother will always have my back// all tha whites didnt like me cuz all my friends were black// but i dont give a fuck i hung wit who wuz cool//but it seems like if i have pool// they have a bigger one fool// and theres even seem wetter// no matter i have they all have it better// cuz everyone is in love wit a college degree// well that piece of paper dont measure ya ability//it just show much conform// never think for ya self and transform//into ya person and break mold// dont ever say that you weretn told// people think if graduate than ya must be smart//  but that just shows that ya can play tha part// to not think for ya selves and be like otherz// well just fuck you mutha fuckaz............aight thats my HIGHSTYLE plz dont laugh to much cuz after all i am  high as fly// is that tha sky i might try// ta touch it or just die// or ya could be evil and tell a lie......oaky thats it........peace

Title: Re: peep this my HIGH freestyle that i just wrote
Post by: 'Illicit' on December 08, 2001, 10:02:31 PM

8) cool dawg, I liked it

~peaCe~

Title: Re: peep this my HIGH freestyle that i just wrote
Post by: Maestro Minded on December 09, 2001, 02:37:04 AM

nut bad..


but ty to  begin writing your rhymes in bars... it will be easier to read...