West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on May 08, 2002, 11:06:58 PM
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aight homie, I fucked up with my time limit with logic so I will give this three days, that way I know I will really make it for sure. 15 lines max, 3 = KO first to 5 crew votes allowed
peace
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sup ceeride or what now you changed your name to illicit/
last time we had a battle i shit on you ina minute/
fuck prewrittin, im just freestylin, keystylin/
yeah homie im the one that was known as doggystylin/
they call me dogg and im about to rape my bitch,give you what you need/
lyrically fuck you,this is where my dick makes you bleed/
not on that fag shit, i attack it, outcome is drastic, rap you in plastic/
fuckin section is named after me cuz im skillmatic/
still at it, rippin hoez like you and then like dre your all about aftermathmatics/
leave you in shock like shit was some terrorist tactics/
all your allowed to call me is dogg jones,leave you lookin like a idiot aka puffy combs/
break into cribs aka homes,light it on fire like i did to ToNe's/
let me break it to ya,on wcc im the real hero/
you just talk shit, yo your nothin but a actor like robert deniro/
i thought you knew but after this you should know, that im the one they fear ho!/
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stop quotin my rhymes faggot , did u expect no one would notice?/
and dont even start writin some own shit cuz we all know its gon be bogus/
invade ya locus, focus and make sho this, rhyme kills ya hopes kid/
I lyrically erupt like volcanos leavin you hopeless, no time left to hit the skids/
ya wonder why Doggystylin had to change his name? simple watch me explain/
imagine a skinny muthafucka net bangin but never gettin laid/
debate all you want, ur frontin snitchin bitchin jus like a skandalous ho/
u beatin me is as hilarious as claimin you got an above-average flow/
"im tight, ur not, lets fight, no wait stop" is the shit that u drop/
homie face it you couldnt rock arenas that are as big as flowerpots/
ya think a name-change will save ya from embarassment and beatings/
I spit flames on ya bitch unhesitant to make MC's feel me/
deceive opponents with mindgames, extreme pain is what I crave/
make u my slave ur path I paved Dogg Jones gettin lowered in his own grave/
last line I made u suffer, ya moms callin for supper so bitch get back in ya cage/
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aite, both rhymes was tite, kinda hard decision, i was tryin to read them over listening to the TV, so it was kinda hard to keep the flow going in my head, but i gotta say Dogg Jones rhyme started off REAL dope, i was thinkin' he was gonna take it, but i donno, it kinda downspiraled as i lost interest, no offense, it was still tyte. Cee Rides was cool, nice regular start as opposed to Dogg Jones, but he kept a good flow and he kept my interest the whole way through, so my vote goes to....
VOTE: ILLICIT
good battle tho... one
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Dogg i liked the puffy combs bit... ;D
but CeeRide came iller...
one
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no time for a detailed vote here
vote=ceeride aka illicit
pz
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no time for a detailed vote here
then dont fuckin vote, its not like you have to, i dont want people rushin through this, and just give a quick vote but whatever
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aight disregard his vote, cuz I hate the I vote for type of shit too.
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Both were tight rhymes, but my vote goes to Dogg Jones, he had the better disses in my opinion.
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aight disregard his vote, cuz I hate the I vote for type of shit too.
aight homie, thanx, its tight that you see where im comin from, im not tryin to whine about losing or anything but its just that type of voting that pisses me off, if i lose fair then i lose, but if i lose halfass like that it pisses me off, lol, peace
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Illicit had dis one 4 sho his verse was tighter..... ;) Holla
OnE
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Illicit had dis one 4 sho his verse was tighter..... ;) Holla
OnE
bitch get outta here.....you dont know shit about rhymin, and im specially not acceptin a vote like that....
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uppin.....
2-1
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aight no more i vote for... form me
lmao
----------------------dogg jones----------------------
tight spit from u there.
good punch lines an all
they call me dogg and im about to rape my bitch,give you what you need/
lyrically fuck you,this is where my dick makes you bleed/
not on that fag shit, i attack it, outcome is drastic, rap you in plastic/
liked tht one a lot.
could have worked on your rhymes a little more.would have
improved ur verse a lot.i aint tellin tht its bad an all.
compared to illicits it aint up to the mark coz ive seen real good ones from u!!.
-------------------------illicit---------------------------
neat rhyme.
great punchlines combined with a good flow makes tht one an
effective verse.
debate all you want, ur frontin snitchin bitchin jus like a skandalous ho/
u beatin me is as hilarious as claimin you got an above-average flow/
neat one there^
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vote=illicit aka ceeride
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3-1, uppin for more votes
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Doggy had sum tight lines in there. tha "Skillmatic" line i was feelin. He had a slightly better flow to hiz verse then did Illicit. However Illicit came way harder with the punches. And was more consistent throughout his rhyme. Doggy'z shit kinda went up n down a bit. Thiz line had me crackin up for sum reason..."im tight, ur not, lets fight, no wait stop" is the shit that u drop/" lol. Good battle yall.
Vote=Illicit
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4-1, tone is a known doggy hater tho, lol
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The battle of two depraved sadists in Kikuyu Warrior mode, out for blood in this hip-hop game, fathered by Robert Moses.
Doggy's verse- Your noble savage gibberish was reminiscent of a well-mannered Muslim extremist, loose talk, minimal punches, and an arrogant strut to victory. Your an angry rapper, but the weed smoke has made you slow and clumsy. You plan your hits in secret, and release your venom from behind the comfort of the curtains. You precipitated a call to arms, by questioning Illicit's sexuality. And like a young lion defending his manhood, he responded with the venom of a snake bite.
Illicit review- Your verse took you longer to write then Doggy's did, like the rose that grew from concrete, your growth, was slow, but the outcome was beautiful, even more beautiful considering the ground from which it sprouted. You have one yourself a Pyrric victory, but like the South Vietnemese it may have been at too great a cost. The time you took on this rhyme, could be a curse, or your claim to fame, but before you go making yourself a false idol like Yeshua Vin Yoshub, please accept this victory with grace.
Vote- Illicit
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wtf??
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uhhh..........ok......lol.....congrats ceeride, u'z da king of doggyworld, lol