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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Primo on October 22, 2002, 08:12:38 PM

Title: Just some ish on my head..(deep,sadistic rhyme)
Post by: Primo on October 22, 2002, 08:12:38 PM

Only in a dream, shit seems perfect\\
Soon as morning eyes gleem, you redeem worthless\\
Wondering why I wake up to nothin'\\
Dreams are a relief, but are only bluffin'\\
Ready to get stabbed, re-enact brutality scenes for giggles and laughs\\
Bathtub cauldren, recipe bodily fluids mixed with your written trash\\
All in admittance ghasp, bloodstained apperitions passed\\
To see there own murder unmasked floatin in a unforgivin chasm\\
Collapsed-lung, Heart relapsed once,Corroners verdict fathomed\

Title: Re:Just some ish on my head..(deep,sadistic rhyme)
Post by: ToNe1904 on October 23, 2002, 03:32:49 AM

damn, that one sho was upbeat lol. good shit Pr1mo..

Title: Re:Just some ish on my head..(deep,sadistic rhyme)
Post by: Kill on October 23, 2002, 04:58:47 AM

Nice short verse

Title: Re:Just some ish on my head..(deep,sadistic rhyme)
Post by: Reef on October 23, 2002, 03:08:13 PM

nice rhyme.. Pretty short.. but nice..