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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: .:DaYg0sTyLz:. on September 11, 2009, 01:17:31 PM
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First two verses and chorus of a track I wrote a while back. Still needs a female to sing the chorus. Actually had the beat made for the song, but i lost that shit lol Let me know whatcha think.
(verse1)
Just yesterday, I heard that pops passed away
Even if I was religious man, Id be the last to pray
I aint sad today, damn its sad to say
You finally cleaned up yah act, but just a tad too late
Never even got to see yah little boy become a man
Too busy in the streets, sellin dope n runnin scams
You had plenty of chances to try and keep in touch
But to pick up the phone, would just be to much
Did I see you? Fuck...naw, u was see through, phony
Invisible to me, but I believed you, homie
When yah said that yah loved me, and u said that yah cared
You wasnt proud to be a father, instead u was scared
Couldnt be a real man, so yah fled yah fears
You disappeared, and made yah message clear
So when I heard the news, you think I shed a tear?
Hell naw, in my heart you been dead for years
(Chorus)
Sometimes in yah life u have to sacrifice
Open yah eyes and do whats right
Even if, you can hardly stand
Youve got step up and be a man
From time to time I know that life gets rough
And yah feel as though youve had enough
That doesnt mean that you turn yah back
On the ones, that need yah love
(verse2)
Sometimes in yah life you have to sacrifice
Open up yah eyes, and do whats right
Or its yo, loved ones that will pay the price
Aint got to say it twice, cus when yah death was handed
You still just the punkass that left me stranded
What good did yah do? Whos gonna save yah soul fool
Used to play it so cool, u would say yah so true
Everyday I hoped you, would start to pay yah own dues
But in the end, it was moms who had to play yah role too
A woman on her own, bein a mother and a father
Like Shaq, My Biological Didnt Bother...either
See theres...no method to the madness
Baby boy full of joy, and you swept him into sadness
Let him see who dad is, then left him as a bastard
But congratulations G, dont take me wrong
Look how yah motivated me, homie play that song!
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That was good son. Some heartfelt ish.
So when I heard the news, you think I shed a tear?
Hell naw, in my heart you been dead for years
That's crazy right there.
Nice.
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That was good son. Some heartfelt ish.
So when I heard the news, you think I shed a tear?
Hell naw, in my heart you been dead for years
That's crazy right there.
Nice.
thanks for the feedback man, props +1
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Likewise!
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damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?
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damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?
Thanks man. Yeah, it gets deeper then that shit lol but u get the idea...
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yeah i feel what your sayin...i went thru similiar situations so i mos def feel you
but i know this...i moved outta my fams place cuz they didnt approve of the decision i made and it changed alotta family members....even towards me and i was suprised what my dad and cuzzin did to me but i guess it happens
but at the end of the day i know if i die...i tried to make it in this world on my own with no parents....nuthin...
ive been homeless....been thru it all and somehow im still slidin along, and i would hate myself if i did make it in this world with someone else's help, EITHER I MAKE IT ON MY OWN OR NOT AT ALL
KEEP YA HEAD UP DAYGO
damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?
Thanks man. Yeah, it gets deeper then that shit lol but u get the idea...
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yeah i feel what your sayin...i went thru similiar situations so i mos def feel you
but i know this...i moved outta my fams place cuz they didnt approve of the decision i made and it changed alotta family members....even towards me and i was suprised what my dad and cuzzin did to me but i guess it happens
but at the end of the day i know if i die...i tried to make it in this world on my own with no parents....nuthin...
ive been homeless....been thru it all and somehow im still slidin along, and i would hate myself if i did make it in this world with someone else's help, EITHER I MAKE IT ON MY OWN OR NOT AT ALL
KEEP YA HEAD UP DAYGO
damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?
Thanks man. Yeah, it gets deeper then that shit lol but u get the idea...
Yeah I got u man. Im lucky, at least moms was cool. Pops was just fucked up. That muthafucka was high 90% of the time I was around him. Shit, i remember bein 8 yrs old and findin crack on him. Then homie got wrapped up in this murder case down here, and eventually skipped town up to WA. Dude was just bullshit is all. But I aint mad at him. This aint no "im a tough guy that dont give a fuck" typa shit, but to be real when homie died I aint feel shit. No tears, no pain, no nothing. Like a strait up stranger died. But at least I learned how not to be a father, so I can take care of my lil girl like Im supposed to you know? So its all good ;)
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yeah i know what you sayin...dont mean to take your thread but i seen you speakin on some real shit and i thought id reach out and give you props for stayin in there real talk, cuz ive been there
i mean i was sent away at the young age of 2 to this side of the world from europe and ive been pretty much around the world due to havin bitchmade divorced parents
crazy thing is my dad had 4 major brain seizures and i was the one who saved him years ago, i wish i could take that back and not have saved him cuz of the crazy shit hes done to me, which i still cant believe myself
but even to this day i know him and my fam need my help but i told them once before i left
IF I LEAVE TODAY, CAN I COME BACK?
HE SAID NO AS OTHERS LOOKED ON RIGHT BESIDE HIM
I HAVENT GON BACK SINCE, AND I NEVER WILL
problem is he chose money over me and thats somethin i dont/wont do but he chose to but later regreted
again dont mean to take your thread but jus sharin some crazy things that have happened to me, altho you seem more easy on your fam but i dont play games and he already knows when i see him its war (SON VS FATHER AND SON VS FAMILY WAR) they dont want to confront me cuz they know i was right in what i did
yeah i feel what your sayin...i went thru similiar situations so i mos def feel you
but i know this...i moved outta my fams place cuz they didnt approve of the decision i made and it changed alotta family members....even towards me and i was suprised what my dad and cuzzin did to me but i guess it happens
but at the end of the day i know if i die...i tried to make it in this world on my own with no parents....nuthin...
ive been homeless....been thru it all and somehow im still slidin along, and i would hate myself if i did make it in this world with someone else's help, EITHER I MAKE IT ON MY OWN OR NOT AT ALL
KEEP YA HEAD UP DAYGO
damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?
Thanks man. Yeah, it gets deeper then that shit lol but u get the idea...
Yeah I got u man. Im lucky, at least moms was cool. Pops was just fucked up. That muthafucka was high 90% of the time I was around him. Shit, i remember bein 8 yrs old and findin crack on him. Then homie got wrapped up in this murder case down here, and eventually skipped town up to WA. Dude was just bullshit is all. But I aint mad at him. This aint no "im a tough guy that dont give a fuck" typa shit, but to be real when homie died I aint feel shit. No tears, no pain, no nothing. Like a strait up stranger died. But at least I learned how not to be a father, so I can take care of my lil girl like Im supposed to you know? So its all good ;)
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yeah i know what you sayin...dont mean to take your thread but i seen you speakin on some real shit and i thought id reach out and give you props for stayin in there real talk, cuz ive been there
i mean i was sent away at the young age of 2 to this side of the world from europe and ive been pretty much around the world due to havin bitchmade divorced parents
crazy thing is my dad had 4 major brain seizures and i was the one who saved him years ago, i wish i could take that back and not have saved him cuz of the crazy shit hes done to me, which i still cant believe myself
but even to this day i know him and my fam need my help but i told them once before i left
IF I LEAVE TODAY, CAN I COME BACK?
HE SAID NO AS OTHERS LOOKED ON RIGHT BESIDE HIM
I HAVENT GON BACK SINCE, AND I NEVER WILL
problem is he chose money over me and thats somethin i dont/wont do but he chose to but later regreted
again dont mean to take your thread but jus sharin some crazy things that have happened to me, altho you seem more easy on your fam but i dont play games and he already knows when i see him its war (SON VS FATHER AND SON VS FAMILY WAR) they dont want to confront me cuz they know i was right in what i did
yeah i feel what your sayin...i went thru similiar situations so i mos def feel you
but i know this...i moved outta my fams place cuz they didnt approve of the decision i made and it changed alotta family members....even towards me and i was suprised what my dad and cuzzin did to me but i guess it happens
but at the end of the day i know if i die...i tried to make it in this world on my own with no parents....nuthin...
ive been homeless....been thru it all and somehow im still slidin along, and i would hate myself if i did make it in this world with someone else's help, EITHER I MAKE IT ON MY OWN OR NOT AT ALL
KEEP YA HEAD UP DAYGO
damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?
Thanks man. Yeah, it gets deeper then that shit lol but u get the idea...
Yeah I got u man. Im lucky, at least moms was cool. Pops was just fucked up. That muthafucka was high 90% of the time I was around him. Shit, i remember bein 8 yrs old and findin crack on him. Then homie got wrapped up in this murder case down here, and eventually skipped town up to WA. Dude was just bullshit is all. But I aint mad at him. This aint no "im a tough guy that dont give a fuck" typa shit, but to be real when homie died I aint feel shit. No tears, no pain, no nothing. Like a strait up stranger died. But at least I learned how not to be a father, so I can take care of my lil girl like Im supposed to you know? So its all good ;)
Yeah, i think the reason I dont hate dude is cus I realise that Im a better man for him NOT bein around. Shit, I got caught up in some bullshit when I was a little younger...but who doesnt? But if he woulda been around more then he was, who knows if Id even be here right now yah know? So him skippin out how he did was a good thing in the end. I wadnt mad at him, but also didnt give a fuck when he died. Thats the life he chose, his loss not mine u know what im sayin? Anyways, i'll tell u this man. Its hard to move forward with yourself if u continue to have hate in your heart yah know? I dont hate shit nowadays. That hate controls u. I couldnt change the past with that fool, if I woulda hated him I woulda been allowin him to effect my present and my future also. So I just let that shit go and be what it was. You should do the same homie. Leave that shit in the past and work on your future. Anyways, this shit is gettin too serious for keystyle lol. Good lookin out tho homie.
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thats waz up
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Ill flow & lyrics.... And the message deep... That's tru hip hop
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Ill flow & lyrics.... And the message deep... That's tru hip hop
Thanks for the feedback man.
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Ill flow & lyrics.... And the message deep... That's tru hip hop
Exactly, when shit is real, it's real. Daygo's on somethang good.
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its not mcdonalds but im lovin it... 8)
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Ill flow & lyrics.... And the message deep... That's tru hip hop
Exactly, when shit is real, it's real. Daygo's on somethang good.
Yeah, shit is deep. I like lyrics with meaning and heart behind it.
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daygo I feel you my father ain't shit either was my mother both liked to beat me and touch me............
damn if we could pick our parents I damns sure wouldn't have chose them............
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jus let
them die
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Ill flow & lyrics.... And the message deep... That's tru hip hop
Exactly, when shit is real, it's real. Daygo's on somethang good.
Yeah, shit is deep. I like lyrics with meaning and heart behind it.
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lol@the sharing of life experiences in the keystyle forum haha i probably used to do the same
nice shit stayed on topic through out, not to sure about the chorus though prolly sound cool recorded
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lol@the sharing of life experiences in the keystyle forum haha i probably used to do the same
nice shit stayed on topic through out, not to sure about the chorus though prolly sound cool recorded
dog I introduced life experience... and I want to spread it natioanwide
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lol@the sharing of life experiences in the keystyle forum haha i probably used to do the same
nice shit stayed on topic through out, not to sure about the chorus though prolly sound cool recorded
the chorus is good, its sung though. Best with a female singing...but it can be done with a male singer. I wish I still had the beat to post up, cus the beat was perfect for the song, slow, voilins n shit in the background...i just lost it before I recorded the track.
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lol@the sharing of life experiences in the keystyle forum haha i probably used to do the same
nice shit stayed on topic through out, not to sure about the chorus though prolly sound cool recorded
btw...whas happenin ho cake?! lol I aint even realize it was you...shoulda known. But just now saw the Automatikonez...how u been man?
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lol@this guy yeah all good bro just been workin hard man moved away from all my fam tryin to get back on my feet whats up with u
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lol@this guy yeah all good bro just been workin hard man moved away from all my fam tryin to get back on my feet whats up with u
nuthin much, just chillin. You be poppin back up on the board all incognito like.
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lol@nah i came back about 6 months or more ago n just seeing whats up i aint really written in years just every now n them get at me
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have a prop homie............. ;)