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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Xearo on December 08, 2002, 05:38:48 PM

Title: Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: Xearo on December 08, 2002, 05:38:48 PM
Haymaker your cerebral cortex, then uppercut the cartilage in your nostril passages/
From amateur to novice, and master to emperor, slashin my advesaries in a way thats savage//
Set up a phalanx in the battlefield like the ancient Spartans and Trojans/
Leave you soakin in a puddle on your own plasma and blood from a Golf Swing from Ben Hogan//
With a Nine Iron or Pitching Wedge, I'll wedge an opening gash in your brain cavity/
Send you 90 million miles to the star in the center of our solar system, now don't you wish you had gravity?//
I'll tear the flesh right off your muscle tissue, tear the muscle tissue off your rock-hard skeleton/
Rip off your nose with a vice grip, and nomore from now on can you ever smell-a-scent// (Couldn't think of anything else)
I'll send you in a decent from the thermosphere to the liquid molten mantle deep beneath the surface/
Similar to the Lion in the Wizard of Oz, to face me...I'll have your retina's searchin for your courage//

A quick 10 bars...

Felt like Keyin...

GhOzT
Title: Re:Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: __kaLipZo__ on December 09, 2002, 06:43:34 AM
burnouts like myself seem to lose themselves reading big words as such that u used, but very nice piece =) =)
Title: Re:Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: @Ss@sSiN on December 09, 2002, 07:06:16 AM
tight ass shit, keep that shit commin
Title: Re:Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: 'Illicit' on December 09, 2002, 07:30:56 AM
Quote
With a Nine Iron or Pitching Wedge, I'll wedge an opening gash in your brain cavity/
Send you 90 million miles to the star in the center of our solar system, now don't you wish you had gravity?//
yo lol this was ill
Title: Re:Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: Reef on December 09, 2002, 08:03:09 AM
burnouts like myself seem to lose themselves reading big words as such that u used, but very nice piece =) =)

lol

Shit was tight.. Vocab was real nice!
Title: Re:Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: Xearo on December 09, 2002, 11:18:54 AM
Thanks for the feedback...

Gareefa...shit man...that what I'm all about...complex vocabulary...

^^
Title: Re:Quick 10 Bars (Feedback)
Post by: Kill on December 09, 2002, 11:56:37 AM
Gareefa...shit man...that what I'm all about...complex vocabulary...
...which is quite obvious. Nice piece man