West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: @Ss@sSiN on December 19, 2002, 06:29:59 AM
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Rules:
Max of 15 bars to a person
3-0 KO
First to 5
crew votes allowed
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Checkin' in
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looks like a good battle
cant wait
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forgot bout this.........
let me bless the lil un first.....
You so bitch ya RETAIN-WATER,in Elite now lets see what the FAME-BOUGHT-YA~//
M's ya teacher but i show the PAIN-IN-SLAUGHTER,i spit FLAMES-LIKE-MORTARS~//
I know my NAME-HAUNTS-YA,ya see MACK-IN-DREAMS this year DA we SLAPPIN-TEAM'S~//
Beatin me?like takin CRACK-FROM-FIEND'S,no easy task specially when i HATCH-A-SCHEME~//
So spread the word im BACK-AN-SUPREME,you jus lightweight warrin wit ASSASIN BOY~//
Elite should fire whoeva got ya ASS-EMPLOYED,thats it it's over this CLASS-IS-VOID~//
M Dizzle fa shizzle.....this where you catch a lizzle....
Teamed wit a NEWBIE-RAPPER.,vets left the kru while witness wonder WHO-AFTER~//
who next ta go,hear my KRU'S-LAUGHTER,swin my sword,proclaimed king the NEW-ARTHUR~//
dont even USE-MY-ALLY,make ya feel like bin laden BRUISED-BY-ALLIES~//
catch my KRU'S-AT-RALLIES,incitin violence you'll lose when BULLETS-TARRY~//
in the hall you a FLOWER-FAMER but outside ya kru you a NO-NAMER~//
and the voters decision like what ya teachin sayin in their report's NO-BRAINER~//
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up
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i forgot about this, i'll srop tonight
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i forgot too checkin' in
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@SS@SSIN
koncept From day one your lines have been labled booty/
Never concerned wit chicks, i think this cat's fruity/
Plus he run around talking hes peoples about suppression/*
Just cuz you a fat cat, you fell into a depression/
Making all those jokes about my rap sheet/
Didn't think i bring murder to this battle? Bitch i pack heat/
Stay driving in the back seat, mdogg wont ever let you drive/
But i heard by rippa if you ask nice, you can give his dick a ride/
Mdogg? i aint got much to say about this babbling fake/
If you was a artist, mental pictures you couldn't create/
Subatomic sedate, and i dont know much more/
Mdogg and koncept, grab some vasoline and grab ya ankles, whore/
* koncept rap's about himself and his people (hes native american)
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you guys posting or what? ???
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I actually posted last night, but it said i wasn't logged in, and I lost my verse. I was tired, so I said fuck it, I'll redo it tomorrow (today)
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Let me introduce who the fuck I am, I'm that Hall of Fame muthaphukken Mexican/
You Hall of Shame so I need not say it again, and that other one is known for fucking men/
Oh shit your secrets out, sorry about that, but don't fuck with eses with loaded gats/
Carry straight gangsta Macks, like we control them and the level they fire at/
Play times over you ain't even waste my time, I should just copied an old rhyme/
Deliever it with all it's shine, at least I'm still biting what's rightfully mine/ (OOHHHHHH)
K.O.ed them don't even need another line, well maybe to teach them to mind/
Trying to diss with flows that stop on a dime, just remember I unLocked Time/
A legendary figure well you get no bigger, You ain't even got a Koncept, so how you figure/
You on an Elite level to be pull a trigger, Assassin, why Mack still digging her/
Damn dogg, this ain't even fun, you over, two gays get in the military now they think they solders/
Leave you bodies missing 'till October, Koncept kick the shit as we get colder/
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Elite coming back, poised to attack//
Mack and his bitch must want it bad//
Hatters getting together is sad like the scooter fad//
We the creators creating hell in a note pad//
The world is in your grasps, but the world is what I have//
Now your not gunna take what’s mine//
So I guess we gudda go line for line//
Gauge doesn’t spit, he swallows//
Birds of a feather flock together, all the haters fallow//
Mack is just another Nas groupie//
I’ma put him in the ER for years like George Clooney//
He thought he knew me, he thought he could rip through me//
Mack says he’s still a virgin even after his asshole was breached//
Gauge is the alter boy and Mack is the catholic priest//
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Dayum, I clicked reset form lol. My vote goes to Mack and Deadly Gauge, but i'm too lazy to re-write my comments on each verse now, so I'll explain later
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aight
mack: nice multis, though some of em didnt rhyme completely ya verse had dope punchlines and all. personals all there.
4/5
deadly: somehow, this wasnt what you prolly intended to write, competing this to your other verses, this was above average but not what ur capable of. a few good lines in it.
3/5
mdogg: this shit was tight, to be honest, no offense this was some of the best shit I've read from you lately. that bitin whats rightfully mine line was off the heezy. nice punchlines and personals.
4.5/5
koncept: dope piece you dropped there. punches, personals, that george clooney shit was funny lol. flow was cool too
4/5
vote: MDogg, Koncept
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aight
mack: nice multis, though some of em didnt rhyme completely ya verse had dope punchlines and all. personals all there.
4/5
deadly: somehow, this wasnt what you prolly intended to write, competing this to your other verses, this was above average but not what ur capable of. a few good lines in it.
3/5
I agree on this, only I'd give Deadly a 3.4/5 and Mack a 4.1/5 which makes the average score a 3.75/5
mdogg: this shit was tight, to be honest, no offense this was some of the best shit I've read from you lately. that bitin whats rightfully mine line was off the heezy. nice punchlines and personals.
4.5/5
koncept: dope piece you dropped there. punches, personals, that george clooney shit was funny lol. flow was cool too
4/5
vote: MDogg, Koncept
I don't really agree on this. The Mack disses (especially the line Illicit mentioned) were nice, but dissin Deadly for allegedly bein gay without includin wordplay or actual facts seemed kinda lame to me. I think M Dogg can do better, he had a nice verse though, but I'd give it a 3.8/5.
Koncept's was pretty short and the first part wasn't that great, he then came with some nice punches and funny lines so he gets a 3.6/5. The average score hence is 3.7/5
so by a very tiny lil Mack and Deadly Gauge take it
VOTE = MACK & DEADLY GAUGE
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mdogg: this shit was tight, to be honest, no offense this was some of the best shit I've read from you lately. that bitin whats rightfully mine line was off the heezy. nice punchlines and personals.
I know... I was like, damn, that's a tight line... lol. It wrote it after the whole Cloud 9 shit, so you could imagion how I felt then. Fuck lyricals, just got harder... lol.
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lol @ M Dogg complimentin himself
naw, that one line was pretty tight fa real
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M-Dogg's verse killed it.......No need 2 review individually.......They got it.
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:cough: dickrider :cough: ::)
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how bout me and a partner take winnaz?
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me me me me meee pick me me
im down dawg.
holla
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me me me me meee pick me me
lol
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what jealeous I asked first? lol
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aight....lol, if their down, we down
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1-1
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up yo.