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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: thisisclassmore on August 23, 2011, 12:43:50 AM

Title: -CLaSsMoRe: I Dominate (see how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's)
Post by: thisisclassmore on August 23, 2011, 12:43:50 AM

See how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's.


https://www.youtube.com/v/htnE0J52nR4&feature=channel_video_title (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=htnE0J52nR4&feature=channel_video_title)

thisisclassmore.com (http://thisisclassmore.com)

Title: Re: -CLaSsMoRe: I Dominate (see how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's)
Post by: Triple OG Rapsodie on August 23, 2011, 12:56:19 AM

It's much better than that crap.

You've definitely got talent. One criticism though is that some lines it feels like you're rhyming words just to create multi-syllable rhymes when they don't always go together. I dig this.

Title: Re: -CLaSsMoRe: I Dominate (see how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's)
Post by: thisisclassmore on August 24, 2011, 09:10:50 PM

Thanks for your feedback man

Title: Re: -CLaSsMoRe: I Dominate (see how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's)
Post by: Jay Bananas on August 25, 2011, 12:03:27 PM

Yeah pretty good dude.

Positive feedback: The sound quality on the vocals is great. Almost no sibilance, popping or clicks, everything is clear, no background noise. You did a really good job mixing those vocals.

Critical feedback: It feels like you almost have too much structure in the way you enunciate everything. Like trying too hard to ride the beat so that your words sound somewhat stilted and the flow is impeded.

Overall though good job, when do we hear more?

Oh and let me know if you need beats and/or mixing.

Title: Re: -CLaSsMoRe: I Dominate (see how you like it compared to Bishop's and Dre's)
Post by: thisisclassmore on August 25, 2011, 03:11:53 PM

Thanks for your feedback as well, I do really appreciate it. I am definitely going to work on those little tweaks that will totally smooth my music out. This is only my second song release, so I will post my first one shortly. I'm currently re-recording it to make it sound studio quality.