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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Sami on November 10, 2011, 11:40:15 PM

Title: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on November 10, 2011, 11:40:15 PM

http://www.limelinx.com/files/ff9ef0c07383b60ea210e83da005ee18 (http://www.limelinx.com/files/ff9ef0c07383b60ea210e83da005ee18)

I whipped it up pretty fast unmixed. I like it, it's sorta horrorcore.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on November 12, 2011, 12:18:30 AM

http://www.limelinx.com/files/c60051d6f00ba41a6028b9e798e56df2 (http://www.limelinx.com/files/c60051d6f00ba41a6028b9e798e56df2)

this one is new, from tonight

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: BOX5 the best poster on this site yell on November 18, 2011, 10:48:37 PM

Damn limelinks I'll peep when I get on the other comp yell

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on November 18, 2011, 11:57:45 PM

Thanks BOX. I appreciate it.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on November 19, 2011, 12:03:56 AM

I made a new track tonight as well.

http://www.limelinx.com/files/3ab0131ef9b134a3602e122dcfa8ba74 (http://www.limelinx.com/files/3ab0131ef9b134a3602e122dcfa8ba74)

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Slee-Z on November 19, 2011, 01:07:58 AM

Are you serious man? It sounds like you composed these with the randomizer tool in FL Studio...

Keep doing it if you enjoy it but maybe keep them to yourself until your skills improve. No offence.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on November 19, 2011, 03:00:40 PM

Thank you for listening. To be honest I know they kinda suck but I feel like I can't improve without feedback.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on November 19, 2011, 08:25:28 PM

I made a new track tonight. Don't sleep, I really tried with this one.

http://www.limelinx.com/files/76a28339e52c68433e99203b5b0ccf56 (http://www.limelinx.com/files/76a28339e52c68433e99203b5b0ccf56)

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: bez on December 02, 2011, 03:53:38 AM

try harder

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on December 02, 2011, 08:42:56 PM

I appreciate the encouragement. I'll keep going.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Triple OG Rapsodie on December 02, 2011, 10:29:44 PM

I feel like you've got potential as far as putting enough elements together. I just haven't heard a melody that I really dig yet. You should keep working on that last one. Maybe replace those high notes with something else.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on December 02, 2011, 11:10:31 PM

Thanks Spice... I'll take a look at it again and try something different.

This is a track I made tonight called "Jazz Funk 8"

http://www.limelinx.com/files/ed91d2eaef8a137fde9b2cb8a8c95910

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on December 03, 2011, 02:15:10 AM

another new one I didn't name

http://www.limelinx.com/files/ea120b2cb846409c824368d46e12b453

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Okka on December 08, 2011, 08:35:07 AM

Quote from: Sami on November 19, 2011, 08:25:28 PM

I made a new track tonight. Don't sleep, I really tried with this one.

http://www.limelinx.com/files/76a28339e52c68433e99203b5b0ccf56 (http://www.limelinx.com/files/76a28339e52c68433e99203b5b0ccf56)

Damn, this is actually soundin dope. You really need to replace the hi-hat and those drums though.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on December 08, 2011, 07:00:41 PM

I fixed it up.

http://www.limelinx.com/files/091a0be49ac99c601a1473bee30faa48

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Triple OG Rapsodie on December 08, 2011, 08:07:13 PM

man just remove all those bells completely, take the bassline and do something else with it.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on December 09, 2011, 01:15:41 AM

http://www.limelinx.com/files/7b879862e09dd6ee3355ea120de8a1d2

I redid the bassline and other stuff.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: G-Funk on December 09, 2011, 04:27:40 PM

Sounds off-key and pretty jumbled up together; my early stuff was exactly like this at that stage. The bass though is starting to sound a lil nice but those keys either need some reworking or removal.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Triple OG Rapsodie on December 09, 2011, 08:05:38 PM

dude the bassline was completely fine as it was. it was the other part you needed to change. Get rid of those keys.

Title: Re: Would anyone be down to spit on this?
Post by: Sami on December 15, 2011, 01:49:26 AM

This is a new track I've made tonight called "Jazz Funk 9".

Please give me feedback, it's all welcome.

http://www.limelinx.com/files/c14bfe9985d95891a17576b8090795e4