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Lifestyle => Train of Thought => Topic started by: 7even on March 29, 2003, 02:29:20 PM

Title: you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 29, 2003, 02:29:20 PM: I don't exist. And nobody notice.

You live dying and die to live

You is not special.
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: TheSheriff on March 29, 2003, 03:56:22 PM: Stop smoking crack.
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Post by: 7even on March 29, 2003, 03:59:34 PM: sorry for bein to deep for this superficial society
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Post by: TheSheriff on March 29, 2003, 04:26:13 PM: Quote from: 7even on March 29, 2003, 03:59:34 PM
sorry for bein to deep for this superficial society

Uh yeah, that's right. It's US who are fucked up, not the guy posting nonsensical messages which waste our time.
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: mauzip on March 29, 2003, 06:39:38 PM: Quote from: 7even on March 29, 2003, 02:29:20 PM
I don't exist. And nobody notice.

You live dying and die to live

You is not special.

i think you should change your avatar
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: KING VerbalAssaulta on March 29, 2003, 10:13:36 PM: Quote from: 7even on March 29, 2003, 02:29:20 PM
I don't exist. And nobody notice.

You live dying and die to live

You is not special.
WTF ??? (http://forum.bodybuilding.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=1222835)
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: Suga Foot on March 29, 2003, 11:01:35 PM: I AM SOMEBODY!
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 02:45:09 AM: maybe I should stop postin stuff like this on Rap Boards.
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Post by: STILLDRE IS THE GODFATHER on March 30, 2003, 02:57:38 AM: Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 02:45:09 AM
maybe I should stop postin stuff like this on Rap Boards.

i like your pics but i dont understand wtf your on about
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 03:01:20 AM: so... maybe I should explain the hell my poem is about?
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Post by: STILLDRE IS THE GODFATHER on March 30, 2003, 03:02:29 AM: Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 03:01:20 AM
so... maybe I should explain the hell my poem is about?

please
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: Kaidy on March 30, 2003, 03:08:55 AM: that poem wasn't exactly complex or profound. i like the basic sentiment but it's somewhat contrived.

you is having the bad grammar to
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Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 03:10:15 AM: I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.
Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.

I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.
ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think. because if they do:
they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.

Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 03:13:03 AM: Quote from: Kaidy on March 30, 2003, 03:08:55 AM
that poem wasn't exactly complex or profound. i like the basic sentiment but it's somewhat contrived.

you is having the bad grammar to

the grammar is intention. i know it means nobody noticeS and you ARE ..
grammar dont matter (i know doesnt is right :D )
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Post by: STILLDRE IS THE GODFATHER on March 30, 2003, 03:14:31 AM: Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 03:10:15 AM
I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.
Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.

I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.
ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think. because if they do:
they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.

Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.

ive started to understand
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Post by: ·SiNiStEr· on March 30, 2003, 09:53:46 AM: you dont have many friends do you...
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Post by: Don Jacob on March 30, 2003, 10:14:06 AM: the only time i could ever think up something like that is if i was high......what's that telling you?
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 11:17:15 AM: Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on March 30, 2003, 09:53:46 AM
you dont have many friends do you...

it's not about that
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: TheSheriff on March 30, 2003, 11:38:48 AM: Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 03:10:15 AM
I dont wanna discourage you, but whatever 1 does it will be insignificant.
Even if you die, of course sum cry and they dont lie if they say you had a good character and they liked you. But in the end, that's insignificant too.

I dont exist. I cant. cause im too deep for a society in which nobody wants to think.
ppl dont like to think. they do all they can not to think. because if they do:
they realize that they are nothing. because they only shine, they dont reflect.

Life is just a long long cruel and painful death.. imagine bein shot and livin and dyin slowly. that's life. Life=Death.

Ridiculous concept. Your actions dictate whether or not you change the world.

Look at FDR, Churchill, Alexander, and...Hitler. You do exist, because society is deeper than artsy poems that have no rhythym or rhyme.
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:11:18 PM: rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.

I can rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this case

dont act like you know what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: TheSheriff on March 30, 2003, 12:13:56 PM: Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:11:18 PM
rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.

I cant rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this case

dont act like you what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call

I just love how you respond to an observation on your poem with a personal insult.

By the way, your crack addiction is becoming yet more obvious.

Also, yes, rhymes can be artificial, but the Masque of Anarchy, the deepest political poem ever written, rhymed. But I guess you're too shit to combine rhymes and content.

Now, if we get back to the concept: ridiculous. For all the reasons already listed.
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:16:07 PM: constructive critic I dont bother. you dont do it though.

--> insult
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:18:54 PM: Quote from: Owen on March 30, 2003, 12:13:56 PM
Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:11:18 PM
rhythm or rhyme doesnt matter shit.

I cant rhyme as tecca nina but I dont have to. Rhymes kill content what kills the expression of feelings in this case

dont act like you what life's or my thoughts are about, where the fuck is the day nursery you should be in right now?? gotta make a call

I just love how you respond to an observation on your poem with a personal insult.

By the way, your crack addiction is becoming yet more obvious.

Also, yes, rhymes can be artificial, but the Masque of Anarchy, the deepest political poem ever written, rhymed.. But I guess you're too shit to combine rhymes and content.

Now, if we get back to the concept: ridiculous. For all the reasons already listed.

do you just combine my poem with the best political poem ever?

thanx. cant be that bad then, huh?
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: Quakaveli on March 30, 2003, 01:22:55 PM: 2 words: YOU SUCK!

;D
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Post by: Agua on March 30, 2003, 03:42:33 PM: dein gedicht erinnert mich partiell an t.s. eliot's the hollow men. bezüglich dem hampelmann über mir brauchst du dir keine gedanken machen. seine einzige waffe ist sein brett vorm kopf.
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Post by: Agua on March 30, 2003, 03:43:38 PM: hey punks, ever heard of free verse?
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Post by: TheSheriff on March 31, 2003, 02:00:40 PM: Quote from: 7even on March 30, 2003, 12:18:54 PM
do you just combine my poem with the best political poem ever?

thanx. cant be that bad then, huh?

No, no I didn't. You claimed rhyme killed meaning; I proved you wrong.
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: TheSheriff on March 31, 2003, 02:01:42 PM: Quote from: Agua on March 30, 2003, 03:43:38 PM
hey punks, ever heard of free verse?

Yes. And I don't like it. A poem MUST HAVE EITHER RHYTHYM OR RHYME. Otherwise, it's just funny looking prose.
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Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on April 05, 2003, 05:17:47 PM: This is the worst poetry ever written in all of mankinds existance...
Title: Re:you is insignificant
Post by: 7even on April 05, 2003, 05:20:53 PM: Quote from: Now_I_Know on April 05, 2003, 05:17:47 PM
This is the worst poetry ever written in all of mankinds existance...

thanks homie

it was btw not finished at that time... I was in a horrible mood