West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Gangstauu on April 11, 2003, 07:01:31 AM
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here are my lyrics
I really need feedback
There was this boy that was fucking high
Fucked up the big boy, kille by a drive-by
1 shot in the head, 2 shots in the chest
His family wished he had a bullet-proof fest
The police said the case was gang-related
Them motherfuckers will be forever hated
The hood want the killer dead, thats revenge
Cribs spelling the name in the c-walk dance
Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
Gangsters aint shootin to stop a nigga they shootin to kill
Look there is the motherfucker (gun shots)
The police is coming quick jump in the car
Yo muthafucka we are ready for war
Now drive the ghetto were they wont come
Even when they call the reforsmance on
We have to get rid of the evidence
Throw it away and drive to my residence
Now this is a block with motherfuckin real gs
That means gangster screamin fuck tha police
Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
On the blocks they think rap is fantastic
That why we made another hood classic
This song is representin the real gangstas
Not the made ones you motherfucking wankstas
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So dont step up to someone you dont know
Or you will get killed fa sho
Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
Chorus: fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
fuck the hood up, and you are dead
They will shoot you, a bullet true your head
i will make a longer version soon
Me and my homie also made a beat for it
I will write & record the longer version soon
need feedback
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it was ok, wouldent really sound dope in audio because theres no real flow to it, but its rhymes and is cool The chorus is wack as fuck tho.
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The chorus goes more slow, it's like a nate dogg part
Thnx BEZ
I need more feedback
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despite it bein a helluva played out topic, shit was aight. post that shit up soon man, like ta hear it
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it was alright, but how i read it, it was too simplistic.
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despite it bein a helluva played out topic, shit was aight. post that shit up soon man, like ta hear it