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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 40oz GRApHire on May 17, 2003, 02:46:50 AM

Title: My First Rhymes.
Post by: 40oz GRApHire on May 17, 2003, 02:46:50 AM

Claiming your blackness but lyrically you are Dickless.
Your a Siccness goes by the name of "Diss". which means "Disrespected", mentality infected. Aint no rumor, its a tumor in your brain, your going mentaly insane, its straight pain. I wont show regret. God blessed my ass, Satan Tested yours, came to the conclusion that you dont need a transfusion. Coz your not worth it? Thats how Ive heard it.

Runnin' from my diss, smelling like dirty SARS piss. Im sounding Crewl? your a fool. I wont respect but I do espect you to snitch, your runnin' like a lil bitch, inch by inch. You wont get too far before my crew, does the fool.

Tell me how you like it.  :)

Title: Re:My First Rhymes.
Post by: 'Illicit' on May 17, 2003, 09:27:04 AM

if thats your first rhyme ever, it wadnt bad, I've seen wacker first timers, keep it comin,  nice avatar, Eiht n CMW's tha shit

Title: Re:My First Rhymes.
Post by: Ignyte on May 18, 2003, 07:54:15 AM

nice first rhyme, the timing was pretty good and it flowed
everyone says but probly make it longer

Title: Re:My First Rhymes.
Post by: TheSheriff on May 24, 2003, 01:08:27 PM

Good for a first time, the talent is there.

Title: Re:My First Rhymes.
Post by: Reef on May 25, 2003, 04:44:24 AM

Quote from: Jeff Davis on May 24, 2003, 01:08:27 PM

Good for a first time, the talent is there.

Title: Re:My First Rhymes.
Post by: Kill on May 25, 2003, 05:42:18 AM

Quote from: Jeff Davis on May 24, 2003, 01:08:27 PM

Good for a first time, the talent is there.

prolly yeah...