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Title: Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(vito won)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 10, 2003, 05:05:56 PM

Allright, Adam's rules:

10 bar min, 15 bar max
first to 5, crew votes allowed but explain all votes
Deadline on thursday

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca
Post by: vitodeluca on June 10, 2003, 09:00:02 PM

Fuck it, I'll spit now...

A little crew bashing....

Vito D Komin' so hard when I spit you'd swear I'm shootin' bricks out my dick, axe adam X as split this kid into wood chips,
hope-adam-X-knew-the lord, voters'll-pack-ouija-boards to de-"cypher" this-when-I-spit, Xplicit's-gettin'-R.I.P. 'd (1)
sound the alarm, it's red alert time, I'll natural -ly rip mack while I kick back and smile,bust nines and techs at-em(adam), X marks the spot on his chest, don't need to get xplicit when I split ya from your toes to ya arm pits,

Comin' "raw" cause I wanna "knock you up"...listen up dumb fuck,

this tale entails rippin' out your entrails, fed ex ya mom's a pale a' your last remains in the mail,
rip a whole-in-ya-back-G and throw-in-battery acid, but this ain't a litmus test dumb ass, and ya sho-can't-pass-it, (2)
it's-tragic how you're so self-important and flows-impotent, hard pressed to come up with somethin'-worth-spurtin',
keep workin on your style cause-it's-worsenin', aww, ass hurtin? One things for certain, dre board's-dispersin'
WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,
 somethin-ain't-right when you ride so much dick you a Veritable-Dick-Knight,U must be on the charitable-tip-right? Cause under my win column your sig'll-fit-right,
Mack's dick must not be getting-too-lonely cause all you in his new crew makin' those nuts standing-room-only
not in your crew but I'll rip you limb from limb, like a anorexic statis-ti-cian your chances-of-winnin' are slim,this-just-in: (3)
I won't pause for applause and me beatin' you with the bloody stump of your arm is the only way you'll "get a hand",
like christopher reeves before he got on-the-pony this is your "last stand", take the mic from his hand, even if you were one-and-only dick on earth ya still wouldn't be the man!

1) Ouija (pronounced wee-gee) boards supposedly can be used to talk to dead people
2) Litmus tests show if something contains acids or bases
3) He's in the verbal "dismemberment" cru

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 11, 2003, 10:58:21 AM

Alright man I'll try my best to drop today... otherwise tomorrow. I'm busy as fuck.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca
Post by: vitodeluca on June 11, 2003, 11:12:11 AM

No worries  bro, and nothing against your crew either, I just had fun playin' with y'alls names,  ;D LOL  

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 11, 2003, 01:05:13 PM

Vito you've lost your "deadly touch" like contra fighters with arthritis/ Coming at me with weak shit...looking like you lost your slaughter license/ (1)
 Pussy... I harm vaginas and I know this whore's coordinates/ A solo vocalist with more potent opiates than your dope associates/ (2)
You beat Nat once...should've savored it staying on the shore harmonious/ I'm still posting glorious... with more warheads than the former soviets/ (3)
Vitodeluca is in deep shit...upside down...i think it's time to swallow excrement./ (4)
 I let you flow awhile so you might've seemed cool to degenerates and special problem residents/ And like a kid with speech impediments... you k-kinda t-talk repetitive/ (5)
 Watch X the specialist eat competition...I relish this/ Supreme damages battlers... challengers and managers with recklessness/ (6)
I'm horror's gory genesis... yet you stand there with that bloody gash across your wrist/ (7)
64 000 bells alarming kids...that's one for every dick you've gone and kissed/ With a 6-inch average... that's over one mile of flesh that's touched your lips./ (8)
Scream when you've had enough punishment/ after this I'm runnin shit// (9)



2 can play it this game/ Watch as  i'm 'bout break down his name

{V}
Vets
{I}
I intersect/ individuals & intoxicants I interject
{T}
The treacherous text/ that this testicle's tryin to test
{O}
Owns this onset

{D}
Deluca denotes disgraceful desperation
{I}
I interpret impossibly intense iterations/ intents in implementing injurious incineration's/
{E}
enter & encounter emcees, eradicating eager enemies/
{S}
spittin' supreme sentences, stanzas & super similes/


{N}
Now I'm never nearby novicery, not nearly
{O}
over
{W}
willingly

Homie your strategy, had to be a tragedy/ Cause this mastery is shattering your anatomy with lethal word galleries/ (10)
Sad to see that you dying in this battle was your only form of flattery//(11)


EDIT: There you go... I numbered the bars.. It's 11 without counting what i did with your name.. It's not as if my verse is much longer than yours... They're about the same length.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 11, 2003, 02:43:03 PM

Ummm, aren't you the one that wanted a 15 bar max?  Cause yours is like 20 bars not countin' the thing ya did with my name ???  Anyways, votin' time y'all

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: Black Pack on June 11, 2003, 02:45:36 PM

I'll have to give this to Adam, Vito came with a good verse and tight disses but Adams verse was more original. That rhyming of the name part was very dope...Adams verse had a tight flow and nice punches as well. Good battle


Vote= AdamX

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: ·SiNiStEr· on June 11, 2003, 03:58:36 PM

Adam.. that aint 15 bars.. and thats a clever way to battle but there is no real definite bar limit.. i dunno what to do. and kru votes allowed?

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 11, 2003, 04:05:30 PM

Yeah, crew votes are allowed, and he's the one that suggested a 15 bar limit, not me, it's cool tho, I think voters will take that into account.  Just vote fairly Sin (not that I gotta tell ya that).

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 11, 2003, 04:27:23 PM

I numbered the bars... Like I said, my verse is pretty much the same length as yours... 1-0 Keep voting

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: abstruse on June 11, 2003, 04:35:06 PM

Vitodeluca - Very good flow, and nice wordplay.  The multi's were on point and so were the punches. Kinda liked the fact that you used less explanations and sticked more to relevant subjects ;). Fav line
"hope-adam-X-knew-the lord, voters'll-pack-ouija-boards to de-"cypher" this-when-I-spit, Xplicit's-gettin'-R.I.P. 'd"
Overall - 4.25/5

Adam X - The vocab in your verse was nice.  You came with hard hittin punches also.  Beside you breaking down his name, your verse lacked wordplay. Sometimes it was hard to depict the flow on the verse also. Don't really know what happenned to the 15 bar max either. Fav line
"Vitodeluca is in deep shit...upside down...i think it's time to swallow excrement./ I let you flow awhile so you might've seemed cool to degenerates and special problem residents/ And like a kid with speech impediments... you k-kinda t-talk repetitive/"
Overall - 3.8/5

Vote - Vitodeluca

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: ill natural on June 11, 2003, 04:44:44 PM

Vito- Tight verse man, good disses and punches and i like how played around with our names. dope

Adam- I've seen better from you homie.. It was dope but whatever ive seen from you in the past has been much doper. But that breaking down his name shit was maaad creative... That was dopeness and what gives you the battle.

vote- adam

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 11, 2003, 05:11:48 PM

Allright, 2-1, Adam's winnin'..for the record I don't care about this whole "how many bars" argument, his verse is fine as far as I'm concerned.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: Tasa on June 11, 2003, 05:29:43 PM

difficult to judge you brough heat! both verses had good flows and their strong lines. some recycled/overused lines though.

Vitodeluca best lines:
"WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,"

you had a good opening and a pretty solid verse throughout. Ill punches too 4/5

Adam best lines:
Easily that "VITO DIES NOW" part of the verse, that was some clever rhyming. Again a solid verse throughout though a slightly tricky flow for which i had to read your verse twice. I like your opening line and think your disses were slightly more to the point and that name rhyming sequence was really dope. 4.25/5

vote- adamx

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: ·SiNiStEr· on June 11, 2003, 06:47:49 PM

aight.. this battle was hot

Vito - Damn boy you keep droppin better shit each time.. I seen some mad wordplay in ya verse and it was damn creative. Creativity and content is what i look for in a verse, ya flow was off the hook too and ya didnt get lost in multis. Damn kid.. you hot right now.

Fav. Line -
WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,
somethin-ain't-right when you ride so much dick you a Veritable-Dick-Knight,U must be on the charitable-tip-right? Cause under my win column your sig'll-fit-right

AdamX - Tight verse man.. I like your flow. This battle makes me feel like a newbie haha but its cool. Anyway, nice metas and you have a damn complex vocabulary. Only thing that i didnt like was one part ya lost the flow. That Vito dies now is kinda played out and if I would do that sorta wordplay i woulda done a different phrase than 'vito dies now' but still a hot verse.

Fav. Line -
Vito you've lost your "deadly touch" like contra fighters with arthritis/ Coming at me with weak shit...looking like you lost your slaughter license/
Pussy... I harm vaginas and I know this whore's coordinates/ A solo vocalist with more potent opiates than your dope associates/

Numbaz..

Vito - 4.55 / 5
AdamX - 4.45 / 5

I gave this to Vito cuz he used some more keystyle elements with the multis.. yall had the same amount of metas but Adam only used 2 or 3 bar punches and the words he was usin were deep in vocabulary but sorta easy to rhyme. The played out 'vito dies now' was probably the deciding factor, Adam if you incorporate some of the more keystyle elements you would have taken this one easy.. i know that aint your style but thats what i base my votes on and ive been voter of the month for a while now so your choice.
Dont get me wrong.. yall can say d/r vote but this was the hardest battle ive ever voted on fo real.. Adam and Vito both showin some mad potential.. yall scarin me lol.

Vote - VitoDeLuca

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 11, 2003, 07:04:29 PM

Yo Sin, thanks for the vote, your shit is well explained so I don't think anyone questions the validity of it.  This is a tight battle, 3-2 in favor of Adam right now, shit, I mighta thought more about my verse if I knew what kinda heat this kid had on deck, lol.  

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 12, 2003, 06:05:57 AM

That's 3-2, Thanks for the votes yall... hot battle Vito

EDIT: keep the votes comin'

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: ThreeSixty on June 12, 2003, 10:17:54 AM

tight battle, theres some nice battling going on here.

Vitodeluca: dope verse, good use of multis and fun to read. dope flow and some good punches in there. but there was some overused concepts in your verse. for example : "I won't pause for applause and me beatin' you with the bloody stump of your arm is the only way you'll "get a hand" Thats an overused line and quite easy to think of, another onbe like christopher reeves before he got on-the-pony this is your "last stand", . You also had creative parts in your verse like that crew bashing and your ending line. Overall a very solid verse

Best lines:
WCC's the next dimension and if flow was dough you couldn't "pay attention", treat you like a mule that stumbled into an ass kickin' convention,

it's-tragic how you're so self-important and flows-impotent, hard pressed to come up with somethin'-worth-spurtin',
keep workin on your style cause-it's-worsenin', aww, ass hurtin? One things for certain, dre board's-dispersin'

4.4/5

AdamX: you had a nice use of your vocab and your verse flowed fine to me. Tight punches as well and i like the way you broke down his name. nice imagery as well.
best lines:

"Vito you've lost your "deadly touch" like contra fighters with arthritis/ Coming at me with weak shit...looking like you lost your slaughter license/"

and that part where you broke down his name was quite original.
4.55/5

Vote- AdamX

Because of more originilaty and creativity in his verse, better vocab as well even though Vitodeluca had a better use of multis Adam gets my vote (very close as you can see)

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: M Dogg™ on June 12, 2003, 03:49:01 PM

This battle was cool to read. I haven't read much of the newer peoples verses, but I know that if these emcees keep spitting, that the Hall of Fame vote in 5 months well be inducting a lot of great emcees for sure. Anyways, my vote.

We'll start with Vito, homie came out with great wordplay, and he was able to attack well showiing his skillz. With every boost, he was able to show me what he was talking about, and every diss was cleaver.

Then came Adam X, who had a good verse. The only problem is that he called Vito's verse weak, but was not able to show me the word play, and metaphors that would prove me wrong. Homie, when you say someone is wack, it is better to say some shit like, you a weak as Popeye withone spinach or some shit, not just your shit was wack. Gotta show skill.

For this, my vote goes to Vato, his verse was more definded, and showed the skillz to why I should vote for him.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 12, 2003, 05:33:51 PM

Ayight, thanks Lost Angel, so 4-3, tight battle keeps goin'...

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: T.J. on June 14, 2003, 04:07:51 AM

this battle is so obviously corrupt...... all the votes for adamx were from newbies or crew members.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 14, 2003, 04:20:47 AM

Nigga please, Ill Nat is the crew member... Lost Angel and Sinister are Vitos crew members as well. Fuck the newbei votes if you want to... That makes this battle 1-1. Corrupt my fucking dick...

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: T.J. on June 14, 2003, 04:22:34 AM

i just found it funny how people who never voted before jumped outta the bushes and voted for you.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 14, 2003, 04:30:28 AM

So you're saying i make up aliases and vote for myself? I don't know these cats... I don't know how many other battles they voted for and I don't give a fuck. I ain't a cat whose gonna make up aliases to get votes homie...

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: AdamX aka Xplicit on June 14, 2003, 04:32:37 AM

And if you click on their names and previos posts you'll see they've all votes on other battles... I guess they're aliases of whoever they voted for in other battles huh nigger?

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: ThreeSixty on June 14, 2003, 07:22:44 AM

i aint anyone alias dawg- like u said im new. i voted on all the active battles the one day i did post and this was one of them.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 15, 2003, 11:14:43 AM

Let's not forget we still need votes in here, it's 4-3, I'm cool with the score, just a couple more will do it y'all.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: TheSheriff on June 15, 2003, 05:35:17 PM

a) TJ never accused you of using aliases. He merely pointed that you had crew votes...He should have mentioned Vito did too.

b)

Adam X - You've taken your dislike of explanations to a strange opposite. You'll find I'm in your camp here. I rate on flow and meaning, not multis and shit that doesn't come off the tongue. You didn't stick to what you're best at. 3/5

Vitodeluca - If that's a weak verse from you, I don't wanna see you when you drop a dime. It was a very good one, excellent flow and rhyme quality, and showed the talent you have. 4/5

VOTE=Vitodeluca, who don't make me puke...uh

A very good battle.

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 16, 2003, 05:30:55 PM

Quote from: Inspector Owen on June 15, 2003, 05:35:17 PM

VOTE=Vitodeluca, who don't make me puke...uh

A very good battle.

LMAO owen, that took me a sec.  Anyways, 4-4 scores tied.  One more either way, oh the suspense!

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(verses up)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 19, 2003, 12:57:56 PM

Votes needed guys...

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(votes needed)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 24, 2003, 03:54:28 PM

VOTES!!!

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(votes needed)
Post by: Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::.. on June 24, 2003, 06:53:14 PM

Vito - ur verse was tight, i liked it a lot...good meta's. multis's and i really felt ur flow mang...good shit...good keystyle elements fo sho...the name disses were tight tho, real good.

Fav Line - this tale entails rippin' out your entrails, fed ex ya mom's a pale a' your last remains in the mail

tight shit man

Adam - Ur shit was also tight man...i liked that VITO thing at the end...good shit...all around good verse but i jsut didnt feel the flow as much

Fav Line - 64 000 bells alarming kids...that's one for every dick you've gone and kissed/ With a 6-inch average... that's over one mile of flesh that's touched your lips./

tight battle man fuck it was hard

Vote = Vito

Title: Re:Adam X aka Xplicit vs. Vitodeluca(votes needed)
Post by: vitodeluca on June 25, 2003, 11:00:22 AM

Thanks prophecy, damn, this shit's finally over!  Good battle, tightest one I've been in yet.  Peace Adam X...