West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: M Dogg™ on June 13, 2003, 12:47:58 AM
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Alright, this is the first round of the WCC Cup. The winner stays, the loser can go home. But there is a wild card spot, so maybe the loser can return, we'll see. But you'll go against a Hall of Famer in TimeLock, so good luck with that. Rules...
bar max - 10 (I ain't reading over 160 bars to judge, trust me, go over and get DQed, sorry)
Due by Tuesday, June 17, 2003
I judge, but if you think that I was unfair, you can ask for a 2nd opinion, and I'll get another vet to make the call. After all, I'm judging 16 verses at once, kind of hard. So good luck.
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checkin in..
10 barz will do.. i should have mine up sunday or monday.. PZ.. and does someone have to drop before the other? it is alot easier to go second.. maybe another reason why we should have seeded brackets.. but whatever is coo wit me.. ima hop on that verse.
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Checking In...
.....Room for 1, thanks!
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Mannn fuck this.. Ill be a man and drop first..
..Let's bounce..
~Only way you put ya "balls to the wall" is when I stake-up-ya-testicles, like cold tits you come soft but with a point but ill break-up-ya-chesticles//
~A SiNiStEr win from this battle came straight from the horse's mouth, took ya girl out and whore's mouth straight took the course south//
~Bez came "half cocked" like viagra and impotency.. my flows will come hard till they hit the bottom like niagra-efficiency//
~Bez was a vet till he encountered my lyrikal smallpox, Sin came on the scene.. tore some cats up, vets reversed, now you takin my shots!// (yall know vets)
~7000 posts and ya still-no-vet, im ill-no-less, attended ya wake, they said death.. but I knew ya took a pill-for-rest, my shots will fill-tha-best//
~We are all a sideshow.. Its just that I breath fire, arsonist of words, you the suicidal keystyler who chokes when hes swallowin-swords, I stalk mass bitches like followin-fords//
~Its not funny the way ya bad jokes never cease-to-exist, ya flows "imcomprehendable" like baby beesh-wit-a-lisp, could you plead-the-fifth?//[1]
~Say please-fa-these-fists.. You "flirtin with danger", droppin N-bombs behind the curtain.. only reason ya spit that shit online is cuz ya too scared to say it in person!//
~My punches are like bad fruitcake they'll go-right-through-ya.. fuck personals.. maybe a decent flow-might-do-ya..//
~Betta than takin a hit of oxycontin from tonight's-hukah, Im so-tight-to-ya,Im digital yo-despite-tha-computah, SiNiStEr juked left but we all know he flowed-right.. (oooooh).. fooled-ya//[2]
[1] - Baby Beesh is a rapper down here.. i dunno if yall heard him but he kinda has a weird voice.. and with a lisp.. yall get that.
[2] - Hukah is a type of multi person bong.
k.. im done.. lets see it bezzy boy
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Oh shit.....someone that actually knows who baby beesh is.....Where U from sin?
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San Antonio.. he's pretty popular down here at local hip-hop radio stations.. Suga Suga is gettin played alot.. but its a pretty tight song so.. he's always been in and out of the spotlight down here.. he did a few concerts too.
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You jealous of my shit, thats why you can't understand my rhymin, You be crying sayin your researchin my verses, but no results you findin//
Got losses to Kali, Illicit, Xearo, TimeLock, Tone and R~A, add Bez to that list as the last cos I'm servin you like an overheard smash//
I do admit that your shits seem natural an certainly alarmin, but I put the G in geological so fuck that old man Darwin//
Call me white, call me Brit, I got this verse for protection, I'm the one and only origin of species by means of natural selection//(1)
How can you even skit my country when you speak my language, You ain't no Vet Among Vets to my your below average//
Battle record 11-6, make it 11-7, or maybe 7-11 cos you belong in the gUtTa, keepin the isles tidy seperating the margarine from butter//
I'm the professor of biology that can now relax cos I've finished ya, Seems like game-set-match I've saved the ecology from the kiddy feelin minister//
I'm switching your letters, removing the i then n, makin sister out your name and pullin down that skirt you in//
Stick to playing tennis cos stud its over, bet you a little girl on the court just like kourvicova//
So listen here sister I have and will write all my own shit so go figure, oh one more thing, dam man I forgot to say nigga, nigga!//
1) Book that was wrote by Darwin
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lol i figured you would drop somethin similar to that.. make all ya punches based on my appearance.. (av.. sig.. aim). But you the first to make fun of my username.. gUtTa.. i didnt make it.. kali signed me up on this site and he did all that sorta stuff. Anyway, good battle.. M-Dogg hop on this.. im thinkin hes gonna vote it all on the deadline but w.e is cool.
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lol i figured you would drop somethin similar to that.. make all ya punches based on my appearance.. (av.. sig.. aim). But you the first to make fun of my username.. gUtTa.. i didnt make it.. kali signed me up on this site and he did all that sorta stuff. Anyway, good battle.. M-Dogg hop on this.. im thinkin hes gonna vote it all on the deadline but w.e is cool.
all you do is bitch. Everything you say is a complaint or excuse. Your verse had hardly no disses to me what so ever and shit that didnt even make sense. Lyrical smallpox and all this shit. Keep your mouth shut for a change. Both verses where good, no need to start bitchin about it.
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fuck u know what Bez....i think u spoke for us all with that.
peace......one
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checkin in..
10 barz will do.. i should have mine up sunday or monday.. PZ.. and does someone have to drop before the other? it is alot easier to go second.. maybe another reason why we should have seeded brackets.. but whatever is coo wit me.. ima hop on that verse.
all this crying and shit man, but I wanna go second wahhhhhhhhhhhhh. Such a big girl. At least my verse made perfect sense lad.
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newbies.. you lucky an ocean separates us you faggot.. its real cool.. i dont even complain.. i offer alternate choices.. you the biggest, weakest prick on this board.. and my verse has nuthin against you? man fuck yall.. prophecy what the fuck you been here for 2 weeks.. all i do on these boards is vote for yalls shit.. and then i get hated on.. fuck yall fucken newbies ill own yall all AT KEYSTYLE which is the only fucken reason im here you fuckin wigger. God damn bez you all mouth online but i would fuck your ass up if you were right in front of me.. ill just let some people say what they gotta say..
feedback please on these verses.. let us know what yall think
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all this shit talkin and all this 'nigga' talk comin from this kid
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bitch you lucky i dont rip off ya nike jumpsuit and beat the fuck out of you.. if i saw you on the street i'd woop ya ass just for bein so ugly.. but i aint gonna make threats..this is an internet forum and we are in keystyle battle board and i own yall fucken asses via this shit so im cool.. i'll be sure not to vote on anyone's shit anymore..
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yo i agree wit sin yo..some of yall actin like bitches these dayz...lol@ sin sonnin bez tho...i aint even talkin bout the verses{aint read um yet} but that pic shit was hilarious...
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Thats what seperates us lad. U r saying you wud fuck me up but its all bullshit to me kid. For a start I don't know you in person, and I dont think I want to know you in person. You are saying newbies this newbies that, I have been droppin keystyles and the odd battles verse for longer than I can remember and you are obviously a little kid saying shit over the Internet.
Truth is if you saw me in the street you wouldent fuck me up at all because you would proberly be scared and you proberly wouldent be able to. Hell yer thats me sitting down on that picture. So what? Thats the same guy that gets a girl everytime he goes out, thats the guy who has so many friends I have a hall booked out for my 18th that holds over 200 people. You know what I mean, dont be starting shit mate because I have been thru all this I am harder than you over the Internet shit before with NIK and other peeps and to be honest it don't get ya n e where.
You ain't gettin hated on at all lad your bringing shit on yourself "and i own yall fucken asses via this shit so im cool", whats that about. Your battle record is 11-6 so its quite obvious that you OWN nobody. Instead of coming on and reading my verse and postig up "Yo bez that was a nice verse mate, good luck" you come on posting excuses and shit, excuses before the battle has even been judged.
This is what I mean by bullshit mate, you are the defenition of bullshit. Your verse didn't diss me in one bit, you care to much about what I am spitting instead of concentrating on yourself, and you think your the don. You aint the don of shit, you said you are white yourself so why u got a problem if I say nigga. lol. Foolish. I basically said it in my rhyme to piss you off, look at you getting all stressed behind your computer screen because I used a bad word, lol your a joke lad. Just chill out.
Why you think I keep that picture of me online. Because I am proud of myself, I am proud of how I look, how I am, who I am....I am me lad and you know what thats the greatest feeling in the world when you can be proud of who and how you are and know that you got a great future ahead of you. Your sad enough to be getting my pic URL and shit and posting it up, get a hobby man, maybe work on ya keystyles a bit. Lets see your pic lad.....
You need to look in the mirror lad, check yourself. I am gravy about how I am, what about you? Sure there ain't no jealousy in there or sumit. Can't believe I have typed all of this just because of a keystyle battle, lol. But really you need to stop wining about stuff and just let it be. You ain't gunna fuck n e 1 up lad and I aint even about to start talking all that I'm harder than you bullshit.
The truth has been spoken...
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be calm guys
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You jealous of my shit, thats why you can't understand my rhymin, You be crying sayin your researchin my verses, but no results you findin//
Got losses to Kali, Illicit, Xearo, TimeLock, Tone and R~A, add Bez to that list as the last cos I'm servin you like an overheard smash//
I do admit that your shits seem natural an certainly alarmin, but I put the G in geological so fuck that old man Darwin//
Call me white, call me Brit, I got this verse for protection, I'm the one and only origin of species by means of natural selection//(1)
How can you even skit my country when you speak my language, You ain't no Vet Among Vets to my your below average//
Battle record 11-6, make it 11-7, or maybe 7-11 cos you belong in the gUtTa, keepin the isles tidy seperating the margarine from butter//
I'm the professor of biology that can now relax cos I've finished ya, Seems like game-set-match I've saved the ecology from the kiddy feelin minister//
I'm switching your letters, removing the i then n, makin sister out your name and pullin down that skirt you in//
Stick to playing tennis cos stud its over, bet you a little girl on the court just like kourvicova//
So listen here sister I have and will write all my own shit so go figure, oh one more thing, dam man I forgot to say nigga, nigga!//
1) Book that was wrote by Darwin
How long have you been writting because i see no multis no wordplay ... if i'm not mistaken no punches and some weak disses
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i expected better from sin. to
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You jealous of my shit, thats why you can't understand my rhymin, You be crying sayin your researchin my verses, but no results you findin//
Got losses to Kali, Illicit, Xearo, TimeLock, Tone and R~A, add Bez to that list as the last cos I'm servin you like an overheard smash//
I do admit that your shits seem natural an certainly alarmin, but I put the G in geological so fuck that old man Darwin//
Call me white, call me Brit, I got this verse for protection, I'm the one and only origin of species by means of natural selection//(1)
How can you even skit my country when you speak my language, You ain't no Vet Among Vets to my your below average//
Battle record 11-6, make it 11-7, or maybe 7-11 cos you belong in the gUtTa, keepin the isles tidy seperating the margarine from butter//
I'm the professor of biology that can now relax cos I've finished ya, Seems like game-set-match I've saved the ecology from the kiddy feelin minister//
I'm switching your letters, removing the i then n, makin sister out your name and pullin down that skirt you in//
Stick to playing tennis cos stud its over, bet you a little girl on the court just like kourvicova//
So listen here sister I have and will write all my own shit so go figure, oh one more thing, dam man I forgot to say nigga, nigga!//
1) Book that was wrote by Darwin
How long have you been writting because i see no multis no wordplay ... if i'm not mistaken no punches and some weak disses
What u mean no wordplay, as far as multis and shit goes I dont think that shit helps to make a verse better. Read my verse the flow is dope, the punches are to him and about him. His verse had nottin on me at all. I hardly battle at all. I wud say I have droppeda around 5 battle verse b4.
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I thought both verses were alright, but in my opinion Bez's was better cause he actually did diss Sinister whereas Sinister's verse could have been talking about anybody. I thought the main problem with Bez's was all that listing the names of the people and Sinister's battle record figures cause that sort of fucked up the flow of it a bit, but overall it was tight.
Yo Bez, whats up with your ginger friend on the right? And the Liverpool fan looks like his shirt is like three sizes to small or some shit.
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I thought both verses were alright, but in my opinion Bez's was better cause he actually did diss Sinister whereas Sinister's verse could have been talking about anybody. I thought the main problem with Bez's was all that listing the names of the people and Sinister's battle record figures cause that sort of fucked up the flow of it a bit, but overall it was tight.
Yo Bez, whats up with your ginger friend on the right? And the Liverpool fan looks like his shirt is like three sizes to small or some shit.
I aint here to explain my pic dawg
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Thats what seperates us lad. U r saying you wud fuck me up but its all bullshit to me kid. For a start I don't know you in person, and I dont think I want to know you in person. You are saying newbies this newbies that, I have been droppin keystyles and the odd battles verse for longer than I can remember and you are obviously a little kid saying shit over the Internet.
Truth is if you saw me in the street you wouldent fuck me up at all because you would proberly be scared and you proberly wouldent be able to. Hell yer thats me sitting down on that picture. So what? Thats the same guy that gets a girl everytime he goes out, thats the guy who has so many friends I have a hall booked out for my 18th that holds over 200 people. You know what I mean, dont be starting shit mate because I have been thru all this I am harder than you over the Internet shit before with NIK and other peeps and to be honest it don't get ya n e where.
You ain't gettin hated on at all lad your bringing shit on yourself "and i own yall fucken asses via this shit so im cool", whats that about. Your battle record is 11-6 so its quite obvious that you OWN nobody. Instead of coming on and reading my verse and postig up "Yo bez that was a nice verse mate, good luck" you come on posting excuses and shit, excuses before the battle has even been judged.
This is what I mean by bullshit mate, you are the defenition of bullshit. Your verse didn't diss me in one bit, you care to much about what I am spitting instead of concentrating on yourself, and you think your the don. You aint the don of shit, you said you are white yourself so why u got a problem if I say nigga. lol. Foolish. I basically said it in my rhyme to piss you off, look at you getting all stressed behind your computer screen because I used a bad word, lol your a joke lad. Just chill out.
Why you think I keep that picture of me online. Because I am proud of myself, I am proud of how I look, how I am, who I am....I am me lad and you know what thats the greatest feeling in the world when you can be proud of who and how you are and know that you got a great future ahead of you. Your sad enough to be getting my pic URL and shit and posting it up, get a hobby man, maybe work on ya keystyles a bit. Lets see your pic lad.....
You need to look in the mirror lad, check yourself. I am gravy about how I am, what about you? Sure there ain't no jealousy in there or sumit. Can't believe I have typed all of this just because of a keystyle battle, lol. But really you need to stop wining about stuff and just let it be. You ain't gunna fuck n e 1 up lad and I aint even about to start talking all that I'm harder than you bullshit.
The truth has been spoken...
bez i dont even bitch that much man.. you blowin all that out of proportion when i look at it..
and quit callin me lad..
and i doubt you get girls every time you go out.. come down to san antonio.. see how many girls you get..
i would post my homecoming pic but my school's website canceled pics from 2 years ago and i dont have a digital camera so i dunno what you want me to do..
im not here to beef with ya..
my verse did diss you.. i write out of shitload of shit with my metas and shit before i put it together.. some are general.. some are personals.. i take the best from each.. this battle didnt have that many personals but damn man.. i used alot more 'keystyle elements'.. as i call 'em.. and thats what i look for in a verse.. may not be audio ready.. but this is KEYSTYLE.. so im gonna go by the guidebook and all the vets use the same style.
and plz dont brag about how good you look.. im glad your happy with your image.. thats you and thats what you like and im happy for ya.. but dont go braggin to me cuz im honestly more lady-oriented.. (nah mean) and if i can get a pic up i will..
and i will fuck you up if you talked all that shit in front of me for no god damn reason just to start beefin.. i would end that real quick..
lol.. i may brag in my verses.. but i could care less about being 'a don'.. i just keystyle to stimulate my mind.. you see cuz i dont drop many keystyles that im here just to speak my mind, im here to battle and i do this as a hobby..
enough chattin.. you wanna beef.. feel free but i aint gonna argue on the internet.. good battle..
ps. read my verse slowly and tell me its a broad verse.. it is general.. i admit.. but i told you my writing style and there are still personals in there..
im done.. pz
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SO you have just wrote exactly what I said in more detail. I aint even argueing with you cos it could go on forever, if your gunna be foolish about stuff then just don't speak to me lad.
Goodnite and god bless
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i see.
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bez i dont even bitch that much man.. you blowin all that out of proportion when i look at it..
and quit callin me lad..
and i doubt you get girls every time you go out.. come down to san antonio.. see how many girls you get..
i would post my homecoming pic but my school's website canceled pics from 2 years ago and i dont have a digital camera so i dunno what you want me to do..
im not here to beef with ya..
my verse did diss you.. i write out of shitload of shit with my metas and shit before i put it together.. some are general.. some are personals.. i take the best from each.. this battle didnt have that many personals but damn man.. i used alot more 'keystyle elements'.. as i call 'em.. and thats what i look for in a verse.. may not be audio ready.. but this is KEYSTYLE.. so im gonna go by the guidebook and all the vets use the same style.
and plz dont brag about how good you look.. im glad your happy with your image.. thats you and thats what you like and im happy for ya.. but dont go braggin to me cuz im honestly more lady-oriented.. (nah mean) and if i can get a pic up i will..
and i will fuck you up if you talked all that shit in front of me for no god damn reason just to start beefin.. i would end that real quick..
lol.. i may brag in my verses.. but i could care less about being 'a don'.. i just keystyle to stimulate my mind.. you see cuz i dont drop many keystyles that im here just to speak my mind, im here to battle and i do this as a hobby..
enough chattin.. you wanna beef.. feel free but i aint gonna argue on the internet.. good battle..
ps. read my verse slowly and tell me its a broad verse.. it is general.. i admit.. but i told you my writing style and there are still personals in there..
im done.. pz
nar you know waht I aint even finished. I dont wanna argue with ya but I aint settling for the shit you have just posted, its not fair to me and who I am.
This is what I mean by talking shit lad, I doubt you get girls everytime you go out come to san antonio and see how many girls you get. LOL. Your making a complete fools outter yourself. I never lie mate and I am not lying when I say that everytime I go out I pull a girl. I think there has only ever been 1 or 2 times in my life when I have gone out into town with my friends and not pulled a girl. In fact I hate going out and not pulling a girl so thats why I try to pull and nearly all of the time I do. I had a party on sat nite mate, pulled 2 girls, went out for me mates b'day in like feb and pulled 4. I aint braggin about shit mate but just lettin you know the facts and shit.
Saying come to San Antonio and see how many girls you pull is one of the dumbest comments I have ever heard because why wud I want to go to san antonio for a start when if I want girls all I need to do is go into Liverpool. So your asking me to jump on a plane and fly to san antonio and see how many girls I get?????. DUMB!
"Some are general.. some are personals.. i take the best from each.. this battle didnt have that many personals but damn man.. i used alot more 'keystyle elements'.. as i call 'em.. and thats what i look for in a verse.. may not be audio ready.. but this is KEYSTYLE.. so im gonna go by the guidebook and all the vets use the same style."
Right now for a start I dont understand how you can be a vet when your battle record is like 11-6. Does this mean I am vet to when my battle record is like 0-2 or sumit???
Keystyle elements, what are you talking about. Are you talking about the way you made words up by putting - and little swirly things in between words. If thats what a keystyle battle is about then its certain 1 of the dumbest things I have ever seen in my life. How can a verse be a good verse if it doesnt seem to make sense. Your verse good man make no doubt but I just dont see how it was a good hard diss to me. End of the day I think actually you know that it wasn't a good battle verse and thats why you posted up my pic to try and save yourself. Sure sum ppl got a few laughs outter if but at the end of the day I let me verse do the talking for me.
"and plz dont brag about how good you look.. im glad your happy with your image.. thats you and thats what you like and im happy for ya.. but dont go braggin to me cuz im honestly more lady-oriented.. (nah mean) and if i can get a pic up i will.. "
I never bragged about my image. You posted up my picture so it was only right that I defended myself. You posted up my picture trying to get ppl to have a quick laugh at it and shit but I simple replied saying that I dont mind that picture. Why do you think I leave it on the Internet, cos I am proud of myself. You reply saying you like laides, look lad I never question wheather you where gay or not so I don't know where that came from.
"and i will fuck you up if you talked all that shit in front of me for no god damn reason just to start beefin.. i would end that real quick.."
You said before that you are in school so its obvious that your still a kid and even if you ain;t its obvious that you still act like one. When I was in school mate I along with everyone else in my year use to think I was the shit. I was the hardest lad walking round school in my own eyes but when ya grow up a bit you reach that stage where you just go fuck it I am me and thats it. Saying you wud fuck me up is dumb as fuck because nobody has ever messed with me b4 in my life, I dunno wheather its because I am big or because I am just not 1 to be fucked with but believe me lad you wouldent fuck n e 1 up but yourself. I am 6'1 lad, weight about 10 stone, but I dont need to start gettin into all that shit because deep deep down I know how hard ppl can seem from behind a computer screen and I think you know it too. Everyone's a Tyson in the safety of their home and behind their computer aint they?
And I don't get what you mean by you talk that shit in front of me for no reason just to start beefin. Just look through the thread lad, its been nothing but excuses and complaints from you all along, you had shit coming to you from the second you dropped your verse. Asking for seeds so people can drop second because going second is easier and shit, you need to just let shit be and believe me I wouldent say shit to your face just to start beef because I am not that kind of person I am a person that would proberly ask you if you had a problem or sumit. SO once again your wrong right there.
"enough chattin.. you wanna beef.. feel free but i aint gonna argue on the internet.. good battle..
ps. read my verse slowly and tell me its a broad verse.. it is general.. i admit.. but i told you my writing style and there are still personals in there..
im done.. pz"
I never wanted beef mate because like I said manytimes through this saga its over the Internet. You said you aint gunna argue on the internet, what you think we have been doing for the past 2 pages??????. Finally you say good battle, if you wudda said that straight after I posted my verse up instead of saying "Oh I knew you was going to post that" and all this then none of this wudda happened. But of course you NOW say good battle, now after you have tried to make dig yourself up and outter your grave.
I dont need to read your verse slow, why shud I have to sit and read your verse slow, I shud be able to sit and read it as if it was flowing to a tune and I shud be able to understand who its getting at and shit. You said "there are still personals in there.." but where Sin? I cant really find em. No doubt it was a good verse but as you have said yourself it was a bit general.
Now thats yet again nothing but the truth. I hope other peeps are reading all this and actually agreeing with me because I know I am right about what I am saying. Simple as!
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Good for you!
You know what.. I didnt read one word of your last post.
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Good for you!
You know what.. I didnt read one word of your last post.
thats what usually happens when ppl know they are wrong. N e way I have made my points.
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For real you guys, enough, this shit is pointless, Bez, good verse, you could use some multis to improve your flow, and try and use some more metaphors. If I may interject a little, what Sin was tryin' to say about the "keystyle elements" is that there are what I would believe to be 5 elements of a keystyle that are commonly used. Flow, punches, metas(I believe wordplay could be included in this section), multis, and personals. An honest voter will give weight to each area. So, right now, your flow is pretty good, you punches are pretty good, and you had some good personals. If you want to be a good battle MC, you need to work on the metas and multis. NEways, just have fun with it...that's it. Peace y'all
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vito tha mediator..
yo homie.. if i ever get out of hand i give you permission to keep my ass in check
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lol bez keep dissin me.. i dont really care but dissin me through karma aint the way to go
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hahahah this is great...if u guys decide to meet somewhere and fight...let me knwo where it is, id like to watch this.
peace
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LOL, I noticed that bout your karma man. I was like, how'd he drop like 6 karma points all a sudden? I don't think either of yas is outta line, I just hate to see these arguments go on and on. Bez, no offense here, but Sin, you clearly won this battle, so why waste time continuin' to argue? Save that rage for the next round, maybe you'll be battlin' me.. ;D ;)
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lol mayyyyyybe.. but i showed the verses to some online peeps and some of 'em voted for bez so i dunno.. my verse wasnt up to par.. (as usual lately) and bez' wasnt bad but hes just gonna keep bashin me so ill keep my mouth shut.. aight v.. no more arguin
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lol@droppin essays about ya life...
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lol@droppin essays about ya life...
Word :o
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I dissed you once through karma because as soon as you posted your excuses up my karma had gone from -21 to -22 so I figured fuck it. I dont waste my time doing karma lad.
vitodeluca, if multis and shit has alot to do with this battle then mack shouldent be going thru for a start. If I get thru to the next round then my verse is good be full of all this multi shit just to shut all you guys up. End of the day like I have been saying my verse was full of disses, it was a battle verse not a verse to show off how many break-ya-neck, leave ya lickin up-ma-sweat bullshit multis I can use.
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is it just me or does bez remind you of the little boy on lassie, tha black and white version of lassie that is.... can i have your autograph
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is it just me or does bez remind you of the little boy on lassie, tha black and white version of lassie that is.... can i have your autograph
Black and white, what are you like 87 years old? and no you cant!
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I dissed you once through karma because as soon as you posted your excuses up my karma had gone from -21 to -22 so I figured fuck it. I dont waste my time doing karma lad.
vitodeluca, if multis and shit has alot to do with this battle then mack shouldent be going thru for a start. If I get thru to the next round then my verse is good be full of all this multi shit just to shut all you guys up. End of the day like I have been saying my verse was full of disses, it was a battle verse not a verse to show off how many break-ya-neck, leave ya lickin up-ma-sweat bullshit multis I can use.
dude i know you aint bringin me into this shit...my verse was substandard...but the only thing it did have goin for it was multis you fuckin moron...an lmao@your example of a multi not even bein one....youza clown....stop worryin bout my verse an elevate ya own skillz...an dont even start wit that "this is bez's life stoery..blah blah blah" shit u doin to sinister cus straight up i could give a fuck less about you,your opinion or your verses...
GODDAM...drop one substandard verse...mufuckaz be runnin up in other threads talkin bout it...shudda worried bout ya own verse cus as i see it Sin got you on this one...
ay Sin...ill see you in the 2nd round playa....
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I never meant to bring u into this mack. Whatever tho.
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vitodeluca, if multis and shit has alot to do with this battle then mack shouldent be going thru for a start. If I get thru to the next round then my verse is good be full of all this multi shit just to shut all you guys up. End of the day like I have been saying my verse was full of disses, it was a battle verse not a verse to show off how many break-ya-neck, leave ya lickin up-ma-sweat bullshit multis I can use.
this is what I get for tryin' to be helpful...
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ay Sin...ill see you in the 2nd round playa....
thanks mack.. see you too.. may the best emcee win.. and hopefully m-dogg will hop on these votes..
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ay Sin...ill see you in the 2nd round playa....
thanks mack.. see you too.. may the best emcee win.. and hopefully m-dogg will hop on these votes..
wtf
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no point in beating around the bush your prob goin to win this battle thanks to bullshit keystyle elements. Shit sucks really. I just hope that if you win then I get the wildcard entry against time lock so I can add sum of these so called keystyle elements to my verse.
I just hope m-dogg doesn't just give you the win because of all this shit that has happened. If you read the verses no offence but mine is clearly better.
Mack opinion dont count for shiner does n e body else, but I got a feelin M-dogg will just vote for you n e ways cos of the elite connection
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Dude, sin said "may the best MC win", he's tryin' to be cool with ya bez, if you got a problem with Mack or me sayin that we think he'll win then fine, but don't take it out on Sin. He even said he ain't sure he's gonna win. And M-Dogg is a vet, and Sins status in Elite is questionable, so you'll get a fair shake, don't worry. Plus, if you have a problem,you have an option as listed in the rules,to have another vet take a look at both verses.
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I know, I know.
Sorry ya'll, I guess I really hate loosin!
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All i do is bitch??
lmao..
christ bez get off my nuts.. i just fucken said that i showed the battle to some online friends and some of them voted for you.. what the fuck you want from me man
and yours is clearly better? no..
and now you gonna say favored voters?
fuck you man.. im not gonna bother associating with you whatsoever.. you've been nuthin but a bitch this whole cup and startin to get old quick..
everything i say productive.. or positive.. you ignore it i guess
everything i say complainin or OFFERING SOMETHING.. you shoot it down..
get the fuck off my nuts you bitch and let the battle play out..
I DIDNT JOIN THIS CUP TO GET INTO ARGUMENTS..
and bez just cuz you may not win the first round nor get the wildcard dont mean you dont get a chance to show ya 'keystyle elements'.. calm the fuck down you takin this shit too seriously.. just go wit the flow..
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I am willing to forgive and forget but none of this leaving me lookin like the bad guy shit. Whats done is done, I have said everything that I wanted to say and I no doubt meant everything that I said. But whatever, I'm gunna be a man about this and just walk away, its not worth my time.
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leave it for what it is..
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I dissed you once through karma because as soon as you posted your excuses up my karma had gone from -21 to -22 so I figured fuck it. I dont waste my time doing karma lad.
vitodeluca, if multis and shit has alot to do with this battle then mack shouldent be going thru for a start. If I get thru to the next round then my verse is good be full of all this multi shit just to shut all you guys up. End of the day like I have been saying my verse was full of disses, it was a battle verse not a verse to show off how many break-ya-neck, leave ya lickin up-ma-sweat bullshit multis I can use.
Disses? were not looking for disses in a text battle were looking for strong points like
Good Multis
Punches & Wordplay
Decent Flow
Vocab
Your battle verse had normal "i'm a textcee" level shit your personals werent all that great and your flow wasnt that dope ... i give it to you you had a nice flow but at key points you fell off at times
MOST TEXTCEES and the good ones judge but "creativity" that comes from dope wordplay n mutlis packed in to a strong punch with a personal if added
Weak Diss Ex: You cant spit shit bitch, you suck nuts
^wow can you see the creativity in that one?^
Strong Punch Ex: Like hookers you always "suck" n' swallow jus' "cant spit"
^a lil more creativty more wordplay add multis and BAM holy fucking shit you jus' became ill^
Going on nothing but flow "might" work for audio heads but this is text
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I dissed you once through karma because as soon as you posted your excuses up my karma had gone from -21 to -22 so I figured fuck it. I dont waste my time doing karma lad.
vitodeluca, if multis and shit has alot to do with this battle then mack shouldent be going thru for a start. If I get thru to the next round then my verse is good be full of all this multi shit just to shut all you guys up. End of the day like I have been saying my verse was full of disses, it was a battle verse not a verse to show off how many break-ya-neck, leave ya lickin up-ma-sweat bullshit multis I can use.
Disses? were not looking for disses in a text battle were looking for strong points like
Good Multis
Punches & Wordplay
Decent Flow
Vocab
Your battle verse had normal "i'm a textcee" level shit your personals werent all that great and your flow wasnt that dope ... i give it to you you had a nice flow but at key points you fell off at times
MOST TEXTCEES and the good ones judge but "creativity" that comes from dope wordplay n mutlis packed in to a strong punch with a personal if added
Weak Diss Ex: You cant spit shit bitch, you suck nuts
^wow can you see the creativity in that one?^
Strong Punch Ex: Like hookers you always "suck" n' swallow jus' "cant spit"
^a lil more creativty more wordplay add multis and BAM holy fucking shit you jus' became ill^
Going on nothing but flow "might" work for audio heads but this is text
tell me then where was the example of a good multi in your example?
If thats what a multi is then as I have said I dont even need to use em, my verse was prob full of em but just not outlined. I really dont understand how that makes ya verse better.
Tell me then is this a good example?
I was once a soilder, now I'm a troop without-tha-weapon,
I'm articulate like a teacher the way I always try to teach-a-lesson,
I'm ain't one-for-messin, I figure that lifes-a-blessin,
So everyday I take it easy, I ain't into-stressin,
I ain't always been this way, life was once nottin-but-hatred,
Like rabit outter 8 Mile I was alwayd determined-to-make-it,
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they werent multis....
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they werent multis....
explain then son
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this is an example of multis
Im raising-the-stakes,blazin-the-fakes
so youngun dont try ivadin-our-space
raising,blazin,invadin all rhyme as do stakes,fakes,space
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this is an example of multis
Im raising-the-stakes,blazin-the-fakes
so youngun dont try ivadin-our-space
raising,blazin,invadin all rhyme as do stakes,fakes,space
rightington, I will try to use that method in my future rhymes. Cheers mackstein
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Nice examples mack ... cleary
Adding them with wordplay n a strong (personal) punch will make a jaw drop and (if none of your multis are forced then) a great flow
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this is an example of multis
Im raising-the-stakes,blazin-the-fakes
so youngun dont try ivadin-our-space
raising,blazin,invadin all rhyme as do stakes,fakes,space
Mack aren't multies supposed to have the same number of syllables? Therefor raising-the-stakes(4), and invadin-our-space(5) wouldn't be multies? Dunno that was my understanding.
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this is an example of multis
Im raising-the-stakes,blazin-the-fakes
so youngun dont try ivadin-our-space
raising,blazin,invadin all rhyme as do stakes,fakes,space
Mack aren't multies supposed to have the same number of syllables? Therefor raising-the-stakes(4), and invadin-our-space(5) wouldn't be multies? Dunno that was my understanding.
syllables dont really matter just so each harsh sound rhymes.. sorta hard to explain
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Well fuck me, I wont try so hard making my multies the same # of syllables :).
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lol its dont have to be textbook shit either.. look at deadsouljah verses..
his multis dont rhyme each syllable by far.. but he can make it work
everyone got they own style man.. just find yours.
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when is the voting going to be done? for yallz verses?
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fuck man i know...im itchin to get on with this...but its all good, Lost has shit to do im sure.
peace
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Sinister said before everyone has there own style, my style was in my verse I dropped.
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closing the thread.. i made a new one....