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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: T.J. on July 13, 2003, 03:52:19 AM
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projected June MC of the month VS me...... whoopty whoop
15 bars max
first to 5 votes
4 votes to 0 = KO
no crew votes, no bitch ass dickriding votes
no time limit, but verse should be in at a reasonable time
lets go
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WARNING going against Mack you need a glock-an-firm-hands..
cus "i sonned T.J but he dont know yet" like i-popped-in-sperm-banks..
like id let this "nerd-shank me",newbie gotta "start-from-scratch"..
in this art-of-rap,this artist-wack,aint gotta ask-him-that..
imma get this virgin pop-his-cherry,you fuckin rat-faced-pussy..
so i guess T.J stand fa Tom-an-Jerry,this cats-placed-as-rookie..
goin against a notorious-fiend,defeatin-Mack,a glorious-dream..
but now imma heat-this-cat,leave him tore-at-the-seams..
fa speakin-wack,if you gunna hate on VDK at least be-blatant..
all up in keystyle like "whoo look at me imma FREE-AGENT"..
wheres ya self-esteem,cant find yaself-a-team..
you bein hot is a day-dream spit original lines that stay-seen..
I'll Leave U "Bleeding" without Giving a "Fuck" like I Stuck my "Dick" in ya "Spleen"..LMAO
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poor Mack, couldnt be hot if i superglued him across a stove/
but ur dope in a sense, cut up and smoked by millions across the globe/
got caught biting, disappeared, then returned from his quick hiding/1
trying to re-enter unnoticed? caught all our eyes like flickering lighting/1
WCC's Dominant Kru? didnt ya momma teach you, tall tales arent cool/2
the whole of VDK's full of fags like an all male art school/
like sprite "image is nothing" so let the hyphen button hibernate/3
even if you put on lipstick when u spit, u cant put dashes in a cypher mate/
my gloves are ready, get out the gay bar and take that damn lycra off/
your punches sound like they were written by bill gates, they microsoft/4
woke up on the wrong side of the bed, slobberin on the mic like a dick/
how can u be from Rock City when u get snapped like a twig? 5
like ja rule says "ITS MURDAH!!"
1 -anyone whos been around a while should know the story....
2 -look in his sig
3 -sprite's slogan "image is nothing, thirst is everything" lol
4 -microsoft... small + soft... get it?
5 -he from detroit
fuck it.... im gonna spit this shit in audio in a few days too... i went metaphor and simile crazy on that one
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I'll Leave U "Bleeding" without Giving a "Fuck" like I Stuck my "Dick" in ya "Spleen"..LMAO
rodzilla's line..... *sigh*
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lol wtf........fuckin faggots........sup wit tha rematch mack? lol
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lol wtf........fuckin faggots........sup wit tha rematch mack? lol
ya know i was thinkin the same thang myself...holla whenever you want it....
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lol wtf........fuckin faggots........sup wit tha rematch mack? lol
whos that addressed to?
anyways we need votes
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Macks verse was pretty good with the flow and his rhyme scheme, but it seemed to be getting out of hand.
TJs was good aswell, not as complicated in the rhyme scheme but the personals were pretty hard along with the punches.
Vote: TJ
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OK battle..
Mack - not hard hittin at all really. A clever rhyme scheme but for the most part its just another mediocre verse. Few personals and the multis werent on point. I would think you would come harder.
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fa speakin-wack,if you gunna hate on VDK at least be-blatant..
all up in keystyle like "whoo look at me imma FREE-AGENT"..
wheres ya self-esteem,cant find yaself-a-team..
T.J - Aight verse.. you stuck with ya style similar to Mack. Ok metas, and multis were decent. Makin fun of him usin a hyphon isnt very strong but at least its a personal. I didnt get this line at all..
even if you put on lipstick when u spit, u cant put dashes in a cypher mate/
The microsoft line is ok, sorta played out and a good line to end it with.
Fav. Line -
woke up on the wrong side of the bed, slobberin on the mic like a dick/
how can u be from Rock City when u get snapped like a twig?
Numbaz -
Mack - 3.5 / 5
T.J - 3.8 / 5
Mack you can do much better, ya multis didnt match up at all really and T.J had some clever lines.. I think another rematch is needed after this and mack you should come harder..
Vote - <the answer>
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The microsoft line is ok, sorta played out and a good line to end it with.
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woke up on the wrong side of the bed, slobberin on the mic like a dick/
how can u be from Rock City when u get snapped like a twig?
played out?? ive never heard anything similar
and i thought those lines were the weakest of my verse.... i liked "the whole of VDK's full of fags like an all male art school/".....lol....
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Mack - good verse with ur regular style and ur good flow and whatnot, multis's are there like usual. but this isnt ur best, ive seen a lot better.
Fav Line - goin against a notorious-fiend,defeatin-Mack,a glorious-dream..
but now imma heat-this-cat,leave him tore-at-the-seams..
T.J - good verse kid. i liked it. i thought the punches were hard and the personals were welll done. i just felt ur verse more.
Fav Line's - the whole of VDK's full of fags like an all male art school/
like sprite "image is nothing" so let the hyphen button hibernate/
vote = T.J fo sheezay
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The microsoft line is ok, sorta played out and a good line to end it with.
Fav. Line -
woke up on the wrong side of the bed, slobberin on the mic like a dick/
how can u be from Rock City when u get snapped like a twig?
and i thought those lines were the weakest of my verse.... i liked "the whole of VDK's full of fags like an all male art school/".....lol....
i didnt like the line before the last one but the question endin i liked..
fags and gays is gettin played out though but its always nice to put a twist on it..
i've heard microsoft here and there
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The microsoft line is ok, sorta played out and a good line to end it with.
Fav. Line -
woke up on the wrong side of the bed, slobberin on the mic like a dick/
how can u be from Rock City when u get snapped like a twig?
and i thought those lines were the weakest of my verse.... i liked "the whole of VDK's full of fags like an all male art school/".....lol....
i didnt like the line before the last one but the question endin i liked..
fags and gays is gettin played out though but its always nice to put a twist on it..
i've heard microsoft here and there
fair enough.....
3-0 we still need votes
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come on.... VoTe!!!!
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yo i don't know what happened to mack :-\
and to think i was voted to try to let u in the hall of fame...
that shit u spit was sad homie lol
had no flow at all
T.J's shit flowed well much better and came together better
i'mma have to go with
TJ
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T.J knocks out Mack....nice job T.J, props.
peace
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yo thx for the battle mack
peace