West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on October 04, 2003, 04:17:42 AM
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/notoriousmack.htm (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/notoriousmack.htm)
done it in one take so some words wrong an i fucked up the beat at the end so it sorta switches ta accapella...
i know it aint tha best but could i get some constructive crit..be honest i aint gunna wile out if ya say it ass...
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/notoriousmack.htm (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/notoriousmack.htm)
done it in one take so some words wrong an i fucked up the beat at the end so it sorta switches ta accapella...
i know it aint tha best but could i get some constructive crit..be honest i aint gunna wile out if ya say it ass...
you're pretty good.. you got a nice flow
what you need to do is to lower the volume of the beat, and try not to rap too loud now and then
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lol@ the shout out to rod at the begining... anyway yeah u had some tight lyrix was coo for your first recording got alot to learn about recording though ;D
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yeah i know....that acid pro pretty damn confusin tho :-\
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i was feelin this.... good shit mackaroni
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yeah that was a pretty nice audio, nice lyrics, flow was pretty much on point all the way through, nice one.
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work on delivery an emotion... even out the beat an ya tone over it, it was pretty good for a first time i was listen to the roccy diss, had nice lyrics but it didnt seem like you were getting into it(emotion) go all out on it, give it every thing you have(delivery) but i dont mean scream jus put ya heart into it
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Is that the same beat they use for the second battle in "8 Mile" ? If so what song is that from?
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yeah..its dead prez ft onyx-last dayz