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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: PoTek on October 14, 2003, 07:25:00 PM

Title: New. Freestyle.
Post by: PoTek on October 14, 2003, 07:25:00 PM

yo i'm new here and shit...so i got litte free time and busted this rhyme
tell me what you guys think

yo this by first freestyle
and i aint goin shoke like that dude from 8 mile
cause i be split'n words fast like download'n files
what my name b? Potek
i be like big l, catching wreck on any casette deck
all i want is the bitchs,cars and my paycheck
fuck wit me, i'll snap your fuckin neck

Title: Re:New. Freestyle.
Post by: Reef on October 15, 2003, 01:34:38 AM

NOt bad,.. Try and make your shit longer..

Title: Re:New. Freestyle.
Post by: bez on October 15, 2003, 05:18:40 AM

reminds me of me when I got started.  More complexity needed homie.

Title: Re:New. Freestyle.
Post by: PoTek on October 15, 2003, 01:18:34 PM

yah it is kinda simple
well practise makes perfect :P

Title: Re:New. Freestyle.
Post by: |JEM|ILL| on October 15, 2003, 03:30:21 PM

Quote from: PoTek on October 15, 2003, 01:18:34 PM

yah it is kinda simple
well practise makes perfect :P

try workin on ya flow a bit...toss in some different rhyme scheme and multis too homie.