West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on December 18, 2004, 04:50:25 AM
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The King of key'in, check the horse an carriage,
Cos my flows are deeper than Atlantis, an I ain't embarressed,
To tell ya how this is, tell ya the reason I spit,
Let you all know how I became King of this shit,
Started off writing rhymes aged thirteen in spare time,
Excelled in my gift, continued through the years pen'in lines,
While peeps I know were sniffin lines an hoppin tracks I was chillen,
Puttin my thoughts in lines an tracks cos I was unwillin,
To give my life to the streets an copy friends that aint real,
Peeps who compete wit each other an couldnt give a fuck how ya feel,
I knew the deal, see I was intelligent beyond my years,
Stayed off the streets as much as poss to be boss of my peers,
Jesus had my back, but I wasn't really religious, its complicated,
Life I fucking hated, through school I was full of hatred, felt naked,
In the classroom where I sat cold on my own and lonely,
Friends kinda picked on me, but none of em really knew me, truly,
So I'd write em up when I got home and publish the rhymes online,
Kept the link to myself though, and I felt fine,
Now aged 19 and still writin like lightnin, so strikin,
Like 5 rhyme books, over 250 verses all mine no bitin,
Now on more serious topics, like the starving kids and war,
Sprinted up the stairway and slammed God's door, cos I got more,
Things to achieve, more titles to hold,
I'm currently at bronze in life, but when I pass I'll be gold!
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dope
this was way better then your christmas shit imo, lol
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That's a tight verse, but becareful about claiming king. It's all good though, you have improved so much from when you first started putting verses down here.
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Cheers.
Cheers M!