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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: thizzmaster on June 06, 2005, 12:23:43 AM

Title: S 2 da iz A C 2 da tizown
Post by: thizzmaster on June 06, 2005, 12:23:43 AM

sac town is da place i rep
age 15 and i spit da best
ppl here my rhymes and dey become amazed
da kid so young  but he continues 2 blaze 8)
u can spit ur hardest i wont be fazed
cuz in da end im da1 wit da pasin grade
not much 2 say wen u touch da mike
ill leave u stumblin and fallin like iron mike
im not mac dre but u can mr furly
cuz afta da battle ill be gettin bossed by ur gurlie
ima end dis rap off nice and sweet
jut rember da name j roc dats me

Title: Re: S 2 da iz A C 2 da tizown
Post by: DiSSENT on June 06, 2005, 08:12:27 AM

Somewhat simplistic rhymin', but we all gotta start somewhere. Keep on writing & improving/elevating your skills, homie. At 15, I wasn't spittin' much different..just don't quit. You got potential..stay up - Peace*

Title: Re: S 2 da iz A C 2 da tizown
Post by: K0NfUzIoN on June 06, 2005, 11:15:03 AM

ya keep it up and try to get deeper.. only real complaint is u stole the furly/girlie from fellin myself... yadidimean?