new shit ...comment plz

[k-i-d-rap]

do u feel it yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
its the G.A.N.G ..S.T.A baby boy
black street , mad thugs , palestina rappers against a mic.
arabian kids gonna sh0t yo ass up dats game stage or mic.  

when i say the revalotion start u gonna belive me along
i came holding pains runin in my blood and im strong
i admit whats i done no matta whats i face its for fun
each one of those boys , he can b tha king oh lil pun
belive in whats he can't be , im aint gangsta but i have strong tonght
yo little punk cloose your eayes tell me whats u see , whats u wanna b
whats u dreamin every night , whats u see , spread yo shit
b tha man who dont regret on somethin done it a flow he sit it
if tha life mixed wiz bastered , wearing blue , jump on my dick
i sick my life , its hard , weard looke u get , open the box , click click
ANother victim on a coffin burried on the earth 3 mitters and 2 rocks tones
ova your head , you wont to sleep feelin darkness around and askin yoy self
in my life whats i do  , good or bad , where i'll go hell or heaven its only 7
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[Mack Savage]

wonder how it would sound over a beat huh..