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morbidenigma

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Inspiration
« on: March 19, 2009, 11:02:04 AM »
sumink more on the serious side

any feedback welcome

in desperation we need inspiration in our fights
guiding us in darknesss, showing us the light
sensible sane souls required in times of madness
suggesting, manifesting ways to bring happiness
so we envision decisions with accurate precision
the incisiveness for pleasant futures with visions
individuals who can be acceptable older portrayals
role models who can eradicate negativity as a whole
breathing life into lives, creating heat like a fire
encouraging to further acquire and reach higher
a potent force with resilience and mental strength
transpiring elation for the length of our extent
bringing wisdom as a mentor, counsellor or teacher
the correct directions, without a complex superior
how to find whats lost, how we can all be entwined
how we can all be kind and leave past grudges behind
 

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Re: Inspiration
« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2009, 11:15:16 AM »
felt it. Very nice post. Would of liked to of seen another verse though or something.
 

morbidenigma

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Re: Inspiration
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 05:24:20 PM »
safe 4 dat

just aint had the 'inspiration' to write another verse yet