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Inspectah
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I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 21, 2003, 03:05:08 PM »
This is the only way i can get shit outta my system//
All i need is someone to open they ears and just listen//
I wanted to drive through life, you'd be the key, i'd be the piston//
I only wanted people to realise how shit affects me and support my decisions//
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Im tired of people trying to run my life, and set me paths to follow//
Im tired of people taking me for a gullable idiot, and asking for stuff to borow//
Im tired of people taking advantage, and not giving anything back//
Im tired of people faking and twisting my words and never being on track//
Im tired of trying my best to make people happy, and get no recognition//
Im tired of putting my feelings aside, and it eventually creating an infliction//
Im tired of feeling the after effects of my feelings and emotions//
Im tired of living my life, and getting haulted by an overload of comotion//
Im tired of people slagging me off, behind my back, and denying shit//
Im tired of being made to look stupid, infront of people and relying on wit//
Im tired of defending other people, and leaving my self vunerable//
Im tired of putting other people first, who in the end, aint deservable//
Im just tired, of living the way i do, but i dont wanna change//
Im gonna make a new resolution, and enjoy life again, fuck it all, live out the pain//
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gyrl1da
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 21, 2003, 04:12:28 PM »
i like how ya flow is poetic... it's thought provoking.
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TiNmaN
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 21, 2003, 06:39:32 PM »
That was a dope piece, original, was feeling it, much props.
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TheSheriff
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 22, 2003, 11:12:22 AM »
Very nice.
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'Illicit'
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 25, 2003, 10:07:24 AM »
yo dawg this was ill! i liked this one, suggest this one for keystyle of the month unless your drop even hotter ish
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 25, 2003, 02:25:49 PM »
dam u must be relaly tired. Nice piece
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__kaLipZo__
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 25, 2003, 07:51:53 PM »
Dope rhyme structure, emotional at times, I liked it. Keep em comin
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Inspectah
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 26, 2003, 03:37:30 AM »
Thnx for the feedback, its all appreciated.. lately my keystyles been about how im feeling, and they get shit off ma chest, aslong as people see what im going thru at the time.. thnx anyways..
If theres anymore feedback that would be most appreciated!
Peace!
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Disceptive AssAssin
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Re:I:// Tired... (Keystyle)
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March 26, 2003, 06:07:44 AM »
word i was feelin this one... im tired...
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