Author Topic: Wheres The Luv? Everyfuckinwhere... Its just not the normal type of love  (Read 131 times)

Reef

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tha chairman is here, ima begin to run this fuckin game
dont need complex multis, or 10thousnad posts by my name
i write, sometimes out of spite, just to give the wacks ones somethin' to bite
lemme shed some light on this sitation
people run up in here cryin, takin all this shit seriously
chill out a bit people or someone is gonna die mysteriously
this aint a threat, this is a fuckin gaurntee,
im gonna re-invent this board, even if all it takes is jus lil old me
ya see, ima be what i wanna be, do what i wanna do, say what i wanna say
cause at the end of the day, y'all are brave if you step on my grave
if you talk shit on my name it must mean you gotta mental deficiency
but i spit sufficiency to re-create my DNA ino a different-me
i can switch-styles and ideas quicker than a electromagnetic relay
while your rhymes are pathetic, synthetic and thats just what he says
really, your stupid to even try and take me down
you'd need more than 2 brain cells to make me frown
sometimes im useless, others im poetic
but sometimes i spark with energy - im kenetic
i numb my opponents, im walkin anesthetic with the ability to take ya neck and snap it
then wrap it in tun foil, while i rap about the size of your mommas coil
i dont even know what the fuck im saying and how?
damn.. that kid just took my now.. COME BACK BITCH BLOW BLOW BLOW
 

Reef

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I know its alot to ask but could i get at least one constructive reply?
 

Lord Funk

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if you talk shit on my name it must mean you gotta mental deficiency
but i spit sufficiency to re-create my DNA ino a different-me

Love that line mate.
"I fornicate with porn stars, sluts and strippers.
 Well - only on the Internet but what's the difference?"

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bez

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I have seen much better from you mayne.  It was good and all but most lines where far to simplistic and old school.  There where a few dope lines like the DNA bit and:

but sometimes i spark with energy - im kenetic
i numb my opponents, im walkin anesthetic with the ability to take ya neck and snap it
then wrap it in tun foil, while i rap about the size of your mommas coil

That was quite dope and the first 2 lines where also quite dope but apart from that I wasnt feelin the whole rhyme to much.  Keep spitting tho dawg, sorry I didnt reply for a while I been busy of the last few days finishing college work and shittttttttt.