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Storm
Muthafuckin' OG
Posts: 353
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My First Write Up
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July 23, 2003, 09:26:14 PM »
Give me some feedback please...
Lyrical tactics make my rhymes classic, jurassic/
I stay on top like an attic/
I’ve had it…of whack niggaz who try to start static/
don’t know im more dangerous than acrobatics with this automatic (BANG!)/
shit I do drugs but I aint no motherfuckin addict/
I’m an alcoholic, call it what you wanna call it/
I got a gun slut, Empty out your wallet, all of it/
Now let me back it up now and introduce my name/
I’m that motherfucker
Storm
takin over this game/
I’m not in it for the cash, im in it for the fame/
Getting tired of all yall rappin bout the same thangs/
shits lame, but I don’t blame/
I just claim…that im the best…so don’t contest/
Or else you’ll need to wear a vest/
So I suggest…yall settle for less, admit that im blessed/
And let your motherfuckin mouth rest…
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abstruse
Muthafuckin' OG
Posts: 335
Karma: -1
Re:My First Write Up
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July 23, 2003, 10:21:27 PM »
Good Job if its your first write up. Keep dropping.
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VDK REPPIN!
T.J.
Wanksta
Muthafuckin' Don!
Posts: 2072
Karma: -18
my deck
Re:My First Write Up
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July 24, 2003, 01:20:31 AM »
Quote from: Storm on July 23, 2003, 09:26:14 PM
I’m an alcoholic, call it what you wanna call it/
heehee..... xzibit
besides that, not bad for a first spit.
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Slim-x
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Re:My First Write Up
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July 26, 2003, 02:59:28 PM »
It Was Cool But Ta Me It Sounded Like Eminem.........
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Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..
'G'
Posts: 232
Karma: 4
Hip Hop, is everything around you
Re:My First Write Up
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July 26, 2003, 03:04:11 PM »
aight shit dogg keep droppin
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Last Edit: July 26, 2003, 03:10:33 PM by Proph Tha Chef
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